And if you haven’t heard, then you haven’t been paying attention. Because I’ve been talking about it. A lot. And writing about it. A lot. Which I intend to keep doing until March 2027. And beyond. (Don’t say you weren’t warned.)

But for now, September 1, 2026 marks the official beginning of the New York City school admissions season. Parents are sharpening their pencils (more like warming up their computer keys) and getting ready to write mandatory essays summarizing their child’s greatest achievements to date. Which, considering some are applying two year olds to pre-school, can be a bit of a challenge.

After 20 years of working as a school admissions consultant, I have honed 5 tips all families can apply to their individual essays. And all writers can utilize for their works in progress.

Ready? Here we go!

Rule #1: Why You?

The first thing admissions officers ask parents at a private school interview is, “Tell me about your child.” The problem is, the children applying to private school in NYC are much more alike than they are different. They are the most privileged children living in the most privileged city in the most privileged country in the world. They all play soccer, and take swimming lessons, and speak a second language, and build models of the subway system out of blocks and cushions and know the names of the dinosaurs and the planets in the solar system, and act out the stories they read in books, and beg for logic and math puzzles, and love their museum science classes.

As I tell parents, there is nothing wrong with any of the above. It is perfectly developmentally appropriate.

But there is nothing unique about it either. And for schools where over 1000 students apply for maybe 50 available spots, what you want to do is make your child and family stand out. Think about what makes them uniquely them. Think about what you all can bring to the school community that no other family can.

It’s the same with writing books: There are no new stories under the sun. But the way you tell a familiar story, can be. You need to make that clear.

Rule #2: Why Us?

You would be amazed by how many families apply to NYC schools not knowing a thing about them beyond it’s the one everybody says you should apply to. I have had families apply to progressive schools, then wonder why the kids weren’t memorizing multiplication facts? I have had families apply to traditional schools then wonder why the day was so structured? I have had families apply to single-sex schools unable to articulate a single benefit of the model and, my personal favorite, the family who applied to a Jewish school then asked me, “Why do they spend so much time learning Hebrew?”

NYC schools are very proud of their respective unique selling propositions. If you can’t articulate why you value what they value, you are not going to get very far. (As my oldest son smirks, “Everybody wants a warm, nurturing, accepting school with sky-high test scores, above-grade academic standards, and top-notch college placement but absolutely no pressure on the child so they can be exactly who they want to be.” If that’s what you write in your statement, they’ll know you haven’t researched their particular school at all. Oh, and also — that school doesn’t exist.)

It’s the same with writing books: If you can’t convince an editor or agent that you understand why they’re the best fit for your project, it won’t go well. And let’s not even get into the Herculean task of convincing readers that they should buy your book instead of the hundreds of similar ones available.

Rule #3: Show Don’t Tell

I read hundreds of parent statements every season. Ninety percent of them begin, “Molly is bright and curious.” I believe you. All children are bright and curious. Yet you have told me nothing unique about Molly.

I need to see Molly being bright and curious. I need to hear stories that will bring Molly’s brightness and curiosity to light.

An exercise I suggest is parents imagine a virtual, obnoxious me sitting on their shoulder, kind of like the angel and devil from cartoons. Every time you make a statement about your child, pretend you hear me sneering, in the most obnoxious voice possible, “Oh, yeah? I don’t believe you. Prove it!”

It’s the same with writing books: If you don’t know this particular rule by now….

Rule #4: Speak for Yourself

Instead of giving me your opinion of your child’s giftedness (since 86 percent of NYC kids are classified as gifted, odds are good your kid is one of them), let your child tell me, in their own words.

Admissions officers want to observe how your child’s mind works. Direct quotes where they make connections between disparate things and play with language is an excellent way to demonstrate that. Examples include:

• The little boy who, when told, “Mommy’s parents are my in-laws,” asked his dad, “And if they were bad, would they be your outlaws?”

• The child who observed, “Ish means not really. So why do we say we are Jew-ish, when we’re really Jews?”

• And, in the most NYC phrase ever uttered, the boy who, when told that DNA was a helix connected, “Oh, like the Guggenheim….”

It’s the same with writing books: If you want me to believe your character is brilliant, have them do and say brilliant things. (But make sure they are truly brilliant. Parents frequently don’t have enough frame of reference to know if their child is truly advanced. Oftentimes, I have to tell families that what they think is extraordinary about their child is actually pretty typical.)

Rule #5: Nice and Easy

Yes, your child is brilliant. (See the 86 percent statistic above.) But if schools only wanted brilliant students, they could fill their classes many times over. As an admissions director once told me, “I am so tired of kids who come in having memorized the periodic table, but don’t know how to put on their jackets.”

My husband, who has been an NYC teacher for multiple decades, and who himself attended what is considered THE most coveted school for brilliant children in the city, reminds, “They are not looking for the smartest kids. They are looking for the kids who are easiest to teach.”

The same goes for parents. The schools are looking for people who they will want to spend the next six, nine, thirteen years of their lives with. And they are pointedly avoiding those who they think will be in their office on a weekly basis, asking for exceptions, making demands, and insisting the rules don’t apply to them. (On every school tour, there is always the parent who asks, “But what do you for for the truly, truly advanced child?” Do not be that parent. If you, nonetheless, choose to be that parent, do not tell them you know me.)

The schools de facto assume your children are brilliant and you are high-achieving. What they want you to demonstrate is how pleasant you are to be around.

It’s the same with writing books: Agents and editors want to enjoy their work. They want to enjoy working with you. Don’t give them any reason to believe otherwise….

So there you have it: 5 tips for writing private school application essays (which also apply to writing books).

What do you think? Should I combine my two businesses? (I kind of already have. Have I mentioned the novel I have coming out in March? Which you can pre-order, here….?)

Last week, I highlighted “Tom from Goodreads” and “his” assistant, “Janice.” (Yes, every word I put in parentheses deserves the side-eye.)

This week, well… see for yourselves… (as always, my comments in italics.)

From Sunday Confidence at hello.sundayconfidence.inkimpact@gmail.com: Dear Alina,

My name is Sunday Confidence, a contributor at Ink to Impact Club. (I strongly suspect both of these facts are untrue.)

After reviewing hundreds of titles this season, your book, The Nesting Dolls, stood out and has been selected as the central title for our upcoming August International Readers’ Roundtable. (Ooooh….)

Each month, we highlight one book for in-depth discussion and reader engagement across our global community. Your work caught our attention for its originality, creative depth, and strong connection with readers.

Here’s what this selection includes:

• Editorial Discussion – A live panel exploring your themes, storytelling approach, and narrative style (remember this part)

• Broader Reach – Thoughtful reviews and mentions across platforms like Goodreads, Amazon, and Instagram

• Reader Engagement – Connecting your book with an active international audience through our reader network and newsletter (and definitely this part)

We would be glad to have you join us for a brief 15-minute Guest Q&A during the session. If you’re unavailable, the discussion will still go ahead with full coverage of your work.

You can view previous sessions here: https://inktoimpactclub.com/events

If you’re open to having The Nesting Dolls included in our August selection, simply reply and I’ll share the next steps. For any additional questions, you’re also welcome to reach our founder directly at hello.inktoimpact@gmail.com.

Warm regards,

Sunday Confidence

hello.inktoimpact@gmail.com (So… Sunday is “our founder” then? Why the two different email addresses and making it sound like they are two different people? This scam is already going very badly!)

Alina Adams: Of course, Sunday, happy to participate.

I charge $360 an hour for personal appearances. Please make your payment via the site, and we can discuss the next steps.

Looking forward!

SC: Dear Alina,

Thank you so much for getting back to me so quickly! We are thrilled that you are interested in joining us.

I do want to gently clarify how our Readers’ Roundtable operates. As a reader-driven community, we do not hire authors for paid speaking engagements. Instead, our monthly spotlight is a collaborative feature designed entirely to support you by putting our platform’s full weight behind your book.

When we feature a title, our goal is to generate massive momentum for the author. By allowing The Nesting Dolls to be our August selection, you can expect:

• A Surge in Book Sales: Our international community members actively purchase their own copies to read along and participate in the discussion.

• Massive Organic Exposure: Your book will be spotlighted across our active reader networks, getting your name in front of a highly targeted, global audience.

• A Wave of Authentic Reviews: We encourage our members to leave thoughtful reviews on Amazon, Goodreads, and Bookstagram, which is vital for triggering algorithms and driving long-term organic sales.

The 15-minute Q&A is completely optional; it is simply a bonus platform we offer our featured authors to connect directly with fans who are already buying and championing their work.

We truly believe The Nesting Dolls is something special and would love to dedicate our August campaign to it. Should we move forward with featuring your book as our August selection, or would you prefer a brief chat to discuss how we can best highlight your work?

Warm regards,

Sunday Confidence

(Blah, blah, blah, lots of boring, generic back and forth snipped wherein I tell them I will not be paying for anything but am happy to participate in their alleged free option:)

SC: Our panel looks forward to featuring The Nesting Dolls in our independent reader discussion as scheduled.

AA: Yes, go ahead, and make sure you send me the link, so I can see how it goes and if your platform is worth sharing with my fellow authors.

As I’m sure you know, the internet is full of scammers who lie to authors about featuring their books, then steal their money and never deliver.

To make sure that isn’t you, I will need to see proof of discussion before I tell all my fellow authors to use your services.

SC: Thank you for your response. We completely understand your caution, given the sheer amount of online noise, it is smart to protect your work and hold promotional platforms to high standards.

To clarify how our community operates: the Ink to Impact Club is a reader-led network that operates independently. When a title like The Nesting Dolls is nominated by our readers, our team puts our platform’s full weight behind it, at zero cost to the author (!!!!!!!). We host these sessions strictly to celebrate exceptional books, build genuine reader engagement, and drive momentum.

To ensure we showcase The Nesting Dolls with the highest quality and visual appeal across our platforms, we usually like (I am sure they do) to include a couple of key media assets:

1. A Visual Narrative Teaser (a high-resolution short video or cinematic book trailer)

2. A Custom Feature Display Banner (a high-resolution graphic banner for our newsletter and community showcase)

If you already have these available, you are welcome to send them over to us! However, if you don’t have them on hand, there’s no need to worry at all, our internal creative team will happily design and produce these for you as part of your feature.

Would you prefer to send us your existing visual teaser and banner graphics, or would you like our creative team to put those together for you?

AA: Go ahead and put the creatives elements together. (Hey, they offered!)

SC: Thank you for confirming. We’re happy to move forward with The Nesting Dolls for the August Readers’ Roundtable.

Before our creative team begins production, I want to clarify one important point so everything is completely transparent regarding the creative materials.

The Readers’ Roundtable selection and book discussion itself are complimentary. However, the professional creative production is a separate service because it involves our creative team designing and preparing promotional assets specifically for your book. (I see….)

Because you are the author whose work has been selected for our August Readers’ Roundtable, we are extending a special discounted author rate for the creative package (I thought all authors have to be selected, so who is the discount not for and who pays full price?). This discounted rate is being offered specifically to selected authors so they can have professionally prepared promotional materials without paying our standard production rate. (Standard rates for what then?)

If you would like our team to produce the materials, I can send you the exact discounted package price for your review and approval before any work begins. No production charge would be made without your confirmation. (And, I presume, without my payment information. Which is a pretty large part of the process.)

Your discounted creative package would include:

• Custom Feature Display Banner — a professionally designed graphic created around The Nesting Dolls for our newsletter, reader community, and promotional showcase.

• Visual Narrative Teaser — a short cinematic promotional video designed to capture the atmosphere, themes, and appeal of your book.

• Book Showcase Presentation — professional preparation and formatting of your book information and visual materials for the August feature.

• Promotional Placement — use of the approved creative materials across the relevant Ink to Impact Club promotional channels connected with the Readers’ Roundtable.

• Reader Discovery — positioning of The Nesting Dolls within our reader discussion so participating readers can discover and engage with the book.

• Post-Feature Proof — once the discussion is completed, we can provide you with the published session link so you can independently review how the book was presented.

Again, there is no speaking fee or appearance fee for the Readers’ Roundtable itself. The cost would only apply if you choose to have our creative team produce these professional promotional materials for you.

Would you like me to send you the special discounted author price and complete cost breakdown so you can review and approve it before our creative team begins production?

AA: No, thank you. Just go ahead with the promotion without any professionally created materials.

Send me the link when it’s ready! I can’t wait to share your services with all of my writing friends!

SC: Dear Alina,

I’m pleased to confirm that The Nesting Dolls will be featured in our August Readers’ Roundtable this Saturday, August 22.

The reader discussion and spotlight will proceed as scheduled, and we’re looking forward to putting your book in front of our reading community.

As requested, once the feature is live, I’ll send you the direct link so you can view the discussion and see how the book was presented.

Thank you again for allowing us to include The Nesting Dolls in this month’s selection.

Are you ready for us to spotlight The Nesting Dolls this Saturday?

AA: This is incredibly exciting news, Sunday! Please send me the link once it is live, and I will share it far and wide to promote your group!

(Two days later…)

AA: Hi, Sunday -

Please send the direct link from yesterday. I can’t wait to share it with my readers!

(A few hours later….)

AA: I just went to your website and didn’t see my book anywhere. I searched and everything, and nothing came up.

I am so disappointed. You promised!!!

SC: Dear Alina,

I’m truly sorry for the disappointment and for not communicating this to you sooner. You were right to expect an update from me, and I apologize for leaving you without an explanation after you were expecting the link.

Unfortunately, I was not available on Saturday, and another author’s book was featured during that session as part of a separate paid arrangement. I should have informed you beforehand that the schedule had changed, and I sincerely apologize for that oversight. (Were they expecting me not to check? Did they need more time to dummy up the alleged discussion evidence? If so, why offer a hard date? So disorganized!)

I would, however, like to make this right by offering The Nesting Dolls the opportunity to be included in tomorrow’s upcoming literary spotlight, August 25. We have another feature going live tomorrow, and if you are still interested, we can work to have your book included while the placement is still available. (So originally my feature didn’t go up because another paid promotion took its place, and now my feature can go up because there is another paid promotion at the same time? What?)

Because the schedule is being finalized now, I would need your confirmation as soon as possible so I can secure the available spotlight placement for The Nesting Dolls before the lineup is closed.

Would you like me to reserve tomorrow’s spotlight for The Nesting Dolls and move forward with getting your book included?

AA: Sure, go ahead

(Next day…)

AA: Can’t wait to see today’s spotlight, Sunday.

Make sure to send me the link so I can share with my readers!

SC: Dear Alina,

Thank you for checking in, and I completely understand how excited you are to see today’s spotlight.

I want to sincerely apologize for the unexpected delay. We had an emergency come up that prevented us from connecting our readers to the live session as scheduled (I ask again, why offer a hard date if they know they can’t deliver? Who is this supposed to fool and how does this make them money?). Rather than proceed with a session that could not properly accommodate the reader community, we have postponed the spotlight and rescheduled it to take place in approximately 5 hours.

We are working to make sure everything is properly in place before the session begins. As soon as the live session and feature link are ready, I will send the direct link to you immediately so you can view the spotlight and share it with your readers.

In the meantime, The Nesting Dolls has also been added to our club’s bookstore, where members can discover the book and access it if they would like to purchase a copy:

Ink to Impact Club: https://inktoimpactclub.com/

Ink to Impact Club Bookstore: https://inktoimpactclub.com/bookstore

So even before the live spotlight begins, your book is already available within our club’s bookstore for readers who want to discover or purchase it.

(Fun fact: It is not. Which makes sense since the authors of the emails are not connected to the actual site. Seriously, did they not think I’d check? Just how dumb do these scammers expect authors to be???)

AA: Yes, please, let me know as soon as it's live!

SC: Hi Alina,

🔗 https://meet.google.com/ysu-ubeh-wyp

it's a meeting link and space that's the link to join for the discussion. Over 20 readers are actively waiting for you to hear from you. (Did their grammar just take a nosedive? Does ChatGPT not do these short missives? Did they actually have to respond themselves?)

Our readers are waiting for you to join, make sure to be available soon before they start leaving. (Yup, definitely a grammar breakdown.)

AA: OK, I'm here... nothing is happening...

SC: You haven't join (sic) the call yet, open your camera so our readers can see you (I have joined the call, and they would only know that my camera wasn’t on if they could see that I was, in fact, already there.)

AA: No. Nobody else has their camera on, I’d feel silly turning on mine.

Nobody is saying anything. You said there’d be a discussion about my book. I am sitting quietly and listening, but nobody is talking.

(But that’s not all! There were ostensibly 27 readers in this spontaneous “book club discussion.” Not only did every single “person” have their camera off, but the few who had profile pictures featured the exact same clip art photos plastered on every scammer’s Facebook and LinkedIn. “Sunday” was not even leading the discussion. A man who failed to identify himself was. He asked questions that made it obvious he was reading from the book’s synopsis. Every once in a while, one of the “participants” would randomly send heart or clapping emojis. When I asked anyone to turn on their camera because I was uncomfortable speaking into a void — this part is true, by the way, ask anyone who has ever attended one of my NYC schools workshops — nothing happened. When I asked for proof that anyone was there and listening, the “host” would stop speaking, there would be a rustling noise in the background, and a written message would pop up in the chatbox, belligerently claiming, “I took time off from work to listen to this author, I got better things to do!” I guess that was supposed to intimidate or shame me? After about 10 minutes of useless questions, no interaction, and no proof of life, as it were, I hung up.)

AA: Hi, Sunday -

That was very disappointing. First, my event wasn’t listed on the official site, and the link you sent was some generic google meets, so I had no way of knowing what it was when I clicked it. You weren’t there, the person who you had leading the book club hadn’t read the book and was asking questions that had nothing to do with my story, and everybody in attendance refused to ask a question or even turn on the camera so I didn’t feel like I was talking into dead air.

Probably one of the worst book club experiences in my life. I’m afraid I won’t be able to recommend your services to any of my writing friends.

SC: Dear Alina,

Thank you for being honest about your experience today. I’m genuinely sorry that the feature did not go the way we had planned, and I understand why you were disappointed.

I do want to clarify one important point: I was present during the feature. The issue was not that I was absent, but that the session itself did not unfold according to the format we had intended. (What does this even mean?)

The format for the Readers’ discussion is for the selected author to first introduce themselves, speak about their background and book, and share whatever they would like readers to know about the story. Once the author has finished, the readers are then invited to ask questions and participate in the discussion. That is how the session was intended to proceed.

Unfortunately, today’s session did not reach that stage properly, which is something I deeply regret. I also understand that the lack of reader participation made the experience uncomfortable, particularly when you were expecting an actual discussion about The Nesting Dolls.

I also want to be candid that I was deeply disappointed by how the situation unfolded, especially after the effort that went into arranging the session and communicating with you beforehand. Your very direct and outspoken personality was certainly noticed (I hope so!), and some of our readers commented on how sharp and straightforward your delivery was (did I hurt the bots’ feelings? Then what was with all those love and applause emojis?), but I understand that this came from wanting the discussion to be meaningful and properly organized.

Regardless, you deserved a much better experience than what happened today, and I take responsibility for the communication and coordination issues on our side.

I sincerely apologize for the disappointment. Would you be open to allowing us to make this right by arranging a properly structured discussion of The Nesting Dolls with the format and reader participation we originally intended?

AA: Will you charge me for this discussion?

SC: Hi Alina,

To clarify, I just want to confirm the same point with you as well: would you be willing to pay for the discussion if there were a fee involved, or would you prefer that we keep it completely complimentary?

I want to make sure we are both clear on this.

AA: I will never, ever pay for a discussion.

Would you be shocked to learn that was the last I heard from Sunday? Or from their 27 dedicated readers?

So time to vote! Is this the worst book marketing scammer ever? Compare to candidates #1 and #2 at the links.

And if you’d like to read the best of the best, please check out “Greetings, Great Author: Emails To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers.”

Finally, if you’re curious about the origins of this week’s title….

Not even me. (Especially me.)

Why then, you might ask yourselves, are you reading a Substack by a Literal Literary Loser who knows nothing? (Surely, you can know nothing on your own time.)

This is an excellent question, and one to which I can only offer the following answer: I am delightfully entertaining.

And I am willing to go out on a limb and make wild guesses because, hey, if nobody knows anything yet is comfortable making confident proclamations nonetheless, why shouldn’t I?

Back in January, I speculated about “Why My Latest Book Isn’t Selling as Well as My Previous One.”

Since then, “My Mother’s Secret: A Novel of the Jewish Autonomous Region,” which came out in November 2022, continues to outsell “Go On Pretending,” which came out May 2025, on a monthly basis.

One of my theories earlier in the year was that “My Mother’s Secret” has a subtitle. It tells you what the book is about. It makes it easier for customers to quickly process whether this is something they’d be interested in, and it gives book clubs a hook to talk about. (It also makes it easier for book marketing scammers to generate an email meant to trick me into believing they’ve actually read the book, but you know how I handle those.)

“Go On Pretending’s” title was inspired by lyrics from the recently revived (though I’ve been a fan since the 1980s) Broadway musical, “Chess,” which are, “You and I / We've seen it all / Chasing our hearts' desire / But we go on pretending / Stories like ours / Have happy endings.”

The lyrics are perfect for my novel. They mean a lot to me.

They don’t mean anything to a potential reader.

I don’t intend to make the same mistake again.

I have become such a born-again subtitle-r, that I amended the title of my best-selling, self-published non-fiction book, “Getting into NYC Kindergarten” to “Getting into NYC Kindergarten: Your Guide to Public, Private, Charter & Gifted Schools.” (And the book marketing scammers have noticed! I am already getting “personalized” come-ons with the new title.)

When I submitted my upcoming novel to potential publishers, I titled it, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery.”

That’s the book — and title — that Lake Union bought.

The mystery novel (and social satire) is currently scheduled for a March 23, 2027 release. (Please do me a solid and pre-order it from either link below. Those kinds of things really matter for a book’s success!)

Except that, as of now, the title only reads “Admit None,” both on Amazon and at Target.

As you may have heard me mention previously, when it comes to publishing NOBODY KNOWS ANYTHING.

But what if this publisher knows more than I do? (Shouldn’t the publisher know more than I do? Isn’t that why I’m working with a publisher, rather than going out on my own?) What if they got rid of the subtitle for a reason? Am I wrong? Are they right?

Guess we’ll find out… What do you think?

But have I got a treat for you this week! This week, I’ve not only got one of my classic email back and forths, I’ve got video to prove just what a scam all of these “book marketers” are!

To save you time and get to the main event faster, I’m going to skip the first half of my written exchange with “Tom,” who promised me a discussion of my book in “his” Goodreads group (for a fee, of course), and get right into the meat of the scam (as always, my comments in italics and parentheses):

Alina Adams: Hi, Tom -

I think you made a mistake. The link to the goodreads group only has 4 members, and the IG handle doesn’t exist at all.

Can you send me the direct links to both your IG account and the goodreads group with 50K members and non-stop engagement? I want to see what other authors have submitted as their questions, and how readers reacted.

Thanks so much!

“Tom” at info.tomthebookyoulikemost@gmail.com: Hi Alina,

Thank you for pointing that out. I apologize for the confusion

Here is the correct Goodreads group: https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/1219146-the-book-you-like-most

Thank you for your patience

AA: What about the IG?

Tom: Hi Alina,

Thank you for your message. The Goodreads group link below is the only link I’m able to share:

https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/1219146-the-book-you-like-most

Unfortunately, I’m not able to share an Instagram link for this promotion. I hope you understand, and I’m happy to answer any other questions you may have.

AA: No, Tom, I don’t understand. You sent me the IG handle in a previous email, so you had no trouble doing it then. It’s only when I told you it doesn’t exist that suddenly you can’t share it.

Please explain. This is very unprofessional of you.

Tom: Alina,

I sincerely apologize for the confusion. The Instagram handle I sent earlier does not exist

I mistakenly sent the wrong one.

Thank you for your understanding, and I apologize again for the inconvenience.

AA: So you'll send me the right one?

Tom: Alina,

No, I’m sorry. There isn’t an Instagram account to send at the moment. The one I shared earlier does not exist.

At this time, the Goodreads group is the only community we’re using

I apologize for the confusion and appreciate your understanding.

AA: I'm very confused, Tom. How did you accidentally send me the name of an IG account that doesn't exist? How does that happen? Why would you send the name of any IG account if you knew your community doesn't have an IG account?

Tom: Alina,

I apologize for the confusion. I am still one of the moderators of The Book You Like Most Goodreads group.

The Instagram account I mentioned earlier is no longer active, which is why you couldn’t find it. Our primary community and engagement now take place in the Goodreads group, and that’s the official link I’m able to share

AA: Oh, cool, glad we got that straightened out. So, here’s the thing, Tom, as I’m sure you know, there are SO many book marketing scammers out there. Can you believe there are actually people who hijack other people’s identities and social media accounts, pretend to be them, then steal their money? Isn’t that the most awful thing you’ve ever heard.

While I’m sure you’re completely honest and would never do that, I do need some proof before I commit. So here is what I need you to do. I need you to make a post in the goodreads book club that you say is yours which mentions me, Alina Adams, by name. That way, I know you are who you say you are, and we can get to work together.

Send me the link which mentions me when you’re ready.

So excited to finally get started. My marketing budget is $1500 (it is not; as you may have guessed, I never, ever pay for promotion — it is never worth it), so if you can prove your worth, I will definitely be spending it with you!

Tom: Absolutely, that’s completely understandable. I appreciate your diligence, especially with so many scams out there.

I’ll make the post in the Goodreads group mentioning you by name and send you the direct link as soon as it’s done.

Thank you for your patience, and I’ll get back to you shortly. I look forward to working with you

(20 minutes later)

Tom: As requested, your name has now been mentioned in our Goodreads group. I’ve attached a screenshot for your reference. I hope this gives you the confidence to move forward.

Looking forward to hearing from you

AA: I need the link, Tom. When I went to look, the post had already been deleted.

Tom: I apologize for the confusion. The post was deleted because, as a moderator, I was informed by the community admin that it couldn’t remain until they had confirmation from me that everything was in order. Since there hasn’t been a confirmed booking yet, they removed it.

If you’re ready, we can proceed now so we can get started on your project.

AA: That’s REALLY weird, Tom, because when I reached out to the moderator of the entire group and forwarded your emails, they told me you weren’t a moderator and that they don’t allow any kind of organized campaign, paid or otherwise. (None of this happened. And yet I felt confident saying that it happened, because it is what I am sure would have happened had I, in fact, done this.)

What happened? Were you kicked out just today? Was it because of these scams you’ve been pulling?

Tom: Thank you for letting me know. To help me understand exactly what happened, would you mind sharing a screenshot of the conversation or the reply you received from the moderator?

AA: Oh, no, Tom, I couldn’t do that. You see, I reached out to the Tom listed as one of the moderators of the group, here: https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/35000121-tom

And he told me in no uncertain terms that he NEVER reaches out cold to authors and that the group NEVER charges for placement, promotion or discussion. He also pointed out that the post you made wasn’t under his name but anonymous, which is even more proof that he didn’t make it.

I couldn’t violate his privacy by sharing our conversation with you. With you stealing his identity like this, who knows what else you might do if you had his private information!

Tom: I understand your concerns, and I appreciate you taking the time to verify the information. If you’re open to it, I’d be happy to schedule a Zoom call to answer your questions directly and provide any clarification I can. (Let the record show “he” suggested this call first.)

AA: Yes, that would be great! How about 11:30 AM EST today. I'll send the Zoom link!

Tom: That works perfectly for me. I’ll be available at 11:30 AM EST today. Please send the Zoom link when you’re ready, and I’ll join at the scheduled time.

Thank you, and I look forward to speaking with you.

AA: Here's the Zoom link, Tom! See you at 11:30 AM EST!

(15 minutes later)

AA: I'm in the Zoom room and waiting for you, Tom! (This is true.)

(10 minutes later)

AA: I am sitting in my office and weeping, Tom (this is not true). I was all set to speak with you (this is true). I had my credit card number ready to read to you so we could get started on my promotion (this is not true), and you stood me up (this is true).

I have never been so disrespected and humiliated in my life (this is not true — I worked in TV for 20 years). I am going to publish your name, contact info, and a full transcript of our conversation so that no one will ever be heartbroken like I have been by you.

I hope you’re happy.

Tom: I sincerely apologize for missing our scheduled Zoom meeting. I just saw your message today, and I’m truly sorry. I had to attend an event with a large number of participants, and it kept me much busier than I expected. Even so, I should have let you know instead of leaving you waiting, and I take full responsibility for that.

I completely understand why you were upset, and I’m truly sorry for the inconvenience and disappointment I caused.

At the moment, I’m still tied up with the event and other commitments. Once things settle down and I’m less busy, I’ll reach out to you so we can reschedule the Zoom call if you’re still willing.

Thank you for your patience, and I sincerely apologize again. I hope you’ll give me the opportunity to make this right.

(After three more desperate emails from “Tom” which I ignored)

Tom: Alina, I’m still tied up as you can see, I’m currently traveling for an event (do scammers have conventions?). However, I’ve already asked my assistant at the office to attend the Zoom call on my behalf and give me full feedback afterward. Is that okay with you? If so, I’ll inform her now.

AA: Of course, that’s fine, Tom. I will be recording the call, I’m sure your assistant won’t mind. Tomorrow at 11 AM EST. I will send the Zoom link.

Tom: Perfect, thank you. That works for me. I’ll inform my assistant about the call and make sure she’s available tomorrow at 11 AM EST. I appreciate you recording the call as well.

AA: Please forward me your assistant’s name and email, so I can send her the Zoom invitation.

(Next day)

AA: That’s it, Tom, you have let me down for the last time. This is the second appointment you’ve stood me up for. I am going to let all my author friends know that you can’t be trusted.

Think I can’t do it? Check this out: https://writerbeware.blog/2023/04/28/guest-post-the-book-marketing-scam-that-went-the-extra-mile/

This piece went viral. Now I am going to do the same to you. Your name will be mud in publishing by the time I’m through!

Tom: I’m sorry for the misunderstanding. As I mentioned, I’m currently away traveling for an event. I just saw your message now.

When I replied, “I’ll inform my assistant about the call,” I understood that you would be sending the Zoom link, and I would then forward the link to my assistant so she could attend the call on my behalf.

I apologize if there was any misunderstanding. Please send me the Zoom link, and I’ll forward it to her immediately.

AA: You will send it to your assistant right now?

(After I sent another Zoom link and Tom’s assistant failed to show.)

AA: That’s it, Tom. You blew it. Three strikes and you’re out.

You are in deep trouble now!

Tom: I understand your frustration, but I want to assure you that I have already forwarded the Zoom link to my assistant. She will attend the call with you. She may be busy at the moment, but she has the link and will be there. Please trust me on this.

I’m sorry again for the confusion and inconvenience.

AA: Nope. I don’t believe you. I will NOT be getting on a Zoom call unless the link comes from you.

I am done with you wasting my time.

You are so not worth it.

Tom: Alina, are you available now? My assistant is ready and can send you a Zoom link so you can get started with the call.

AA: Yes, send the Zoom link now.

From “Janice Patterson”: Hi Alina, this is Janice. I’m so sorry I wasn’t able to attend the Zoom call yesterday. I was a little busy at the time. Tom has explained everything to me and let me know that I’ll be the one attending the call with you because he is currently traveling for an event.

I apologize again for the inconvenience. I’m available now, and here is the meeting link: https://meet.google.com/szb-vngy-xzr

Please let me know when you’re ready to get started.

AA: Oh, OK, since you are available now, let me send you my zoom link, instead. I don’t have google meets.

See you in a few minutes!

(5 minutes later)

AA: Where are you, Janice?

You said you were available right now. I am waiting for you!

(5 minutes later)

AA: This is ridiculous, Janice. You have kept me waiting for far too long. Does Tom know how incompetent you are?

JP: I'm with you right now

AA: You are not at the Zoom link I sent. Please use the Zoom link I sent. I will not be clicking random links from strangers on the internet.

And now, lest you think I’ve been making up my conversations up to this point, behold — a book marketing scammer out of their natural habitat (emails written with AI) and face to face with reality.

What do you think? Does she deserve the title of Worst Book Marketing Scammer ever? (Why did she bother using a man’s name and then offering a Zoom call if she knew she’d never be able to deliver? Why not steal a woman’s identity from the start?) Stay tuned, I’ve got more candidates to consider! And to catch up on all the scams you’ve missed, check out “Greetings, Great Author: Emails To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers.”

(If you have any trouble clicking on the above image to view the video, email me for the direct link.)

When I say I dress too young for my age, I don’t mean that I’m a 50+ year old woman who tries to dress like a young and hip teen-ager. I mean that I dress like a toddler who really enjoys bright colors and patterns. In any and all combinations.

This was a bit of an issue when my children attended the elite Upper East Side and Upper West Side private schools which I tackle (some might say “affectionately skewer”) in my upcoming book, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery.” Remember this fact, it will become relevant soon.

When he was 12, my oldest son looked at what I was planning on wearing to a very expensive benefit we’d been invited to at the Museum of Modern Art (like Uncle Max in “The Sound Of Music,” I too “like rich people. I like how they live. I like how I live when I am with them”), and dismissed, “Too loud for Carnegie Hill.”

(Think I’m exaggerating my childlike love for bright colors? Look what I wore to a major television interview!)

A few years later, after I had launched my school consulting business and gotten some very generous media coverage (like the above major television interview), my then-8 year old daughter advised, “You know, Mom, now that you’re starting to get recognized in public, you should think about dressing better.”

I should, I really should. Except….

I don’t know which came first, my being repeatedly told that I have no sartorial taste or my utter indifference to how I looked. But it doesn’t really matter now. I don’t know how to dress and I don’t care.

Except….

I need to start caring. Pronto.

I didn’t care enough when my kids were in private school. I didn’t care enough in my own social life. I didn’t care when I was promoting all of my previous books. My last three novels were Soviet-Jewish historical fiction. They were all about suffering. Shouldn’t I look like I was suffering? Who had time to put together cute outfits while suffering? (Who? My late grandmother, that’s who. The woman never let Communist repression keep her from wearing a hat to the beach. And high heels.)

But things are different now. I am no longer selling suffering.

Coming March 23, 2027, I am selling opulence. I am selling elitism. I am selling New York City glamour and wealth.

I am selling NYC private schools. My hope is to do book events at some of the schools featured in the novel, and book club appearances before parents like the ones featured in the novel, and be covered in media consumed by people who aspire to live like the families described in the novel.

I can’t dress like a peasant to do any of the above.

I can’t dress like a toddler.

I have to dress like a grown-up.

Like an elite, glamorous, and wealthy grown up.

Yeah. That’s not going to happen.

The best I can hope for is to dress like a professional. With a touch of whimsy. Because I do everything with whimsy. (My children truly appreciate it. Such as the time my oldest son told me, “Not everyone wants to walk barefoot on the beach. Sometimes there is a reason shoes exist.” And don’t get me started about how much all three of my kids enjoyed, during Covid, my popping around corners, sweeping them into hugs and yelling, “Love in the time of Corona!”)

So my daughter and I went shopping. She picked the outfits, I tried them on. See the finalists below.

What do we think? How do I look? Would you buy a comedic novel about NYC school admissions from this woman?

Your thoughts wanted.

No, let me paraphrase: Your thoughts desperately needed.

Please help me dress like a grown up.

What should I wear? How should I wear it? Where do I buy it? Will it need to be ironed? (I don’t have an iron. My de-wrinkling strategy is to hang clothes from the rod while I shower, so as to steam out the worst offenders.)

And if you’d like to get the ball rolling, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery” is now available for pre-order from Amazon. Reserve your copy now and get it as soon as it releases. If I can’t get this clothing bit right, online sales may be my only option….

I thought we’d all have a little fun. In the next few weeks, I’m going to share the worst of the worst, and let you decide who should have the title of most egregious. We’ll start off easy today, with a simple case of gross incompetence. (My comments, as always, in parentheses and italics.)

From Ade Halaoe at adehalao14@gmail.com: Hi (note the lack of name of any personalization; this must be the scamming starter kit),

I hope you’re doing well. (I do not believe “she” cares.)

I came across your website today and found myself reading through it for a while. I was especially interested to see *Fencing With the King* described as a story of Middle Eastern intrigue and adventure. It’s always fascinating to see an author continue exploring new ideas while connecting with readers in different ways. (While “she” has the wrong book, what about the title above suggests either “exploring new ideas” or “connecting with readers in different ways?” It seems to be a pretty conventional tale, published in a pretty conventional way.)

The reason I’m reaching out is that I work with authors behind the scenes to help strengthen their online presence and make it easier to stay connected with readers over time. That includes areas such as email marketing, HubSpot CRM, reader engagement systems, and websites that support an author’s work long after publication. (And yet “she” already knows I have a website, since “she” just “came across it today.” And it was good enough to ensnare “her” attention.)

I’m not reaching out because I think anything needs fixing (ah, I see, so this is just a fan letter?). I simply enjoy helping authors build on what they’ve already created, and after visiting your website, I thought it would be worthwhile introducing myself.

If you’d ever be interested in exchanging ideas (what is there to exchange, “she” is the expert here), I’d be happy to share a few thoughts based on your current website and online presence.

Thank you for your time, and I wish you continued success with your writing.

Best,

Halao (why sign with just a last name?)

Alina Adams: Ooops. Wrong author, wrong book. This must be so embarrassing for you!

How can anyone hire you as a book marketer if you can’t even do your research correctly!

AH: Correct me if I’m wrong but I reached out to you though the author’s website on the contact page.

I didn’t mean to cause any confusion. Looking forward to hearing from you

AA: Who is the author you were trying to reach?

AH: Pardon me but I was trying to reach Alina Adams the author of “GO ON PRETENDING”

I contacted her through her author website: https://alinaadams.com

AA: Ooops, you screwed up again! Read what you wrote in the first email. So many mistakes!!

AH: My sincere apologies I got yours mixed up with another while reaching out.

(Three days later.)

AH: Hi

Still looking forward to hearing from you

AA: Hearing from me about what? Your pitch was for a different author and a different book.

AH: You’re right, I apologize. I sent that message referencing the wrong book, and that was a mistake on my end. I don’t want to make it worse by guessing, so could you let me know the title of your book?

I’d still love to take a proper look and see if it’s a fit for what we do.

AA: Oops, ANOTHER mistake on your part.

You ALREADY know my name and the title of my book, because you referenced it below.

This is, by far, the WORST pitch I have ever received, which means you are the WORST book marketer in the field.

I am so embarrassed for you, I don’t know what to say.

****

This has been just a tease. Coming up, the book marketing scammer who stood me up, the one who wanted me to do all the work for them, the one who I confused into silence, the one who tried to bully me, and so, so much more!

Stay tuned for your opportunity to vote on the best of the worst, and, in the meantime, check out who made the cut last time!

As far back as February 2022, I leaned into my bad reviews in order to market my Figure Skating Mystery series.

Did it work?

Say it with me now: When it comes to publishing, nobody knows ANYTHING.

I’ve gotten bad reviews on my soap opera books.

For “Oakdale Confidential”: Save your money -- this was such a disappointment. I thought it would revolve around the characters of the show more and would have more history and at least be relevent to the plot of the show more. Poorly written as well. I am totally disappointed in this book.

For “Super Soap Scenes: A Time Capsule of Daytime Drama’s Greatest Moments”: As with many self-published books, this one needed help with editing, format and layout. It’s strictly arts-and-crafts quality, with a photo on the cover taken straight from a grainy YouTube video. It’s also extremely boring. The author is trying to be part of a dying breed, the “soap press.” She might’ve succeeded in the 80’s, but not now. (Fun fact: The book is traditionally published, and the photo they refer to was provided by the “Days of our Lives” publicity department.)

I’ve gotten bad reviews on my historical fiction books:

For “My Mother’s Secret: A Novel of the Jewish Autonomous Region”: I almost DNF this book. I’m not impressed with the writing. Slow and I had to look up at least couple of things, review the map to see the locations of the towns and cities, and do a couple of researches so I could fully understand the history. Also, I could not believe how the author literally highlighted the main characters’ (females) flaws with so much negativity and repetition.

And: It’s hard to tell how much of my dislike for this book was due to the author’s mediocre writing and how much to the content. It was difficult to have patience with Regina’s naive belief in communism Russia and her beloved Stalin.

And: I also got the feeling that the author used complicated language to try to come off as high brow, but the writing itself maid it seem misplaced. Overall the story wasn’t bad but the writing was rough.

And: The author could have left off a great deal of Soviet trope. Actually the editors should have done that but then the novel would have been a lot shorter. Knowing the author was born in the USSR and immigrated to the US at age seven, I understood why there was so much doctrine in her novel but it took a lot away from the story.

And I certainly got them for my non-fiction education writing:

For “Getting into NYC Kindergarten”: This product is massive disappoint - DO NOT BUY. There is so little information - all of it is common sense or information very easily obtainable on the NYC BOE website with little digging. The book is so short it can be read in 15 minutes and reads like a very simple overview of kindergarten for someone who literally has done zero research on the topic. If you’ve even navigated to the MySchools website, this book will have no value. I tried requesting a refund within 30 minutes of purchase (it was that short to read…) but was declined. My guess is the book is just a funnel/advertisement for the author’s consulting services. (Fun fact: Considering the above tale of woe, you’d think their review would be marked as a Verified Purchase by Amazon, wouldn’t you? Nope. Hmmm…. mysterious….)

Now that I’ve announced (repeatedly, and I’m not done yet) the upcoming publication of my next novel, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery —

— I’m getting bad reviews for a book that isn’t even out yet.

In response to the above, a poster on Facebook wrote: Have you ever worked in an admissions office at any of these schools? Very frustrated by all of your misinformed posts over the years and this is beyond obnoxious. (Fun fact: A parent involved in a custody battle came to me for school consulting without sharing that this was for a court case. I answered their questions. They then submitted the information I gave them to the court — without my knowledge or permission. The other parent proceeded to send me regular threatening emails, writing that they would report me to their judge. Am not sure for what crime, but they strongly intimated they could have me arrested. They also bad-mouthed me on Reddit, where the language they used about me was so similar to their threatening emails, it wasn’t hard to guess who the author was.)

So that’s almost 40 years of bad reviews.

I don’t mind them.

In fact, I embrace them.

Here’s why: Any product, books included, which feature only raves feel suspicious.

Nothing is universally loved. (Best-selling books I have disliked, here.)

And if a product doesn’t have a single negative review, that can mean only two things:

• It was solely purchased by friends and relatives and didn’t have any actual customers

• The negative reviews were scrubbed

(You think I’m kidding? Hannah Selinger, who wrote “Valley of the Moms,” a book somewhat similar to mine, which is why I’ve been tracking its reception, was so incensed to receive 1-star reviews that she went on a social media rant, defending her book on Goodreads, doxxing the critics on Instagram, and urging her followers to call their bosses to get them fired. A side-note to my side-note: I am trying to imagine being a boss and receiving a complaint that my employee… wrote a bad book review?)

Ergo, I welcome my bad reviews as a point of pride.

See, total strangers read my book.

See, total strangers felt moved to review my book.

See, I did not firebomb their homes over it.

See, you should (safely) read my book, too. If for no other reason than to confirm that it’s as bad as advertised. (My non-fiction, “Inside Figure Skating,” —more negative reviews at the link — inspired one livid fan of skaters they thought I did not cover with enough reverence to urge others online to buy it “so you can burn it.” I was totally fine with that call to action. I earn a royalty regardless of what you do with it post-purchase.)

So go ahead, leave a negative review, I won’t harass you over it. I draw inspiration from Jack Sparrow:

From Anne lauurence at annelauurence@gmail.com: Hello Alina,

I read that Greetings, Great Author pulls together your real back and forth with scammers impersonating Jenna Bush Hager, Christopher Paolini, Suzanne Collins, and a handful of other names, including one who apparently laid a voodoo curse on you mid conversation. (“She” read accurately.) That is a very specific kind of book (it is, it really is!), built entirely from real inboxes, and it reads less like a marketing guide (that’s because it’s not) and more like a document of exactly how this industry actually behaves toward authors (that’s because it is; though it’s not the industry, it’s, to paraphrase what they say on PBS, scammers like you).

One line from the description stayed with me (is that because the description is all “she” read?), that these scammers want to steal your money and make you feel like an idiot, to boot. That line does more work than most marketing copy manages in a page, because it names the actual harm plainly instead of dancing around it. (This reads like a sentence. It has words and everything. Except it says literally nothing.)

Here is the gap. A book built entirely around exposing bad-faith marketing pitches is, ironically, one of the hardest books to market honestly, since the exact tactics that would normally sell a book, the flattery, the urgency, the unsolicited outreach, are the very things this book is written to mock. (“She” is so self-aware!) That leaves a real gap between how good the book is and how few conventional ways there are to responsibly promote it. (Only if you believe responsible, conventional promotion is made up of flattery, urgency, and unsolicited outreach. That’s not conventional promotion. That’s Book Marketing Scams 101.)

Here is what I can do to fix that.

Amazon Optimization and SEO. I will strengthen the listing so it ranks under publishing humor, writer resources, and memoir categories, since readers searching for honest, funny takes on the publishing industry are exactly the audience this book is written for. (Do I need an expert for that?)

Goodreads Listopia and Optimization. I will place the book on Goodreads lists built around publishing satire and author survival guides, so writers who are actively looking for validation and a laugh land directly on your page. (Do I need an expert for that?)

First (how is this “first,” when “she” has already laid out multiple strategies?), what does success for look like to you (grammar?) over the next three to six months? Is your goal to reach more readers, increase ratings and reviews, improve the book’s visibility, promote both books in the series together (what “both series?”), or is there another outcome that matters most to you ?

Alina Adams: This is fantastic, Anne!

Are you offering to market a book about book marketing scams... with a book marketing scam?

Please, please, please tell me more!

AL: Hi Alina,

I laughed when I read your reply because, honestly, the irony wasn’t lost on me. (The AIs can laugh now?)

You’re right a cold email about marketing a book that exposes book marketing scams is walking into the lion’s den.

When I mentioned Amazon optimization and Goodreads discovery, I meant practical, transparent work: improving how the book is positioned for readers already searching for topics like publishing, writing, author scams, and the business of books not manufacturing hype or making unrealistic promises.

That’s why I wanted to understand your goals before proposing anything specific strategy . (Grammar? Punctuation?)

What would success look like for you over the next three to six months? Is your priority to reach more readers, increase ratings and reviews, improve the book’s visibility, promote both books together (still only have one book out on this subject), or is there another outcome that matters most to you?

AA: My goal is to make enough money to pay my kid's college tuition (this is true). Can you deliver that for me?

AL: Hi Alina,

Honest answer: no. Nobody can promise that, and if I told you I could, I’d be doing exactly what the scammers in your book do. (Nah, “she’s” not even close to being that ridiculous yet.)

What I can actually do is narrower and more boring: better keyword and category placement on Amazon, getting the book in front of Goodreads readers who are already searching for publishing satire and memoir. That can move visibility and sales. It cannot promise a dollar figure, and anyone who tells you otherwise is selling you the same thing Jenna Bush Hager’s impersonator was. (Self-aware much? Or, as the youth say, self own?)

If that’s still useful to you even without a guarantee attached, I’m glad to send over a concrete, no-fluff plan for the Amazon and Goodreads piece specifically. If it’s not what you need right now, I completely understand and won’t push (remember that last promise).

AA: So you want me to pay you without any guarantee of results?

No, thank you. I see no point in throwing my money away.

AL: (No salutation, this time. We are all business now!) Your Goal: Build a stronger and more sustainable sales foundation for your book, with the long-term objective of generating enough additional income to help cover your child’s college tuition. (Wow, those Large Learning Machines are so effective! Please give them all my money!)

To support that goal, I recommend combining the three areas below into one focused strategy:

1. Amazon Optimization & SEO

We optimize your book’s keywords, categories, and discoverability on Amazon so it has a stronger chance of appearing when relevant readers are actively searching.

Goal: Increase organic discoverability and create more opportunities for consistent book sales without relying entirely on paid advertising. (I would never rely on paid advertising. It’s an even bigger waste of money than book marketing scammers.)

2. Goodreads Listopia & Profile Optimization

We improve your Goodreads presence and work on relevan (sic) Listopia opportunities to put your book in front of readers already interested in your subject and genre, particularly readers interested in existential psychology. (Uhm… what now?)

Goal: Expand your qualified readership and create additional pathways from discovery to your book’s sales channels.

3. Email Campaign & Goodreads Reader Engagement

We create a targeted email campaign and encourage meaningful Goodreads discussion around the book to keep it visible and generate continued reader interest after publication.

Goal: Build ongoing attention around your book rather than relying only on one-time promotional activity.

The purpose is not simply to promote the book for a short period. It is to build a stronger visibility-to-sales system that can continue creating opportunities for readers to discover the book.

If this resonate this (so close to being an actual sentance) , I will send the full process to get started

AA: Oh, no, thank you. I have done this numerous times, and the needle hasn’t moved one iota.

That’s why I started exposing book marketing scammers in the first place, because none of this works, and I wanted authors to know before they wasted their money on it.

I was hoping you might have something new and original, but this is EXACTLY what every other scammer sends.

AL: I understand, Alina. (We’re back on a first name basis.)

Have you ever tried using Goodreads Discussions specifically to generate genuine conversations around your book and its themes? That’s actually what I had in mind not the usual Amazon optimization or promotional tactics you’ve already tried. (So why did “she” list them above?)

AA: Yes! Here is what happened with the goodreads discussion: https://alinaa.substack.com/p/april-showers-bring-goodreads-scams

I’m afraid your approach isn’t new in the slightest.

AL: I understand, Alina, and I also understand that some of the things I’ve mentioned so far may not be relevant to you or may sound similar to approaches you’ve already encountered. (“She” understands this, because it’s what I’ve said. Repeatedly.)

But one thing I’ve learned from working with Goodreads is that the foundation matters before you start pushing discussions, lists, or other visibility activities.

Looking at your Goodreads presence, one thing I noticed is that your books are listed, but your presence doesn’t appear to be set up as a fully established Goodreads Author Profile. That distinction is important.

A Goodreads Author Profile can give you much more control and visibility over your author presence, including:

• Claiming and managing your books under your author identity (already done)

• Adding and updating your author bio, photo, website, and other information

• Connecting your books together under one author profile (already done)

• Accessing and managing your author-related Goodreads activity from the author dashboard

• Seeing and engaging with readers who interact with your books

• Participating in Goodreads features from an established author presence rather than simply having books listed in the database

• Building a recognizable author identity that readers can return to as you release more books

You can actually go into Goodreads yourself and check the difference between a book listing and a claimed author profile. I encourage you to look at it yourself rather than simply taking my word for it.

That doesn’t mean an author profile alone guarantees sales. It simply means that if the foundation isn’t properly established, some of the other visibility efforts may not have the same value.

We learn new things every day (my husband says this all the time, and I always tell him he’s wrong — we don’t), and this is one of the things I’ve come to understand better through working with Goodreads.

What do you think about it ?

AA: Thanks for the tip, Anne, I'll go update my goodreads profile. (I actually probably should, but I don’t really see the benefit of it. Do you use goodreads for promotion? How has it worked out for you?)

AL: You’re very welcome, Alina. I’m glad you’re going to take a look at it yourself.

And honestly, I don’t want you to put me in the same category as the people you’ve encountered before (well, obviously “she” wouldn’t). I understand why you’re cautious, especially given your experience.

The things I’ve mentioned so far are actually just the simple, more obvious parts of what a marketing specialist can look at. There are quite a few deeper areas involved in building an author’s visibility, and I prefer to be interactive and actually understand the author and the book rather than simply sending a list of standard marketing tactics. (Facts not in evidence.)

So, go ahead and explore the profile setup yourself. If you run into anything you don’t understand, or you feel you haven’t quite got it, please feel free to contact me and I’ll gladly point you in the right direction.

I appreciate you being open to looking into it, Alina (my name at the start AND finish; we are really gelling now!).

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“She” seems really high on my book, “Greetings, Great Author: Emails To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers.” Check it out for yourselves at this link.

It would seem that a book marketing scammer wanting to market my book of book marketing scams is peak post-modernism. Where would I even go from here?

I’ll tell you! Starting next week, we’re going to have a little fun: A contest to determine just who is the most incompetent book marketing scammer ever. I have some doozies of examples lined up, and you’re going to get to vote!

Excited? Then make sure you sign up for this Substack so you don’t risk missing a single scintillating scam. You’ll even get a FREE book out of it!

AI!

AI!

Perhaps you’ve heard of it? It’s all anyone is talking about. If you believe the hype (and my younger son, newly graduated from one of America’s top STEM schools tells me you really shouldn’t), AI will soon fix everything from world hunger to inequitable education to hangnails. (By the way, I am told that a surefire way to spot AI in writing, is repeated use of the rule of three. Who knew Jesus was an AI?)

Every day, there’s a new scandal about some literary prize-winning short story or professorial research being written by AI.

I’ll be honest: I don’t get it. Writing is the FUN part. Why would you want to outsource that? I want AI to clean my house so I can write more, not write for me so I’ll have more time to clean my house. (Ha, ha, joke is on… someone. I don’t clean.)

I would never use AI to write, not because I am morally superior, but because I genuinely believe I am addicted to the act. I can literally feel the endorphins hit my brain the minute my fingers touch the keyboard. (Please don’t send me your diagnoses regarding what condition this indicates. I am full up on long-distance diagnoses.)

On the other hand, just to check out what the alleged fuss was all about, I thought I’d give AI a crack at helping me to come up with a marketing plan for my Spring 2027 book, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery.” That’s supposed to be what AI is good at; synthesizing information, evaluating everything that’s worked in the past, and pulling together the data on what will work in your particular case.

Sure, Jan. (IYKYK.)

Here are the prompts I entered. And the answers ChatGPT spit back….

Prompt #1: How should I promote my upcoming novel about NYC school admissions?

Answer #1: To promote your novel about NYC schools effectively, you should target the highly active, hyper-local ecosystem of anxious parents, educational consultants, and neighborhood community hubs. Because NYC school admissions are famously intense, local parents ravenously consume content related to the system, making them a built-in target audience for a school-centric book.

The most enthusiastic readers for this niche will be the parents currently living through the exact scenarios in your book.

Pitch local parent bloggers: Reach out to local mom bloggers and school consultants like Alina Adams (NYC School Secrets)

Prompt #2: Who are NYC’s biggest influencers when it comes to school applications?

Answer #2: 1. Alina Adams (NYC School Secrets)

Specialty: Public and private school admissions across all grades.

Why she’s influential: As a mother of three who navigated various NYC public, private, and gifted programs, she wrote the book Getting Into NYC Kindergarten and founded NYC School Secrets. She focuses heavily on demystifying the NYC Department of Education system and making admissions knowledge accessible to all parents, not just those who can afford expensive consultants.

(I would try a third prompt, but I’m afraid some AI detector, which is, in itself, AI, will think this post was written by AI. But it feels weird to only do two. Three feels more natural to me. Wait… am I AI? And/or Jesus?)

So while the above is definitely ego-boosting — yes, yes, I know the program sees this is my computer and so is giving me answers it thinks I want — it is also hardly helpful. (In a more global sense, getting the answers you want rather than the answers you need isn’t just unhelpful, it is downright detrimental.)

The best AI can think of to recommend I do for my book promotion is to reach out to… myself.

I expect I’ll be receptive. But also a bit recursive.

So instead of AI, I am turning to you, my (presumably) human readers. What do you think I should do?

I’m already planning on reaching out to schools, parenting groups, and admissions consultants (who aren’t me), but I would love to hear your suggestions, as well.

Whom should I talk to, where should I speak, how should I go about arranging it?

I have not a single doubt that your ideas will be better than just telling me to go talk to myself….

I cover all that and more on this Substack. I track the ups and down of my writing career. (New book, “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery” coming March 2027!) I share everything I know about navigating the NYC school system. Watch video below!

And, once a week, I present my Thursday Feature, wherein I push back against the latest book marketing scammer who tries to sell me their useless and downright fraudulent services. In honor of my new readers, today I will be corresponding with someone who claims to know what’s best for my non-fiction instructional manual, “Getting into NYC Kindergarten.” Please enjoy our back and forth. My comments in parentheses and italics:

From samuel@samueledithbookmarketing.co.site (usually, I warn readers to stay away from unsolicited emails which come from gmail addresses, as they are 99% likely to be a scam; kudos to “Samuel” for shelling out for a customized URL… though I am still not fooled):

Dear Alina, (Good job, “Samuel”; The majority of these that I get are addressed to ‘Great Author’ or someone named ‘Ali.’ My name isn’t and never has been ‘Ali.’)

I want to start with something one of your readers said that names the most specific and most honest thing about what you built in this guide. She called it a fantastic resource for all NYC parents and said it provides a solid framework for understanding the basics of NYC kindergarten admissions. Another reader valued the helpful timeline. (So “he” can read Amazon reviews. What is it that Simon & Garfunkel sang about “All my words come back to me/In shades of mediocrity?) These are not compliments about writing. They are descriptions of a tool that works.

You are now in your ninth edition, updated December 2025, covering a system that the Department of Education is constantly changing (yup, this is straight out of the Amazon product description. Excellent cutting and pasting!). You built NYCSchoolSecrets.com with workshops, webisodes, podcasts, and a calculator. You write for the Today Show Parenting blog and Mommy Poppins and Kveller (straight from About the Author). You have built, over a decade, the most complete and most consistently maintained resource for NYC kindergarten admissions available to parents who cannot afford a $50,000 private consultant. (And how does “he” know that mine is the most complete and/or consistently maintained? It is, mind you. But how does “he” know that?)

That framing, the democratic alternative to the private consultant, is your most powerful positioning statement. And the communities where that specific framing would generate the most immediate and most enthusiastic response are organized and have not been formally told your guide exists. (Citation needed. I spend the bulk of my days telling these communities that my guide exists. Did “he” miss my TV appearance?)

Problem One: Getting Into NYC Kindergarten is the only book of its kind for NYC kindergarten admissions, but the broader school choice advocacy and education equity communities, where parents and advocates who are specifically frustrated by the opacity of urban public school admissions systems are organized, have not been formally introduced to a guide that explicitly positions itself as the affordable alternative to the private consultant that most families cannot access. (They have been. Many, many times. If they hadn’t been, “he” wouldn’t know about it.)

The school choice and education equity communities are organized around the specific frustration your guide addresses: a public school admissions system so complex that wealthy families hire consultants to navigate it while other families are left without access to the same information. The National School Choice Week communities, the education equity advocacy organizations, the urban public school parent networks, and the education reform media communities are all channels where a guide that democratizes access to NYC kindergarten admissions information would be recognized as directly relevant to the equity conversations those communities are having. But those communities have not been told your guide exists. (They have been. By me. In fact, they come to me to write articles on the subject.)

Solution One: A school choice and education equity community positioning campaign that formally introduces Getting Into NYC Kindergarten to the organized school choice advocacy networks, the education equity parent communities, and the education reform media channels where your explicit framing of the guide as the $9.99 alternative to the $50,000 private consultant would generate immediate recognition and immediate sharing among the communities most passionate about making school access information available to every family regardless of income. (“He” is correct. How do I know this? Because it has already happened.)

The practical entry points are the National School Choice Week community networks, the education equity advocacy organizations like the Education Trust and the National Parents Union, the urban public school parent Facebook communities, The 74 reader community where you already contribute, and the education reform podcast and newsletter networks where your decade of maintaining the most current NYC kindergarten admissions resource would be recognized as exactly the kind of grassroots information equity work those communities champion. (So “he” is agreeing that I have already done what “he” is proposing I pay “him” to do.)

Problem Two: Your fiction catalog, The Nesting Dolls with 507 reviews, My Mother’s Secret with 139 reviews, and your figure skating mystery series, represents a substantial body of creative work with an established reader base, and those fiction readers have not been formally told that the same author who wrote The Nesting Dolls also wrote the definitive NYC kindergarten admissions guide now in its ninth edition. (They have been. It’s in my all my author bios.)

A fiction reader who loved The Nesting Dolls and discovers that Alina Adams also runs NYCSchoolSecrets.com and has been updating a kindergarten admissions guide for a decade is a reader who has found a new dimension of an author she already trusts. If she is a New York City parent, that discovery is immediately useful. If she is not, it is a window into the specific texture of New York City family life that your fiction also explores. The cross-catalog connection between your fiction community and your nonfiction guide has not been formally built as a reader introduction pathway. (It has been. My upcoming book will specifically be tying those two spheres together.)

Solution Two: A fiction reader and nonfiction guide crossover campaign that formally introduces Getting Into NYC Kindergarten to your established fiction reader community, specifically the readers of The Nesting Dolls and My Mother’s Secret who are also NYC parents or who are interested in the specific texture of New York City family experience that runs through both your fiction and your nonfiction work. (I already do this. Like on this Substack, for example.)

The practical work here is a personal author communication to your fiction newsletter and social media communities that presents Getting Into NYC Kindergarten as the practical companion to the New York City world your fiction explores (“My Mother’s Secret: A Novel of the Jewish Autonomous Region” has nothing to do with NYC or schools), giving your fiction readers a specific and personal reason to discover the guide and to share it with every NYC parent in their community. (I already do this. Like on this Substack, for example.)

Problem Three: Getting Into NYC Kindergarten is annually updated and hyperlocal to New York City, which means it has a natural and recurring annual marketing window tied to the NYC school application calendar, but the systematic activation of that calendar as a coordinated annual launch and re-promotion campaign has not been formally built in a way that captures the parents who are entering the kindergarten application process for the first time each year at the precise moment of their highest need and motivation. (Yes, it has been.)

Every year a new cohort of NYC parents with children approaching kindergarten age enters the application process for the first time and has no idea what they do not know. Those parents are discoverable through the NYC parenting communities, the Brooklyn and Manhattan and Queens and Bronx parent Facebook groups, and the NYC parenting newsletter and podcast networks where the kindergarten admissions season generates annual anxiety and annual search behavior. Your guide exists for exactly that moment, but the annual activation of those discovery channels as a coordinated campaign tied to the DOE application calendar has not been formally built as a recurring marketing infrastructure. (What does “formally built” even mean? Is the idea here that if “he” repeats nonsense buzzwords enough times, I will start to believe they mean something?

Solution Three: An annual kindergarten admissions season activation campaign (huh?) that formally introduces Getting Into NYC Kindergarten to the NYC parenting communities, the borough-specific parent Facebook groups, and the NYC parenting newsletter and podcast networks at the precise moment each year when a new cohort of parents is entering the kindergarten application process for the first time and is most motivated to find exactly what your guide provides. (So “his” solution is to repeat exactly what he diagnosed as the problem?)

The practical first step is a coordinated annual outreach calendar (what does this mean?) tied to the NYC kindergarten application timeline that introduces the guide to the organized NYC parenting communities at the specific moments when the application windows open, when the test preparation questions peak, and when the waitlist management anxiety is highest, treating your annual December update (what might this be?) as the annual launch moment that triggers a systematic community introduction to every new cohort of NYC kindergarten parents. (December is WAY too late to start talking about Kindergarten admissions. The process starts in September. I am beginning to fear “he” doesn’t know what “he’s” talking about….)

I would love to put together a formal proposal for you specifically, built around the school choice and education equity community positioning, the fiction reader and nonfiction guide crossover campaign, and the annual kindergarten admissions season activation strategy. Simply reply with the word interested and I will take it from there.

You built the $9.99 alternative to the $50,000 private consultant. The parents who need it and cannot afford the consultant are in communities that are organized and looking for exactly this guide. They just need to be told it exists before the application window closes. (This is true. Which is why I have been doing exactly that. For over a decade now.)

Warm regards,

Samuel Edith (doesn’t “he” looks honest and efficient in this definitely not stolen stock photo?)

Alina Adams: Thanks for this, Samuel. How much do you pay authors to use their books in your marketing? (What? Did I misunderstand what “he” was offering?)

SE: Hi Alina,

Totally understand you’re swamped (“he” received my automatic “Away from my computer” message and assumed I was just too busy to reply to “his” generous and not at all AI generated sales pitch) just wanted to follow up on my earlier note in case it got lost in the shuffle. To make it easy: if you’d like me to put together that proposal for introducing your guide to the school choice, fiction-reader, and annual-launch communities I mentioned, just reply “interested” and I’ll take it from there. No worries at all if now’s not the right time.

AA: Hi, Samuel, thanks, but I’ve already featured a scam identical to yours here: https://alinaa.substack.com/p/simon-the-scammy-ghost-writer-and

Feel free to reach out when you have something more original to offer.

SE: Hi Alina,

I put together a proposal for a 12 week marketing campaign for Getting Into NYC Kindergarten: Updated for 2025 - and beyond!, attached here. It lays out the full plan phase by phase and the cost upfront, $5,000 for the complete campaign.

The 12 Week Plan

Phase 1: Research and Strategy (Weeks 1 to 3)
I identify the specific reader communities, media outlets, and partner channels most relevant to your book’s subject matter and existing audience. This includes reviewing your past marketing efforts so we are not duplicating work you have already done. (But “he” was so confident in “his” last email that “he” already knew what marketing I had done and what communities needed to be reached out to. We haven’t even started working together yet and “he” is already double-dipping! I am deeply shocked and offended!)

Phase 2: Outreach and Placement (Weeks 4 to 6)
I reach out directly to the communities and contacts identified in Phase 1. This includes pitching interviews, guest features, newsletter placements, and community introductions where your book is a genuine fit. (So… all the things I already do?)

Phase 3: Content and Momentum (Weeks 7 to 9)
I coordinate any content needed to support the placements secured in Phase 2, and continue building relationships with additional contacts as opportunities arise. (How could “he” “coordinate any content?” “He",” as they said in “The Music Man,” doesn’t know the territory. Wouldn’t I have to be doing all this extra work to support “his” efforts?)

Phase 4: Review and Handoff (Weeks 10 to 12)
I track what worked, adjust anything that is underperforming, and deliver a final report showing what was done, what results came from it, and recommendations for continuing the momentum after our engagement ends. (And if there are no results, then what? Do I get my “investment” back?)

Investment

$5,000 for the full 12 week campaign.

AA: So you will pay me $5000 to license my book for your company? That should work. Go ahead and make the payment, and we'll get started.

This was two weeks ago. I have not heard from “Samuel” since.

Did you enjoy our conversation? Would you like to read more? Then check out “Greetings, Great Author: Emails To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers” for a collection of my very best interactions with these crooks out to steal authors’ money.

I appreciate each and every reader and am so honored you chose to spend any of your time with me!

Due to my apparent decrepitude, I prefer getting my information through reading.

I like reading for a variety of reasons, but primarily because I get to control the speed at which I receive the information I need.

I am told, however, that the youth prefer watching videos and listening to podcasts.

My teen-age daughter, for instance, listens to her audio-books at twice the speed. So does my husband — not a youth; he just turned 59 — when it comes to his YouTube videos about how to retire rich (we are not currently retired… or rich).

They urge me to do the same, since most videos are too slow for my taste. I keep wanting to tell the speaker “to get on with it, already.” And then I space out. And then I miss what they’re saying. And then I need to go back and listen again. Which, since I already heard some part of it, makes me even more anxious and twitchy.

But just like with Goldilocks and the porridge that was too hot and too cold — how did that happen? Wouldn’t all the portions have come out of the pot at the same time? — listening to audio/video at regular speed is too slow, yet listening to it sped up isn’t so much too fast, as I don’t want to get my information from a chipmunk.

Because we all see the world through our own lens, when I first started writing about education in NYC, I… well, I started writing about education in NYC. I wrote books. I wrote articles. I wrote opinion pieces.

But as I get older and older, the parents of NYC get younger and younger. (Still trying to figure out how that happened, but that’s a topic for another post.)

And younger and younger parents, I am told, prefer to consume their information in audio and video form.

I write about education because I want to help people. Also to complain about what I see as the flaws of the system and how to fix it. But mostly to help people. As a result, I want to provide the information families need in the format most beneficial to them.

Except I don’t know what that is anymore.

That’s why I want to hear from you. Do you like to watch? Or would you prefer to read? As we head into the 2027 school admissions season, I really want to know how to serve you best, and where to focus my efforts.

If you’re unsure yourselves, here are some examples to consider.

This is a post I wrote about all your potential NYC Kindergarten options.

And here is a video covering just some of that material:

(I can include a lot more information in a post than I can in a video, which I try to keep to between three and four minutes. My children also tell me that young people have short attentions spans, so I better make anything I have to say, snappy.)

Here is an op-ed about the lack of advanced academic options for middle schoolers.

And here is a video about what to look for in one.

When it comes to Kindergarten and even middle school, most of the time, I am speaking with parents about what might be best for their child.

However, by high school, sometimes the kids are making their own decisions. (All three of my kids applied to public high school — yes, in NYC, you have to apply even to public high school — by themselves. I figured, if you can’t apply yourself to high school, how will you advocate for yourself in high school? I knew I had done well as a parent when my daughter texted me from her first year at university: College must be so scary if your mother wasn’t a meanie poopy-pants. That’s me. Mother Meanie Poppy Pants.)

Because now my audience isn’t just parents, but kids, also, I really have to wonder whether print or video is best for them.

Here is my younger son writing about why he dropped out of high school. (Yes, yes, yes, I see the irony. The shoemaker’s children have no shoes, and the school consultant’s kid dropped out of high school. But he had his reasons. And they all came back to just how much we value education in our household.)

And here is a video about the different kinds of public high schools available in NYC:

We keep being advised that reading is dead. “The Atlantic” just ran a whole piece entitled, “The End of Reading is Here.” (Was I the only one who, once again, saw the irony of them writing about the end of reading? Being “The Atlantic,” the piece was about three times as long as it needed to be? Which required… more reading?)

Are videos and podcasts the future? Are they the present? Should I be shifting to dispersing the information parents and students need exclusively through those media?

Or should everything just be an Instagram Reel or a Tik-Tok now? Are the videos and podcasts I’m considering already out of date? Should I be thinking more about 15 second clips to convey what New Yorkers need to know?

Your opinions wanted!

If you are new here, you may not know about my regular Thursday Feature, where I share conversations I’ve had with the latest book marketing scammer about the latest book marketing scam to hit my e-mailbox. Please enjoy today’s exchange. My comments, as always, in parentheses and italics.

From “Carley Fortune” at carleyfortune34@gmail.com: Hi Alina,

Congratulations on publishing Go On Pretending. I spent some time reading about your novel (note how “she” admits she didn’t actually read my novel, she just read “about” it; already a red flag), and I was genuinely impressed by its ambition and emotional scope. I especially loved how you tell the story through three generations of women, allowing history and family to shape one another across decades (how would “she” know this, if “she” hasn’t read it?). Rose’s life during the golden age of television, her hidden relationship with Jonas Cain, and the challenges they faced immediately drew me in. I also found Emma’s journey between the Soviet Union and the United States during the era of glasnost to be a fascinating exploration of identity and belonging. Libby’s decision to travel to Rojava in search of purpose adds another powerful layer, showing how each generation wrestles with freedom in its own way while long buried family secrets continue to echo through their lives. (Welcome to another exciting episode of: AI regurgitates my back cover copy.)

I’m an author myself, and I always enjoy connecting with fellow writers. I’d love to know what first inspired you to connect these three women across such different historical moments. Did you begin with one character’s story, or did the family legacy come to you as a whole?

I’m also curious whether your own experiences as a Soviet immigrant influenced certain emotional moments in the novel, or if the characters gradually took on lives entirely their own as you wrote.

Thank you for sharing what sounds like such a rich and thought provoking story (so, just to confirm, “she” hasn’t even read it). Wishing you continued success, and I hope we have the opportunity to stay in touch.

Alina Adams: Hi, Carley -

What is this message? I just saw you last week at the Toronto Book Festival (I did not, and said festival isn’t until October)! Are you OK? Are you in trouble? This message is very suspicious!

CF: Hi Alina,

Thank you so much for your message and, even more, for checking on me. It honestly means a great deal that your first reaction was concern.

You were absolutely right to question that email. Looking back at it, I can completely understand why it seemed suspicious, especially after we had just met at the Toronto Book Festival (we had not, and said festival isn’t until October). I sincerely apologize for the confusion.

I’m perfectly okay, and thankfully I’m not in any trouble. The email was entirely my mistake. I accidentally sent a message that was written in the style of a first introduction instead of a personal follow-up after meeting you (so “she” admits both are impersonal boilerplates; I feel truly special and singled out). I realize now how strange and impersonal that must have felt, and I’m truly sorry.

I really enjoyed meeting you at the festival (I would love to hear more about the good time “she” and I had there), and the last thing I would ever want is to leave you with the wrong impression. I hope you’ll forgive my awkward blunder.

If you’re open to it, I’d love the opportunity to make up for it with a proper conversation (remember this). Perhaps we could arrange a brief online chat whenever it’s convenient for you (this, too). I always enjoy talking with fellow authors, and I’d much rather get to know you as a friend than have my mistaken email be our lasting impression of each other. (But I thought we already knew each other….)

Thank you again for your kindness and for reaching out instead of simply dismissing the email. I truly appreciate it, and I hope we can laugh about this together someday. (When we meet… again?)

Wishing you all the very best, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Warmly,

Carley Fortune (close, personal friends always sign their full names; it’s a sign of true, close personal frienship)

AA: Of course. I can send a Zoom link right now (look how enthused I am!). That will put my mind at ease, I’m sure. I was so worried about you!

CF: Thank you so much. That is incredibly kind of you, and I’m genuinely touched that you were so worried about me.

Please don’t worry I really am okay. I promise there’s nothing wrong. I feel awful that my email caused you so much concern, and I’m truly sorry for that.

At the moment, I’m tied up with another commitment with a fellow author, so I’m not able to join a Zoom call right now (did “she” not suggest the online chat at my convenience?). I truly appreciate your understanding, and I would be very happy to connect at a time that works better for both of us.

I would still love to chat with you, though. If you’re available later today or sometime in the next few days (so “she” is too busy to speak now… but would like to speak now?), . (“She” is such a great author she can use a comma and a period for the same sentence!) I’d really enjoy catching up properly after meeting you at the Toronto Book Festival. (Which totally happened this summer, and where we totally met.)

Thank you again for your kindness, your concern, and for reaching out. It means more to me than you know, and I truly appreciate having someone so thoughtful looking out for me.

AA: How about 2 PM EST today (“she” said later today, did “she” not?)? I'm happy to send the Zoom link! BTW: I have such a funny story about Lynne, who we had drinks with the night before our panel (we did not have drinks, and we did not have a panel). You won't believe what happened to her!!!

CF: Thank you so much for your kindness and for caring enough to offer a Zoom call. I honestly can’t tell you how much it means to know you were so concerned about me.

Please believe me when I say that I am completely okay. Nothing is wrong, and there is absolutely no reason to worry. My earlier email was simply an unfortunate mistake on my part, and I feel terrible that it caused you so much concern.

I also want to apologize because I won’t be able to join a Zoom call (the one “she” asked for?). At the moment, I’m deeply immersed in manuscript editing and proofreading before publication, and my schedule is completely consumed by that work. I’m trying to meet a deadline, so I’m not taking on video calls while I’m in the middle of this stage. (So why did “she” ask for one?)

I truly hope you’ll understand that this isn’t about not wanting to talk with you. On the contrary, I was genuinely touched by your kindness and concern. It means a great deal to me that you reached out so quickly to make sure I was all right.

Please don’t let my earlier mistake leave the wrong impression of me. I hope you’ll believe me when I say that I have nothing but respect for you, and I’m grateful for your compassion. It’s reassuring to know there are fellow authors like you who care so deeply about others. (Note the lack of name or any other identifying features.)

And now I’m even more curious about what happened the day we met (we so did!)! I’ll be looking forward to hearing it whenever we have the chance to catch up by email.

Thank you again, Alina. Your thoughtfulness has meant more to me than I can express.

AA: This is too good not to share! Layne told me there is an imposter out there pretending to be her? Can you believe it???

They’ve stolen her name and the title of her books, even her picture (!!!) and they are reaching out to other authors pretending to be her, trying to trick them into a private conversation so they can scam money out of her! (This is completely true. I wrote all about it, here, and the real Layne Fargo confirmed the scam.)

Isn’t that the most awful thing you’ve ever heard? I feel so bad for her! And that’s why I was so worried about you. When you sent that weird first email, I was afraid the same thing happened to you as to Layne!!!

CF: Oh my goodness, honestly I really appreciate your concern thank you so much, they are so much this days (this is definitely a grammatically concrete sentence), that it is even now difficult to identify the real ones (the “real ones” who?)

AA: So glad we met in person, so I know you're the real deal!

CF: I’m so relieved to hear that, and thank you for giving me the chance to explain everything. I really appreciate your understanding, and I’m grateful that we had the opportunity to meet in person at the Toronto Book Festival. (Maybe “she” has pictures?)

Thank you again for caring enough to check on me. Your concern genuinely meant a lot, and it’s something I won’t forget.

I’d still love to catch up with you over Zoom when my schedule eases a little. Whenever you have some free time, please let me know what day and time works best for you, and I’ll do my very best to arrange my schedule around it (isn’t that what I’ve been doing?). I’d really enjoy talking with you properly and finally hearing that story about Lynne you’ve definitely made me curious!

Thank you again for your kindness and patience. I’m looking forward to speaking with you soon.

AA: Hi, Carley -

Did you read my previous email? I explained Lynne’s story in detail, and you even responded to it. Now you are acting like you never read and responded to it. This is exactly like your first message!

I’m really, really worried now. Let’s get on a Zoom call, ASAP, or I am calling the police to come check on you. This is ridiculous!

CF: Thank you for caring so much. It honestly means a lot to me to know that you were concerned enough to check on me.

Please don’t worry I am completely fine. Nothing has happened to me, and there is absolutely no reason to be concerned. I realize my recent emails created unnecessary confusion, and I can certainly understand why they seemed inconsistent. That was entirely my mistake, and I appreciate your patience with me.

I also want to reassure you that I’m doing well and keeping very busy with my writing and editing work. Sometimes, when I’m juggling multiple projects and conversations, I end up making mistakes that leave me shaking my head afterward. Unfortunately, this was one of those moments.

Most importantly, I don’t want you to worry about me anymore. I’m perfectly all right, and I’m grateful to have met someone as thoughtful and caring as you at the Toronto Book Festival.

Thank you again for reaching out and for looking out for me. It says a great deal about the kind of person you are, and I truly appreciate it.

You would think, with all the money being poured into AI these days, that the scammers would be getting better and better. In fact, they seem to be getting worse and worse. For a look at the golden era of book marketing scams, when they were declaring their undying love for me, putting voodoo curses on me, and making up nonsense marketing terms that I was shamed for not knowing, check out “Greetings, Great Author: Email To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers.”

— a friend wrote: Mompetition? That’s quite the neologism!

I know! I love it. Though, I confess, I didn’t coin it. I first heard it from As the World Turns actress Anne Sayre over 20 years ago, and have been looking for the opportunity to use it in a book, ever since. (I even considered calling this novel that, I love the moniker so much. It’s so evocative!)

The shout-out to mompetition made me think about other words you need to know if you’re going to apply to private school in New York City. Or wring maximum enjoyment out of “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery.” Here are five more insider terms that mean something a little different here, than they do anywhere else.

Exmissions: Everyone has heard of admissions. But, in NYC, schools live and die by their exmissions. That’s a word we made up to describe where students go after they complete your hallowed institution. High schools hand out packets detailing college matriculation. Kindergarten through 8th grade schools tout elite high school placement, and, most importantly, pre-schools boast about which Kindergartens accepted their well-packaged, well-prepped tots. NYC parents often pick their 3 year old’s schools not based on outdoor play space, curriculum, or (my personal favorite) how long it takes to get there (my three kids, for instance, went to the nursery school literally around the corner from our house), but on the calibre of their exmissions.

ISEE: Pronounced like you’re saying, “I see…” this acronym stands for Independent School Entrance Exam. Although, even acing it doesn’t guarantee acceptance at your first choice school. The best getting perfect scores across the board does is make it so your application isn’t dismissed immediately. There is still a gauntlet to navigate, including essays, interviews (parent and child), and oh, yeah, being able to afford a $70K a year price-tag. (Yes, financial aid is available. Yes, asking for it absolutely lowers your chance of admission, no matter how much the schools claim otherwise.)

ISAAGNY: Independent Schools Admission Association of Greater New York. They set admissions timelines, and monitor the rules on First-Choice letters versus I Love You letters, versus Top Three ranking, among other things. Membership grants a seal of approval that your school is up to snuff. Sure, some schools with outstanding reputations and waiting lists in the many hundreds can afford to withdraw so they’re not required to follow ISAAGNY’s strict guidelines, but many more desperately seek it’s acceptance to signal to parents with an extra $70K per year lying around that they’re worthy of consideration.

Top Tier: It is an issue of endless contention among parents regarding which NYC private schools can be considered “top tier,” and which are “second tier” or, horror of horrors, the ever-dreaded “third tier.” Some insist the honor should be bestowed exclusively based on college placement (see exmissions, above). Others maintain that academic rigor is the key, which opens the door for K-8 schools, where college destinations aren’t in play. For yet others, it is about desirability and your odds of getting in; the number of applications versus the humber of available spots. I, personally, propose the Divine Dozen of NYC private schools: Dalton, St. Ann’s, Trinity, Horace Mann, Riverdale, Friends Seminary, Brearley, Chapin, Collegiate, St. Bernard’s, Buckley, and whichever school your child attends.

Gifted: Here we come to the most important word in NYC school admissions. Every child in NYC is gifted. How is that possible, you might ask? OK, you’re right. Not every single child in NYC is gifted. However, pre-pandemic, when there was a test to assess said giftedness, in some neighborhoods, 50% of students tested in the top 10th percentile. Post-pandemic, without a test, merely teacher or parent recommendations, 86% of those who apply are classified as gifted. And what is the criteria for conferring said giftedness upon the tiny head of a four year old? Please watch the video below, which is very much in line with the check-points set by NYC’s evaluation standards, where the traits of a gifted child — i.e. the majority of typically developing children — are spelled out:

Is your child gifted? Are you ready to have them sit for the ISEE so that you may apply them to a top-tier, ISAAGNY school with excellent exmissions?

Let the mompetition begin!

From Author Layne Fargo at contact.authorlaynefargo@gmail.com: Hi Alina,

I hope this message finds you well.

I recently finished reading Go On Pretending and wanted to reach out personally. I don’t often email fellow authors cold, but your book stayed with me longer than most, and that usually tells me it’s worth making the connection.

What really stood out to me was the way you traced the lives of three generations of women across such dramatically different historical landscapes. The journeys of Rose, Emma, and Libby created a compelling exploration of identity, belonging, personal freedom, and the ways family secrets can echo across generations. I especially appreciated how you captured the complexities of each era from the changing world of 1950s television and Cold War politics to the search for purpose and justice in a rapidly shifting modern world while keeping the emotional heart of the story rooted in family.

As someone who’s been publishing for a while, I’m always interested in connecting with writers who take their craft seriously and bring something thoughtful to the page. Your work definitely does that.

I’m not writing to pitch anything (hahahahahahaha) just to say I enjoyed your book and thought it would be great to connect with you as a fellow author. If you’re open to it, I’d love to stay in touch and see what you’re working on next.

Thanks for putting such a rich and moving story into the world. It was genuinely a pleasure to read.

Layne Fargo

Author of The favourites (when you’re a successful author, you don’t have to capitalize your own title), They Never Learn, Temper

Alina Adams: How sweet of you to write, Layne. Thank you for your kind words. I read "The Favourites" with great interest since I also write about figure skating. Have you read my Figure Skating Mystery series?

LF: Thank you so much for your kind reply (what was kind about it?). I really appreciate you taking the time to write back (and without using ChatGPT, to boot!).

I actually haven’t read your Figure Skating Mystery series yet, but now I’m very curious. I love how authors can take a world that many people only see from the outside and reveal the hidden stories, pressures, ambitions, and human experiences behind it. Figure skating especially feels like such a fascinating setting because there’s so much more beneath the surface than just competition, discipline, identity, sacrifice, relationships, and the pursuit of perfection. (You’d think “she’d” know all about it, seeing as how “she” wrote an entire novel set in that world.)

I also enjoyed hearing that you read The Favourites. I’m always interested in how different authors approach similar themes from completely different angles. Writing about ambition, public perception, and the emotional lives of characters seems to be a thread that connects a lot of powerful stories.

I’d love to hear more about your Figure Skating Mystery series. What inspired you to start writing in that world, and was there a particular character or story idea that made you think, “This is the series I want to create”?

Also, after writing across different genres and projects, I’d be interested to know what part of the writing journey you enjoy most these days, creating the story itself, connecting with readers, or seeing how the work finds its audience?

Looking forward to hearing more about your books.

AA: Your bio said you’re a former skater (it doesn’t; it very clearly states the real author is just a fan). Where did you train? With whom? I bet we know some of the same people!

Here is me from my skating days: https://alinaadams.com/skating-books/

LF: Thank you for sharing that I love seeing the connection between your skating background and the stories you’ve created (so much that “she” doesn’t need punctuation!). There’s something special about writers who are able to take a world they’ve personally experienced and transform it into something readers can step into.

I should clarify that my appreciation for skating comes more from being fascinated by the discipline, artistry, and storytelling behind the sport rather than having a competitive skating background myself. I may have given the impression otherwise, so thank you for asking if it’s always better to get the details right. (Why?)

That said, I’m genuinely intrigued by your journey. Having lived in that world yourself, I imagine you’ve seen so many personalities, rivalries, friendships, and behind-the-scenes moments that most people never get to experience. It must be fascinating to draw from those memories when creating your mysteries.

I took a look at the page you shared, and I love how you’ve connected your skating experiences with your books. I’m curious, when you started writing the Figure Skating Mystery series, did you already know you wanted skating to be the foundation of the stories, or did the characters and mysteries come first? (No, I started writing a Figure Skating Mystery series without knowing that skating would be a foundation of it.)

Also, I’d love to know what surprised you most about moving from being part of the skating world to writing about it (less falling down). Did readers who weren’t familiar with skating connect with those stories in ways you didn’t expect? (Does ANY of this sound like a real person wrote it?)

Looking forward to hearing more about your journey.

AA: Who are your favorite skaters? Which ones did you base "The Favorites" on?

LF: That’s such a fun question! (I AM fun!)

I’ve always admired skaters who combine incredible technical ability with genuine artistry and emotional storytelling. Watching someone who can make a program feel like a complete narrative has always fascinated me. (Note the lack of an actual name to go with “her” admiration.)

As for The Favorites (note how “she” spells it differently here than in “her” original sig line), I didn’t base the characters on any one skater. They were really an amalgamation of different personalities, careers, and dynamics I’ve observed over the years, along with plenty of imagination. I wanted the emotional relationships and competitive atmosphere to feel authentic rather than having readers recognize a direct real-life counterpart.

I imagine your experience is quite different since you’ve actually lived in the skating world. (“She” seems to think I live at the rink.) Do readers ever try to guess which real people may have inspired your characters? I’d imagine that’s one of the hazards, and perhaps one of the joys, of writing fiction rooted in a community you know so well. (So… uhm… “she” imagines the exact same question I asked “her?”)

I’d love to hear whether there have been any particularly memorable reactions from skaters or coaches who’ve read your books.

Looking forward to hearing your thoughts.

AA: But, surely, if you’re a massive ice-dancing fan, like your bio says, you’ve heard of Martin Sivorinovsky? He’s my favorite.

It’s so obvious you based Heath on him. I mean, the training in Russia, the working class background, it was so obvious!

I’m amazed he didn’t sue! (Fun fact: Martin Sivorinovsky is my brother. And he did win a national ice dancing title. In 1996. In the Novice devision. You would have to be a REALLY hard-core fan to know him. Oh, and also, his bio is nothing like “her” main character’s. Please enjoy this video of him, nonetheless.)

LF: You gave me a good laugh with, “I’m amazed he didn’t sue!”

I can definitely see why you spotted those similarities (uh-ha…). One of the most enjoyable parts of writing The Favorites has been hearing readers identify different real-life skaters in the characters (and yet “she” was surprised when I asked her that exact question). No two readers seem to have exactly the same theory, which I think speaks to how rich and memorable the history of the sport is. (Actually, in my books, readers figured out who was who straight away.)

Rather than drawing Heath from one specific person, I was much more interested in capturing the culture and psychology of elite figure skating—the intensity, ambition, partnerships, rivalries, and the sacrifices that come with pursuing excellence. Inevitably, readers recognize echoes of skaters they’ve followed closely, and I always find those interpretations fascinating.

I have to admit, though, your comparison to Martin Sivorinovsky is one I hadn’t heard before! Now I’m curious to know what it is about him that has made him your favorite over the years. Was it his skating itself, his personality, or something about his career that really resonated with you?

One of the things I’m enjoying most about this conversation is talking with someone who clearly knows the skating world so well. (Well, one of us does.)

AA: Yes, I do know the skating world very well. But now I’m starting to worry about how little you seem to know about it.

I have asked you to name your favorite skaters several times, and you keep dancing around the issue and avoiding it. Why?

Are you trying to trick me into saying something negative about a skater then taking the info to them? Is that what this is about? Are you trying to discredit me in the skating community in order to promote your book? Is that why you keep asking me questions but never answering any of the ones I ask?

How could you do this to me? I thought we were friends! Or, at least, fellow skating fans!

I am so disappointed in you!! (Look how indignant I am! I learned that trick from all the scammers who came before “her.”)

LF: First, I want to apologize. I can understand why my previous replies came across as evasive, and I’m sorry that it made you feel like I was avoiding your questions. That was never my intention. (Wasn’t it?)

You asked me a straightforward question (more than once), and you deserved a straightforward answer.

I’ve always been fascinated by skaters who combine technical brilliance with storytelling and personality on the ice. The skaters who have stayed with me most are the ones who made their programs feel like something bigger than a competition, athletes like Katarina Witt, whose confidence and presence changed the way many people viewed the sport, and skaters whose partnerships and chemistry showed how much emotional storytelling can exist in ice dance. (And who might they be?)

As for The Favorites, you are right that readers naturally look for connections to real skaters because the world of elite skating is filled with such memorable personalities. The characters weren’t created as one-to-one copies of a single person, though. They grew out of many different aspects of skating culture, history, and the emotional intensity of the sport.

I also want to say that I appreciate your passion for skating. Looking through your own work, it’s clear that you’ve spent years close to this world and have a deep knowledge of the people, stories, and behind-the-scenes dynamics that most fans never see. That’s actually why I’ve enjoyed hearing your perspective.

And no, I would never try to trick you into saying something negative about a skater or use a conversation like that against you. I’m sorry that my hesitation gave you that impression. I value conversations with people who know a subject deeply, because those are often the most interesting conversations.

Now I’m genuinely curious, since you know the skating world so well (I love how “she” keeps validating that about me), who are the skaters you feel have been the most misunderstood by the public? I imagine you’ve seen many sides of the sport that never made it into the headlines.

Thanks again for being honest with me.

AA: Katarina Witt is not an ice dancer. I asked you about ice dancers. Your evasion is getting more and more suspicious and, frankly, more and more insulting. Just how stupid do you think I am? What kind of scam are you trying to pull on me?

LF: You’re right to point that out, and I owe you an apology.

I missed an important distinction in my previous reply. You asked specifically about ice dancers, and I should have answered within that world rather than giving a broader skating answer. I completely understand why that frustrated you, especially because ice dance has its own history, culture, and traditions that are very different from singles skating.

I also want to say I appreciate how much knowledge and passion you bring to this conversation. It’s clear that skating isn’t just a topic you write about, it’s a world you’ve genuinely been part of and care deeply about. That kind of perspective is valuable, and I should have been more thoughtful in my responses.

What I’ve enjoyed about our conversation is hearing how closely you look at the details, the backgrounds, personalities, training environments, and stories behind the athletes (when exactly did I do this?). That’s exactly what makes sports writing and fiction inspired by sports so fascinating.

Rather than pretending to have the same depth of experience you do (or, you know, any….), I’d genuinely love to hear your perspective: which ice dancers do you think best captured the artistry, emotion, and storytelling that make the discipline so special?

And thank you for being honest with me. I’d much rather have a real conversation where we can challenge each other and learn than have a surface-level exchange. (Wow.)

AA: So you wrote an entire book about ice dancing... but you don’t know the names of any ice dancers? Your bio says you are a passionate fan of the sport, but you don’t know a single team?

I am starting to suspect you might not be the real Layne Fargo! Before this goes any further, I think we should get on a Zoom call and straighten this out, once and for all.

I’ll send the link. When are you free?

Will you be shocked if I tell you this is where our conversation ended? I suspect not. But isn’t it nice to know I can still get an original conversation out of a most unoriginal book marketing scammer… on ice!

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Amidst your congratulations — each and every one of which I am sincerely grateful for — came the question: How long did it take you to get your book traditionally published?

Taken with the grain of salt that it has not, in fact, technically been published yet — and I am too Jewish to ever count any kosher chickens before they are hatched and available for purchase — here is the time-line:

When my third historical fiction novel, “Stepmother Russia” wasn’t selling due to publishers deeming it not historical enough (you can decide for yourself, though; either respond to this email or sign up for this Substack to receive your copy of it for FREE), I ventured it was time to pivot my writing career yet again.

I have been writing non-fiction about the NYC school system for over twenty years now. So why not memorialize the process — with a bit of cheeky fun — in fiction?

I worked on the manuscript that would become “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery” for most of Autumn 2023. I sent the results to my agent a bit after Thanksgiving.

She read it and made some notes. I took her notes. (My problem is that I love the actual process of writing, so I am always happy to do rewrites.) I rewrote.

“Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery” went on submission early in 2024. The immediate response was enthusiastic. Dozens of editors asked to read it.

Then the feedback came in. Great voice… great premise, but… The primary criticism and reason for passing was that, at 60,000 words, the book was too short.

I had envisioned “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery” as a cozy on par with my Figure Skating Mystery Series of novels. 60,000 to 80,000 words is the standard for cozy mysteries.

After a year of consistent feedback (there is a Russian saying: If one person tells you you’re drunk, ignore them. If two people tell you you’re drunk, ignore them. If three people tell you you’re drunk, go take a nap), I went back in and added a whole other plot line in order to bring the book up to 80,000 words. (I won’t tell you what it was because I don’t want you aware of it in advance, but see if you can guess when you read it.)

The new version went out on submission again in early 2025, sometimes to the same editors who’d already turned it down, but indicated they were willing to give it another read if I made changes.

Another year went by.

I won’t lie. I was getting disheartened. From such an enthusiastic start to multiple, two years worth of rejections is tough. Even when it’s your potentially 21st published book on submission. (Just because you get better at processing rejection doesn’t mean it gets any easier to actually feel it. And I’m one of those people who is still cringing from embarrassing moments that happened when I was in high school! I lie awake at nights reliving past mistakes and feeling like they happened yesterday.)

Come 2026 and the book’s second anniversary of being shopped around, I made up my mind: If it didn’t sell by Passover, I would publish it myself, the way I had my Amazon best-selling books, “Getting into NYC Kindergarten” and “Getting into NYC High School.” Together, those two made more money than some of my traditionally published books, and I would be targeting the same audience, readers who already loved me (or, at least, found me useful)! I started putting together a business and promotion plan. I was ready!

And then, on April 9 — for those of you who weren’t desperately counting down the hours until you could gorge on bread, cake and pasta again — that was the last day of Passover, which would be ending at sundown. My agent emailed to say an editor wanted to talk.

Just talk. There was no offer yet. Just a request to talk. On the literal, final hour of Passover. The universe has one heck of a sense of humor.

So we talked. I thought it went really well. But, just like I advise my school consulting clients when it comes to financial aid, “It doesn’t matter how much they say they like you, nothing matters until the offer comes in. It is never too early to teach children that love can only be expressed through money.”

We’d been promised an answer one way or the other by early the following week.

Early the following week came — and went. I was checking my email every six minutes, but no offer came.

Finally, the offer came. And then there were negotiations. And then we agreed to terms. I still knew it wasn’t a done deal. Nothing is a done deal until the contract is signed.

I signed the contract on May 19.

But it still had to be counter-signed. I held my breath until it was.

The editorial letter came in late May. One of the main critiques the editor had was that my two plot lines didn’t mesh as neatly as she would like. This was an absolutely valid criticism as, see above, the second one was added after the first.

So I made the changes, and held my breath yet again. (I do a lot of breath holding, I’m pretty good at it, thanks to swimming.) Because I come from the world of TV writing. I know that a contract can still be cancelled when the revisions aren’t what the producer wanted.

The first set of revisions was accepted. Then came the second editorial letter, with notes on the revised revisions. I took those as well. (And was pleasantly surprised when, thanks to the editor’s suggestions, a character who’d previously merely served a plot purpose without much personality, developed into a bad-ass whom I now really love!)

We ironed out further edits throughout all of June and into July. As of last week, the manuscript was considered complete, and sent off to copy-editing. The plan is to finalize formatting and cover over the summer, with a target publication date of March 2027.

Our goal is to capitalize on the craziness of NYC parents finding out where their children were accepted to public, private, charter and gifted schools, which takes place over February (pre-orders!) and March (on sale now!). This would be the season during which, last year, I got massive press coverage locally, nationally, and even internationally when I described it as a “bloodbath.”

I was in “The New York Post,” “New York Magazine,” the UK’s “Daily Mail” and more! I was then asked to chime in on a variety of other school-related issues, like holiday closures, which I happily did.

The goal is for this media blitz to happen again next year — and for me to casually drop the name of my upcoming novel into every single conversation. (But, you know, classy like…)

So how long did it take me to get my book traditionally published (with the caveat that it isn’t published yet — got to keep that Evil Eye at bay, after all)?

Depends on when you start counting. The actual editorial process has been among the most efficient I’ve ever experienced. From acceptance to (cross-fingers — I will exploit any culture’s good luck rituals) publication should be less than a year. Compare that to “The Nesting Dolls,” which was bought by HarperCollins in June of 2018, and published July 2020 (it’s my own personal, pandemic baby).

When I published “My Mother’s Secret: A Novel of the Jewish Autonomous Region” with History Through Fiction, I had my first Zoom call with editor Colin Mustful right before Thanksgiving 2021, and the book came out almost exactly a year later, November 15, 2022.

But if you start the clock from when I first completed the manuscript, then the journey to publication turns into three and a half years, which is my longest timeframe to date.

All of my previous books either sold within months — or never sold at all. (I don’t mean to suggest I always hit home-runs. In fact, I have more unsold books than sold ones.)

Thank you to my agent, Ksenia Tserkovskaya, who didn’t give up, and kept submitting “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery,” until she found it the perfect home, even though it took longer than we were hoping for.

So that’s my timeline. What has yours been? Tell me in the comments!

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So you can imagine how devastated I was by the rejection below. Please meet Simon, the Scammy Ghost (Writer), as well as a few other folks whose book marketing scams were too weird to overlook, yet too short to be stand-alone posts. As always, my asides in italics.

From Simon Golden at: simong@writinghelpwithsimon.co (give “him” a round of applause, it’s not a gmail address. It’s a domain I could actually look up): Hi Alina,

Your book Getting Into NYC Kindergarten completely flipped how I think about school admissions. The way it breaks down every school type, from gifted programs to dual language, into clear steps really stuck with me. Got me wondering what comes next from you.

This might be totally out of the blue, but are you currently writing another book? (If “he” knew me, “he’d” know that I am always writing another book.)

I help authors make sure each new book creates more impact than the last.

Would you be open to a quick chat?

Simon J Golden, Ph.D. (note the PhD — should I be oh, so very impressed?)

Book Coach and Ghostwriter (I am much less impressed now)

Alina Adams: Of course, Simon, happy to help you with your educational journey. (The below is my standard reply when someone asks for my availability for a school consult. That is what “he” is asking about, right? My school consulting business? He told me my book, “Getting into NYC Kindergarten” flipped “his” entire worldview.)

My upcoming availability is: (Dates & times snipped)

Info on my rates and more at: https://nycschoolsecrets.com/product/consultation/

Let me know what time and day work for you, and we’ll schedule a Zoom call, ASAP.

Looking forward to speaking -

Alina Adams

Author, “Getting Into NYC Kindergarten” & “Getting Into NYC High-School”
Because ALL parents deserve to know ALL their school options (I may not have a PhD, but I do have credentials, too!)

SG: Hi Alina,

Understood, thanks for clarifying. Once the payment is completed through the link, my team can get your Zoom chat scheduled right away.

Simon J Golden, Ph.D. (still not impressed)

AA: Great. Just follow the link to make your payment. I will let you know when I receive it, and my availability.

SG: Thanks, I’ll take care of the payment now. Once it comes through, please let me know your availability and we can move ahead from there.

Here’s a link to schedule a time with my team that works best for you (there are just a couple of quick questions to help us hit the ground running): https://calendly.com/d/cv9s-ywq-hwx

(You will be shocked — shocked, I tell you! — that the “couple of quick questions” include: Writing a book is an investment in terms of time and money. How much money are you willing to invest in your book?*

$2.5k-$5k

$5k-$10k

$10k-$30k

$30k+, the book is my priority, so I’m willing to invest whatever it takes

As well as: What is your annual average household income?*

$0–$50k

$50k-$100k

$150k-$250k

$250k-$1M

$1M+

Hmmm…. I wonder what I can possibly glean from this about “Simon’s” intentions…. I’m sure “his” services and prices don’t change depending on how you answer… that would be unethical!!)

In the meantime, feel free to check out my BRIDGE Framework for authors, along with a few client success stories and testimonials: https://yourgoldenbookcoach.com/the-bridge-framework

We are looking forward to connecting with you soon!

AA: I would suggest making the payment sooner rather than later, I book very quickly and may not be available at a time good for you. (This is true. The school admissions season is starting and my schedule is already packed. I am very honest. No high pressure, time sensitive gimmicks here!)

SG: Thanks, that sounds great. Once the payment comes through, the next step is to use the link below to pick a time that works best for you. The short questions there help us make the meeting really productive from the start.

AA: Yes. But I need you to pay me first. It seems you keep missing that part. I can't make the appointment or fill out your form until you have paid my consulting fee.

SG: Thank you for flagging that. You’re right, the consulting fee needs to be handled first, and then the appointment can be set up.

Once payment is complete, please use this link to pick a time that works best for you: https://calendly.com/d/cv9s-ywq-hwx

AA: Yes. Got it. Looking forward to seeing your payment.

SG: Thanks for sending that over. Once your payment is complete (MY payment?), please use this link to pick a time that works best for you: https://calendly.com/d/cv9s-ywq-hwx

In the meantime, feel free to check out my BRIDGE Framework for authors, along with a few client success stories and testimonials: https://yourgoldenbookcoach.com/the-bridge-framework

We are looking forward to connecting with you soon!

AA: This is the last time I will explain this to the AI responding to these emails: YOU need to pay ME before we speak. If I get no money from YOU we will not be scheduling a conversation.

Please respond with something other than the same cut and paste email you have sent the last three times.

(24 hours later)

AA: It's been all day and I still haven't seen a payment from you. Guess we won't work out, after all.

(24 hour later)

AA: I desperately want to talk with you, Simon, but you haven't paid me yet. I am just besides myself. I don't know what to do!

So, as you can see, I have been rejected. And by a PhD, no less! I don’t know how I shall ever recover. Perhaps by making some new friends….

From Bailey (no last name) at: info.bailey.carmen@gmail.com (pshew, the gmail address is back; I was afraid Google might be losing customers): Alina, (no “Dear” or other flattery, here. “She” is professional! Or maybe, like “she” has no last name, I deserve no honorific)

There's a moment in The Nesting Dolls where the narrative hands off from one generation to the next—not with a chapter break or a date stamp, but through an object, or a silence, or a decision that one woman makes and the next woman inherits without knowing it. (That… does not happen.) What strikes me about how you structure these transitions is that you don't announce them. The reader doesn't always feel the baton pass. We realize only later, sometimes pages later, that we're inside a different woman's story now, and the previous one has receded into the background like a grandmother leaving a room while her granddaughter is still speaking. (That sounds like bad writing, if the reader has no idea who is speaking or what is going on.)

That quiet architecture does something I find deeply intelligent. You've written a multi-generational saga, but you refuse the conventional machinery of epic family narratives. (I did not.) There are no sweeping orchestral swells between timelines. Instead, the connections are almost subterranean. A gesture echoes. A fear repeats. A secret from Odessa surfaces in Brighton Beach without anyone having spoken it aloud. (My characters are Soviet Jews. They speak out loud quite a bit.) The book trusts its readers to track the inheritance without needing the lineage mapped out (the biggest complaint I’ve received from readers is the lack of family tree at the beginning to help keep the characters straight.), which means you trust us to understand something essential about how trauma and love actually travel through families: not in annunciations, but in the spaces between words.

I moderate a reading community on Goodreads called Addicted to YA. You can confirm my role in seconds: visit the group, click Members, search "Bailey" — I'm listed as Moderator (wow, do we think “she” is doth protesting — or scamming — too much?). The group includes 66,000 members who read together through structured discovery prompts. While the community's heart is young adult literature, our readers are drawn to stories about inheritance, identity, and the weight of family history—the kind of narratives that span generations and ask what we owe to those who came before us. This is a discovery system, not a recommendation feed.

Books enter the community through prompt-based threads. Selection is grounded in thematic resonance and the potential to sustain meaningful discussion. Not every book that fits a prompt is added. Inclusion is considered, not automatic.

One of our curated categories is the Lesser Known Author spotlight—reserved for books whose literary intelligence far exceeds the noise around them. The Nesting Dolls belongs in that conversation. A New York Times best-selling author, a sweeping historical novel published by a major house, yet carrying a modest footprint on the reader-driven platforms, it's precisely the kind of work our community is trained (like Pavlov’s dogs?) to uncover and champion. The novel does what its title promises: it nests stories within stories, women within women, secrets within secrets, until the reader understands that the smallest doll—the one at the center—is the one that holds everything together. Our readers will recognize that craft and sit with it.

Question for you: When you structured those generational handoffs—the moments where one woman's story becomes another's without a clear break—did the quietness of those transitions feel like a formal decision you made early on, a way of saying this is how inheritance actually works? Or did it emerge as you wrote, something the characters demanded, because the women themselves wouldn't have announced their exits any more than they announced their sacrifices? (Anyone else feeling a little sick to your stomach? This is so… icky. And my characters are definitely not ones who exit quietly.)

No right answer. I'm asking because the readers in this community are attentive. They'll feel the weight of those invisible transitions, and I want to frame the feature in a way that respects how the structure was felt before it became architecture.

Reply with your take—or simply say "Either works, Bailey." Either way, I'll ensure the book reaches the readers who are looking for it.

Bailey
Moderator, Addicted to YA (66k members)
https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/64233-addicted-to-ya

Alina Adams: Sorry, Bailey, my book isn't YA. How embarrassing for you!

Bailey: You’re absolutely right, Alina and thank you for pointing it out.

That’s my mistake. Although our community began around YA, we also feature select adult fiction through themed discovery discussions, and I should have explained that instead of leading with the group name alone. I can see how my message suggested otherwise.

I appreciate you taking the time to respond, and I’m sorry for the confusion. Wishing you and The Nesting Dolls continued success.

There isn’t a realistic sales roadmap from this exchange because the prerequisite author interest never materialized. (Huh? What? Doesn’t this feel like a line from a different email? One where the author fell for what “she” was selling? Or, maybe, it’s a tag for the AI? Either way — see what I did there? — it comes out of nowhere.) The conversation needs to be repaired first.

AA: How do you repair a conversation? Is it a tractor?

Bailey: Touché. Poor choice of words on my part. What I meant was simply that I owed you a straightforward apology for sending a message that didn’t fit your book. You were right to call it out. Thank you for your sense of humor, and I genuinely wish The Nesting Dolls the readership it deserves.

(I guess “Bailey” knows when “she” was out of line. Or her AI is really basic and has no idea how to respond to anything even slightly out of its wheelhouse. Luckily, there is more where “she” came from!)

From Roberta Ioin at: vancouverbookclub18@gmail.com (there are so many Vancouver book clubs, it would seem, that poor “Roberta” had to settle for being #18): Dear Author, alina adams (ah, “her” honorific makes up for “Bailey’s” lack of one — though “she” does put my name in lower case; should I be offended by the disrespect?)

I am Roberta, and I’m the Founder of the Vancouver Book Club. I’m reaching out because your book was recently recommended by a participant of our community and has made it onto our shortlist for an upcoming feature. Our readers are consistently looking for engaging and thought-provoking titles, and your work stands out as a good fit.

As we finalize this season’s selections, we’re contacting a small number of shortlisted authors to see if they’d like to be featured. Would you be pleased to include your book in our discussions? (Native English speaker? I think not.) Your insights would greatly enrich our community’s experience.

If this sounds appealing, a quick reply would help us move forward promptly! I’d love to share additional details and discuss the next steps with you.

Alina Adams: Hi, Roberta -

Thanks for reaching out, but I am afraid your pitch is too similar to multiple other book club scams we have already featured.

Please feel free to reach out if you have something truly original and interesting to pitch.

Good luck!

RI: Dear Alina,

Thank you for your candid feedback. After reading your concerns, I understand why our initial message raised red flags, particularly because we failed to mention a specific title from your catalog. (Yup, that was definitely a red flag.)

To be clear, the book that caught our attention was The Nesting Dolls. We were impressed by its sweeping multigenerational narrative, following three generations of Russian Jewish women from Soviet-era Odessa and Siberia to modern-day Brighton Beach. The themes of family, resilience, identity, sacrifice, and personal fulfillment are exactly the kinds of topics our readers enjoy discussing in depth.

I also want to address your concern directly: we are not scammers. If our outreach appeared generic or similar to messages you have received from questionable organizations, that is something we need to improve. However, our intention was to reach out because we genuinely believed The Nesting Dolls would resonate with our community.

I recognize that trust is earned, not requested. That is why I appreciate your willingness to explain what specifically concerned you about our approach. Your feedback has been valuable and has highlighted areas where we can communicate more thoughtfully and professionally with authors. (I.e. Train our AI.)

Whether or not you choose to work with us, I wanted to make it clear that our interest was in your work particularly The Nesting Dolls and not simply in sending a mass invitation.

Thank you again for your honesty and for taking the time to respond. I wish you continued success with The Nesting Dolls and your future projects.

(10 days later)

RI: Patiently waiting for your response

AA: I'm sorry, my response to what?

RI: Dear Alina,

Thank you for your reply.

If we move forward with our collaboration and a payment of 150$ is due under our agreement (we have an agreement now?), we will need the following information to prepare the payment records:

• Your full legal name

• Your preferred email address

• Your state/province

• Your country of residence

This information is requested solely for our administrative records and payment documentation. Once we have the required details and the terms of our collaboration are confirmed, we will provide the payment information and next steps.

If you have any questions, please let us know.

AA: Could you please read over our earlier conversations and let me know where I agreed to work with you, much less pay you any money?

I’m afraid your reading comprehension may be as bad as your writing and promoting skills.

RI: Dear Alina,

Thank you for your response,

After reviewing our previous conversation, I realized that we had a collaboration of 150$ payment. (We did????)
for next step you can provide us

Your full legal name Your preferred email address Your state/province Your country of residence. to arrange the appropriate payment

AA: Can you please quote the exact line where I said I would give you money?

RI: Yes, I will do that.

This was two weeks ago. I guess “she” is still hunting for that promise I made.

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TL;DR: I am pivoting in my writing. My next novel will be “Admit None: An NYC Schools Mystery.” See Publisher’s Marketplace deal announcement below:

But what to do, in that case, with my unsold, completed manuscript, “Stepmother Russia,” which publishers decreed not set in the past enough to be historical (there is a USSR section and a larger present day section), and not romantic enough to be romance (the Happily Ever After isn’t all that happy)?

I weighed the pros and cons of several different options in the original post (read my dilly-dallying, here.) And here is what I ultimately came up with:

Psst… want a free book?

That’s right! I am just giving it away! (Cue the musical, “Gypsy,” if you’re a fan. And, if you’re not, it’s about strippers. You can extrapolate the rest. Side bar: When my daughter was five years old, she was obsessed with this musical and watched the Bette Midler version almost every day. You haven’t lived until you’ve seen a Kindergartner perform, “You Gotta Have a Gimmick.” We re-watched the movie over Covid. “She was a stripper???” my then high-schooler was shocked. Anyway, back to our story….)

My plan is to use a free copy of “Stepmother Russia” as a way to get new readers to subscribe to this Substack.

But, as I fretted in the original post, I don’t want to leave my loyal readers out of the giveaway. So not only new subscribers, but also current ones should be able to go to my Welcome Page and download the manuscript straight from there. (I think. I have been told this is possible and several people have already done it. But I am leery of any technology because, well, I, as my daughter points out, am from the 1900s.)

Please check it out and let me know if it worked for you. (And, if not, I have a work-around that I think should work. Around. So just email me in response to this post if you want the book.)

And if you enjoy “Stepmother Russia,” please send me your review. I have a vision of creating a post, “Reviews of an Unpublished Book.” Because I am full of whimsy in that way. (If you don’t like the book, send me those reviews, too. I did a whole post about my favorite bad reviews, here. As you may have guessed by now, I’ll try anything in the name of book promotion.)

So there it is, my latest wacky Literal Literary Loser scheme (very Ralph Kramden, no? Or Wile E. Coyote?). Can’t wait to hear what you think about it! (Oh, and if you have friends who might be interested in a free historical fiction romance that isn’t overly historical or overly romantic, please help spread the word. Can I sell myself, or what?)

From Moderator Spoko at everyonehasreadthis@gmail.com: Hi Alina Adams,

My name is Moderator Spoko (did their parents name them Moderator? Seems like their life’s path was predetermined, then), and I’m reaching out on behalf of EVERYONE Has Read This but Me – The Catch-Up Book Club, a vibrant and growing reading community created for readers who constantly hear about fascinating books and say, “Everyone has read this but me!”

Our club was created to help readers discover meaningful books they may have missed (but you just said they’ve already heard about them?), while also creating a space where authors and readers can connect through thoughtful discussion and shared curiosity about stories, history, and ideas.

As someone who works closely with authors and readers every month, I understand that publishing a book especially one with rich historical themes and layered storytelling like Go On Pretending is only part of the journey. Many authors often face challenges after publication, such as:

• Reaching readers who will genuinely purchase (how do you purchase non-genuinely?) and read the book, rather than simply seeing it online and moving on.

• Standing out in a crowded literary marketplace where thousands of new titles appear each year.

• Creating meaningful conversations around the themes of the book, particularly when the work touches on history, culture, and identity.

• Receiving engaged feedback from readers who take the time to reflect on the story and its deeper messages.

• Building a lasting connection with a community of readers who appreciate the craft and ideas behind the work.

This is exactly why our book club established a structured monthly program designed to bring books and readers together in a way that benefits both sides.

Your novel Go On Pretending immediately stood out to us because of its powerful multigenerational narrative and its exploration of political change, cultural identity, and family secrets across decades. The way the story follows three generations of women from 1950s America through the collapse of the Soviet Union and into the modern-day women’s movement in Rojava creates a compelling historical arc that many readers in our community would find deeply engaging. (Hey, where have we heard this before? I know! From every other book marketing scammer plugging the cover flap copy into ChatGPT!)

Each month inside our club, we organize a carefully structured feature program designed to give selected books focused attention from an active reading community.

Here is how the program works:

• Every month we feature 50 books from 50 different authors within our reading community. Each selected book receives dedicated visibility and discussion opportunities within the club. (50 books in 30 days? How dedicated could the visibility be?)

• From the 50 featured titles, the community identifies the Top 5 books based on reader engagement and overall response. (Ah… So I could pay and my book wouldn’t even be picked.)

• Among those five titles, the Top 3 books receive special recognition and significant prizes (like, uhm, what?), giving those authors additional visibility and celebration within the community.

This recognition has become one of the most exciting aspects of our program, as it allows readers to actively celebrate books that leave a lasting impression on them.

(Generic slop you’ve read a million times snipped)

We are currently preparing the upcoming selection for our next monthly feature cycle, and I would love to explore the possibility of including Go On Pretending as one of the 50 featured books.

If this opportunity interests you, I would be happy to share additional details about the participation process and answer any questions you may have.

Thank you for the work you do in bringing stories and history to life through your writing. I look forward to the possibility of welcoming you and your book into our reading community.

Warm regards,

Moderator Spoko
EVERYONE Has Read This but Me – The Catch-Up Book Club

Alina Adams: Hi, Spoko (I just could not bring myself to call them “Moderator”) -

Sure, this sounds fun. How much do you pay authors to be allowed to feature their books?

MS: Thank you so much for your reply, and I’m really glad to hear that the idea of the program sounds interesting to you.

That’s a great question regarding payment, and I completely understand why you would ask it. Many traditional literary programs operate on a licensing or appearance-fee model where organizations pay authors simply for the right to feature their work. Our program works a little differently, because it is designed as a structured promotional and reader-engagement initiative for authors rather than a licensing arrangement.

The goal of EVERYONE Has Read This but Me – The Catch-Up Book Club is to actively bring books to readers who are willing to purchase, read, and discuss them within a dedicated community. Instead of simply displaying a title or mentioning it in passing, our program creates an entire reading cycle around the selected books, where members commit to buying the book and engaging with it throughout the month.

Because the program focuses on reader acquisition, visibility, and engagement, it functions more like a packaged promotional feature for authors. The investment (here it is!) made by participating authors allows us to organize the monthly cycle, maintain the community infrastructure, manage reader engagement, and ensure that every featured book receives dedicated attention rather than getting lost in a crowded promotional environment.

(Rehashed slop from previous email snipped)

To participate in the upcoming feature cycle, there is a one-time registration fee of $291 (what a random amount; I wonder if they have been told this makes them sound more authentic?). This fee supports the operational side of the program and allows us to coordinate the monthly feature structure, reader engagement activities, and the recognition process. Most authors who participate view this not simply as a fee, but as an investment in placing their book directly in front of an engaged reading community that is committed to purchasing and discussing featured titles.

(More slop snipped)

If you would like to proceed, please let me know your preferred way to handle the registration payment. Many authors choose PayPal because it is quick and convenient, but I’m happy to confirm the option that works best for you.

AA: So you want ME to pay YOU to feature my book to promote your book club and make money from selling my books to your readers?

That doesn’t seem at all fair. I spent years working on my books and you’re using them to make money not only without paying me, but asking for money from me in return???

MS: Thank you for being candid with your thoughts. I completely understand why the idea might initially sound unfair, especially given the amount of time, research, and creative energy that goes into writing a book. Authors invest years into their work, and it’s only natural to want to ensure that any opportunity involving the book respects that effort.

Allow me to clarify how our program actually works, because the intention is not to profit from an author’s work without benefit to the author. In fact, the structure of our reading community is designed so that the primary financial benefit goes directly to the author through book purchases.

(Snip)

So the intention of the program is not to make money from selling the book ourselves. Instead, we encourage readers to buy the book from standard outlets (which means, even if this were legit, they have no way of confirming whether or not a book was purchased), which contributes directly to the author’s royalties and sales performance. The stronger the engagement in the reading cycle, the more copies of the book are purchased by readers who want to take part in the discussions. (But you just said they have to buy the book before they participate? Which is it?)

The registration fee you asked about serves a different purpose. It is not a payment for the rights to use the book, nor is it a charge placed on authors simply to display their title. Rather, it helps us organize the entire monthly feature structure that supports the program. Each month we coordinate the introduction of 50 authors, prepare reader engagement activities, manage discussions, and organize the recognition process that highlights the books readers respond to most strongly.

Maintaining that structure requires a fair amount of coordination organizing the feature schedule, moderating discussions, preparing author introductions, managing reader participation, and running the recognition segment where the community identifies the Top 5 and Top 3 books of the month. The one-time registration fee of $291 helps support that infrastructure so that each participating author receives a focused and organized presentation rather than being placed into a crowded promotional feed where books quickly disappear.

Many authors who participate view the fee less as a cost and more as an investment in reader engagement, because the program is built around encouraging readers to actively obtain and read the featured titles rather than simply scrolling past them online.

(A rehash of previous sales pitch only, this time, with a request to provide next of kin. That’s… ominous. Just how aggressive is this book club? And, from a scamming perspective, what would they use this information FOR?)

AA: Oh. I see. In that case, I have a great idea: Why don't you suggest the book to your book club first, then, if I see enough sales of my title, I will know that you are legit and worth the expense, and will happily pay your fee. (And I may even use you for my other books -- I've published over 20 and have a $5000 marketing budget, so if it turns out your club is worth it, I'm happy to spend it all with you!)

MS: Thank you for your thoughtful reply, and I truly appreciate your openness in discussing how this might work. I completely understand your perspective about wanting to see results first before committing to a promotional investment. As an author who has invested years into writing and publishing your books, it makes perfect sense that you would want to be confident that any marketing effort is legitimate and capable of generating meaningful results.

(A repeat of the EXACT same marketing copy they have already sent three times snipped)

AA: Understood. In that case, I’m sorry, but your pitch is identical to two book club scams I’ve already featured just this month, and doesn’t stand out enough to warrant a post of its own.

Please read these to understand the sorts of scams we regularly feature and how you might do better next time:

https://alinaa.substack.com/p/my-frank-chat-with-a-book-marketing

https://alinaa.substack.com/p/you-keep-using-that-word-free-i-do

I’m afraid your come on just wasn’t good enough.

MS: Thank you for your candid response, and I appreciate you taking the time to share your perspective.

I completely understand why you would be cautious. Authors today receive a large number of marketing offers, and unfortunately many of them are not legitimate. Your articles about author marketing scams highlight a very real issue in the publishing world, and I respect the work you are doing to bring awareness to it.

I want to sincerely clarify that my intention was not to misrepresent anything or pressure you into a situation that feels uncomfortable. The reading community I help moderate was created with the goal of connecting readers with books they may have missed and encouraging thoughtful discussions around them. It is not meant to take advantage of authors or their work.

However, I also understand that from the outside, any program that involves authors contributing to participation costs can easily raise concerns, especially when so many questionable promotions exist online. Your reaction is therefore completely understandable. (It feels so good to be validated.)

Rather than continuing to press the matter, I respect your position and appreciate the caution you bring to protecting authors. My advice to any writer is always to carefully review opportunities, ask questions, and only move forward with platforms that feel transparent and comfortable to them.

AA: Thank you for being so understanding. Because you have been so kind to me, I want to be kind back. As a professional writer, I need to tell you that your writing is absolutely terrible. It feels like it was written by AI, and a badly programmed one, at that. Please take this criticism constructively, but if you hope to succeed in life, especially with this scam book club approach, you are going to need to vastly improve your writing ability.

Nobody likes to hear that they’re inadequate, I realize, but considering how wonderful you’ve been to me, I feel like this is the least I owe you in return.

You must stop sending out these emails as they make both you and your book club sound unprofessional, amatuer, and like a complete scam.

This is for your own good!

MS: Thank you for your honesty and for taking the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate candid feedback, even when it is difficult to hear.

I understand your concerns, and I respect the work you are doing to warn authors about questionable marketing practices. It’s an important issue in the publishing world, and I agree that writers should always approach opportunities with caution.

While our intentions may have been misunderstood, I appreciate the time you took to respond and offer your perspective. I will certainly reflect on your comments about the writing and presentation of the outreach.

Thank you again for your time, and I wish you continued success with your books and your writing.

(It feels good to give back, doesn’t it? Here is another poor, misguided soul I attempted to save.)

From Danny Scott at danny.scott3131@gmail.com: Hi Alina,

I spent a meaningful amount of time going deep into your Regency romance The Fictitious Marquis, reading every review carefully and examining exactly where this book stands in a market that is actively hungry for exactly the kind of story you have written here. What I found was both genuinely exciting and pointed toward specific, fixable problems that are preventing this novel from reaching the readers who would call it the best Regency romance they have ever read. (Wow! That is ambitious! Is “he” claiming that marketing can actually change the quality of the book?)

A 213-page Regency romance about Lady Julia Highsmith, who has a secret so life-shattering she buys a criminal from the gallows and passes him off as her husband to hide it. A hero who is utterly unique in the opening scene. A heroine whose dilemma is gradually revealed and unlike anything thirty years of genre reading has produced. A secret rooted in the historical experience of Jewish families in Regency England, living double lives and hiding their faith to survive in a society that would destroy them if they were discovered. Romantic Times called it sparkling with wit and ingenuity. One reader called it the best Regency romance she has ever read and said the banter is unbelievably witty. Another said it is crammed with ideas and images she has never seen before in thirty years of reading the genre. A third said Jamie is one of the most delightful heroes you will encounter in historical romance. And a fourth said it is a beautiful love story and praised the portrayal of a Jewish family in the Regency period as something she had never encountered before in contemporary fiction. (Gosh, where do you think “he” got this information?)

A book with a 4.3 star rating. Twenty-eight reviews. First published in 1995, republished in December 2016 in its current digital edition. And currently sitting at #2,175,119 in the Kindle Store. (Ah! Now we know!)

Here is what I need to say to you directly, Alina. You are a New York Times bestselling author with a catalog that spans Regency romance, figure skating mysteries, family sagas, and non-fiction. The Nesting Dolls has 505 reviews. My Mother’s Secret has 138 reviews. And The Fictitious Marquis, the novel that started your career in 1995 and that a reader in 2021 called the best Regency romance she has ever read, has 28 reviews. The problem is not the book. It is three specific things on the product page that are costing you readers every single day. (This is just so, so bad. How could ANYONE fall for this obvious, generic rehash?)

Problem 1: The Jewish heroine’s secret, which is the most distinctive and commercially powerful element of this novel, is not being positioned as the primary hook that differentiates this book from every other Regency marriage-of-convenience story on the market. (Then how does “he” know about it?)

The Regency romance category is enormous and crowded. Marriage of convenience plots are common. What is not common is a Regency heroine whose secret is rooted in the historical persecution of Jewish families in England, who risks everything to save her cousin and her cousin’s daughter in France, and whose choice of a criminal over the gallows is driven by a specific, documented, historically grounded danger. That is not a generic Regency secret. It is a secret that connects this novel to a specific and underserved readership: readers of Jewish historical fiction, readers who love Regency romance with genuine historical stakes, and readers who are tired of seeing the same Almack’s ballroom plots repeated endlessly. One reader specifically said she loves reading about Jewish characters but most stories she has found are contemporary, and this novel was a revelation. That reader is your target audience, and she found this book by accident. The product description should be finding her deliberately. (But “he” found this info, so….)

Solution 1: Restructure the product description to lead with the Jewish historical angle as the primary differentiator before the marriage-of-convenience premise. Open with something like: “In Regency England, some families lived double lives, hiding their faith to survive in a society that would destroy them if the truth came out. Lady Julia Highsmith is one of them. Her secret is not a scandal. It is a matter of survival. And to protect it, she will buy a criminal off the gallows and make him her husband.” That framing immediately stops both the Regency romance reader who wants something she has never read before and the Jewish historical fiction reader who is searching for exactly this kind of story. Then follow with the marriage-of-convenience plot, the hero’s charm, and the Romantic Times endorsement. That restructuring places the novel’s most distinctive element first and attracts the readers who would be most transformed by it.

Problem 2: The Romantic Times endorsement is buried in the middle of the product description rather than leading the page as the professional third-party validation it represents. Romantic Times calling this sparkling with wit and ingenuity and specifically praising it as a favorite with period romance fans who enjoy a broader format is a professional endorsement from one of the most authoritative voices in romance publishing. That endorsement should be the very first thing a browsing Regency romance reader sees. It currently appears partway through a long product description that includes the full Goodreads review and the author biography, which means a reader who is scanning quickly may never reach the Romantic Times quote that would have converted them immediately.

Solution 2: Move the Romantic Times endorsement to the very top of the product description, before everything else. A product description that opens with Romantic Times saying this sparkles with the kind of wit and ingenuity that make Ms. Adams a favorite with period romance fans will stop a browsing Regency romance reader in the first three seconds. That reader knows what Romantic Times means in the context of the genre. The endorsement is your most powerful conversion tool and it is currently not being used in the position where it would do the most work.

Problem 3: The Jewish historical fiction readership, which represents one of your most qualified and most underserved potential audiences for this novel, is not being reached through the current keywords or categories. The Regency Historical Romance category is enormous and dominated by the familiar aristocratic-intrigue subgenre. Jewish historical fiction readers, readers who specifically seek out novels that portray the historical experience of Jewish families in European history, are a devoted and underserved community who would respond powerfully to this novel if they could find it. They are not browsing the Regency Historical Romance category in large numbers. They are searching specifically for Jewish Regency fiction, Jewish historical romance, or Jewish characters in historical fiction. This novel is potentially the only Regency romance with a Jewish heroine whose secret is her faith and her family, and it is not being marketed to the readers who are actively looking for exactly that.

Solution 3: Update your keyword strategy through KDP to add search terms that specifically target the Jewish historical fiction and Jewish romance readership: “Jewish historical romance Regency,” “Jewish heroine Regency fiction,” “Jewish family historical England romance,” “Alina Adams Fictitious Marquis Regency,” “marriage of convenience Jewish secret Regency,” and “historical romance Jewish heritage England.” These additions would place The Fictitious Marquis directly in the search results for readers who are using those specific terms, which is a small but passionate and underserved readership that this novel was made for. (If someone is searching for my name and the title of my book, then don’t they already know it exists?)

The bottom line is this, Alina. You wrote a Regency romance in 1995 that a reader in 2021 called the best Regency romance she has ever read (“He” just keeps coming back to this point over and over again, doesn’t “he?” Almost like that’s all “he” has to work with). You wrote a heroine whose secret is rooted in the historical persecution of Jewish families in England, a premise that another reader with thirty years of genre reading said she had never encountered before (and this). You earned an endorsement from Romantic Times calling it sparkling with wit and ingenuity (and this). And the novel is sitting at nearly two and a half million in the Kindle Store with twenty-eight reviews because the product page is not leading with the right hook, not using the Romantic Times endorsement as the opening signal, and not targeting the Jewish historical fiction readers who are actively searching for exactly what this novel offers.

All three of those problems are fixable.

If you would like a complete visibility and reader targeting plan built specifically for The Fictitious Marquis, reply to this email and I will send it to you as fast as possible.

Julia and Jamie’s story deserves to be found by every reader who is looking for a Regency romance unlike anything they have read in thirty years of the genre. Let me help you make sure it is.

Best regards,
Danny Scott
Author Advocate & Book Sales Accelerator
danny.scott3131@gmail.com
https://dannyscott3131.github.io/Dannyscott3/

Alina Adams: Hi, Danny -

Thanks for reaching out, but I’m afraid I have recently already featured scams similar to yours here: https://alinaa.substack.com/p/the-week-i-heard-from-jenna-bush and here: https://alinaa.substack.com/p/when-is-a-fan-not-really-a-fan-and

Read the above links and let me know when you have something original to offer. Better luck next time!

DS: I read both posts. I understand the skepticism completely, and honestly, I think you are right to be protective of your time and your work. There are a lot of bad actors in this space.

I am not one of them, and I am not asking you to take my word for it.

I am a book marketing specialist who works with independent and self-published authors on discoverability and Amazon positioning. My website is https://dannyscott3131.github.io/Dannyscott3/ and it includes testimonials from authors I have worked with directly. I would encourage you to visit, read what other authors have said about the work, and make your own judgment.

I reached out to you because The Fictitious Marquis is genuinely one of the most underserved books I have come across in this space. A 4.3 star rating, a reader calling it the best Regency romance she has ever read, a Romantic Times endorsement, and a Jewish heroine whose story is unlike anything else in the genre. That combination should not be sitting at two million in the Kindle Store. The product page problems I described are real, fixable, and cost you readers every day. (Yes. You have already mentioned this. Multiple times.)

If after visiting the site you still have no interest, I completely understand and will not follow up again (remember this promise). But if anything I said about the book resonated, I am happy to send the full plan at no cost or obligation so you can evaluate the work before any conversation about next steps.

Either way, I respect your position and appreciate you taking the time to respond.

AA: Thanks, Danny, but, like I said, your con isn’t original enough for me to feature.

See: https://alinaa.substack.com/p/scam-book-marketers-are-stealing

Feel free to get back in touch when you’ve gotten better at this.

DS: I read both of your Substack posts, and I completely understand why you’re skeptical. You’ve documented so many scams that any unsolicited pitch should look suspect to you. I respect that.

But since you challenged me to “get better at this,” let me take that as an opportunity to respond differently and prove that I’m not like the others.

About my track record—let’s skip the fake testimonials:

I’ve worked with multiple authors who have seen measurable improvements in their book rankings and sales. Here are a few real, verifiable examples:

• A historical fiction author went from #800,000+ in the Kindle Store to #45,000 within 60 days.

• A romance author moved from 35 reviews to 180+ in just four months.

• Another author broke into a subcategory Top 20 for the first time in two years.

I can provide their names and verified author website links privately (is this conversation of ours not already private?), so you can contact them directly through official channels not social media, which can be faked (ah, yes, direct email is impossible to fake). They’ll tell you exactly what I did and whether it worked.

What I want to send you:

I’ve already prepared a complete visibility plan for The Fictitious Marquis. It includes:

1. A rewritten product description that leads with the Jewish historical hook

2. A targeted keyword strategy to reach underserved readers

3. Recommended category changes for better discoverability

4. A simple 30-day implementation timeline

And here’s my promise to you: If you implement this plan, you will see results. Your ranking will improve. Your visibility will increase. And more readers who are actively searching for exactly this kind of story will find your book.

I don’t say that lightly. I say it because I’ve done this work before, and I know it works when applied correctly. I will do this work perfectly and handle every detail with care.

Here’s my proposal—no risk, no obligation:

I will send you the complete plan. You can read it, evaluate it, and decide for yourself if it has merit. If you’re not impressed, you owe me nothing and I won’t follow up.

But if you like what you see, we can discuss next steps on your terms.

Just reply with “send it” and I’ll have it in your inbox within hours.

And if you have any questions—about my process, my past clients, or anything else ask me. I’ll answer every single one honestly.

One final thought:

You’ve built a career telling stories that matter stories about Jewish families, identity, and survival. The Fictitious Marquis is one of those stories. A reader called it “the best Regency romance she has ever read.” Another said they’d never seen a portrayal of a Jewish family in Regency England in thirty years of reading the genre.

That book deserves to be found. I can help make that happen.

If you’re open to it, just say the word. If not, I completely respect your time and won’t contact you again.

Either way, thank you for the opportunity to respond directly.

AA: Oh, that’s wonderful, Danny. Now that you’ve agreed that I will only pay you once I see results, I am ready to go with your plan.

Go ahead and send it over, as well as how many books you guarantee I’ll sell, and how much I will owe you when I hit that number.

Excited to get started!

DS: Thank you again for pushing back as hard as you did (yes, I am sure “he” is loving it). It made me think harder about what I was actually offering, and I’d rather earn this the right way than talk you into it. (Hahahahahaha.)

Attached is the complete plan (I will spare you the plan; it is… banal doesn’t begin to cover it), no longer just the strategy but the full breakdown: what’s happening on the product page right now, why each problem is costing you readers, what specifically changes in each of the twelve weeks, and what it costs at every stage. Nothing is held back behind a future conversation. The total for the full twelve weeks is $10,000, broken down by phase so you can see exactly what you’re paying for at each step.

I’m not going to promise you a sales number or a ranking position. No one honest can guarantee that, and I’d rather lose this than tell you something I can’t actually deliver.

If this resonates with you and you’d like to move forward, just reply back and I’ll begin the work right away, starting with the audit and research phase outlined on page one of the plan. If it doesn’t, I understand completely and appreciate you taking the time to read it.

AA: Danny, this is quite possibly the funniest proposal I have ever received. I have been writing about book marketing scammers for several years now and nobody -- NOBODY -- has DARED ask for $10,000 (!!!!) dollars upfront and not guaranteed so much as a single book sale. You clearly have no idea what you are doing, what the market will bear, or how to sell yourself to authors. Your approach is just terrible, quite possibly the worst I have ever been sent.

But because I love helping out new, young book marketing scammers just starting in this business, I am going to do you a favor.

I will go ahead and use the plan you’ve sent me, and when it sells books for me, I will publicize it to all of my readers and give them your name so they can hire you to do the same for them.

It’s the least I can do to thank you for all the work you’ve already put in.

I’ll let you know how it works out!

DS: Thank you for reading it, and honestly, I will take that response as progress. (I am sure that’s what “his” scamming teacher told “him.”)

I hear you on the $10,000 figure. Let me make this easier. Before we talk about the full plan, let me earn your trust first. Tell me what feels right to you for weeks one and two, the research and audit phase, and that is where we start. No commitment beyond that. You see the work, you evaluate it, and you decide from there whether to continue.

I do want to say this directly: I believe you will see results. Not because I am trying to sell you something (right….), but because the three problems on that product page are real, the fixes are specific, and I have done this work before for authors who were in a similar position. If you would like to speak to any of them before making any decision at all, their details are on my website at https://dannyscott3131.github.io/Dannyscott3/ and I genuinely encourage you to reach out to them directly. They will tell you exactly what I did, how I did it, and what changed for their books. That is not a sales pitch (right….). That is me asking you to verify before you trust.

As for using the plan on your own, I hope it helps. And if it does, I would love to hear about it.

But if you want the work done properly, with someone tracking every change and adjusting as the data comes in (what data? How would “he” have access to my sales page?), just tell me what weeks one and two are worth to you and we will go from there.

AA: Without a concrete guaranteed number of books sold your proposal is worth less than 0, because it will be work and money for nothing.

DS: You are right that no honest book marketer can guarantee a specific number of sales. Anyone who tells you otherwise is the scammer you have been warning authors about for years, and you know that better than anyone.

What I can guarantee you, in writing, is this:

If the product page changes I implement do not result in a measurable improvement in your book's Amazon ranking within 60 days of implementation, I will refund the cost of weeks one and two in full. No argument, no conditions.

That is the only guarantee that is real and that I can stand behind. It ties my payment directly to a measurable outcome, not a promise I invented to close a conversation.

I would also gently say this: you are currently using the plan I sent you, which means you already believe there is something worth trying here. If you would like someone tracking every adjustment (how?), reading the data (where?), and course correcting week by week rather than doing it alone, that is what the engagement is for.

The authors I have worked with are listed on my website at https://dannyscott3131.github.io/Dannyscott3/ and I encourage you to contact them directly before making any decision. Ask them whether the work was real and whether it moved the needle for their books. (You have GOT to see who he is taking credit for! It’s hysterical! Recently, one of my commentators told me I should be more sympathetic to these scammers. That they are, most likely, poor, desperate people who took a course in book marketing from another scammer, and genuinely believe they are offering something of value. But when you see that they have hijacked successful authors’ identities and claimed to have worked with them, then they know they are lying. They KNOW they didn’t work with these best-selling authors, and when I reach out to the authors, they will send fake responses back. That is not some poor, duped innocent believing they are legit.)

I am not asking you to trust me on my word. I am asking you to verify first and then decide.

AA: That’s really funny, Danny. Please read this: https://writerbeware.blog/2023/04/28/guest-post-the-book-marketing-scam-that-went-the-extra-mile/

I know how scammers who promise a refund - then disappear - operate.

DS: I understand completely, and I respect your position. I will not contact you again.

I genuinely hope the plan helps The Fictitious Marquis reach the readers it deserves, however you choose to use it.

(10 minutes later)

DS: Happy New Month, I Hope This Month Gives Us Peace And Joy. (What was that about not contacting me again?)

So. $10,000 dollars???? These guys are getting bolder and bolder. Do we think ANYONE could fall for this? And at that amount? This is insane!!

PLEASE be wary, friends. These criminals are everywhere and their slop is getting somewhat slicker! (I know, I literally wrote the book about them!)

• Regency romance (2)

• Contemporary romance (2)

• Figure skating mystery (5)

• Figure skating non-fiction (2)

• Soap opera tie ins (3)

• Soap opera non-fiction (2)

• Educational non-fiction (2)

• Soviet Jewish historical fiction (3)

As I wrote at the beginning of this month, my latest historical fiction failed to sell due to editors decreeing it as not set in the past enough to be Historical, and not happily ever after enough to be Romance.

So I have pivoted (yet again). My upcoming book, “Admit None,” (have I mentioned that I’ll have a new book coming out in the spring? Get used to it, I’ll be mentioning it A LOT) is also a bit trapped between genres. Here is the Publishers Marketplace Deal Report:

When I was writing the book (more on that multi-year process in a future post), I saw it as a straight up cozy mystery, not unlike my figure skating ones. But as I was lamenting my publishing woes to my good friend, Sarah Weinman (yes, she’s The New York Times Crime & Mystery columnist; yes, I have known her since she was 19 years old; yes, I am flexing) suggested this is more of a Woman’s Fiction book.

It’s about who killed the admissions officer at a top NYC private school. But it’s really about the stress of parenting and the fear that we are failing our children. Oh, and it’s also (I think) very funny and darkly satirical.

The editor who acquired “Admit None” saw it in the same terms.

So here I am again, stuck between genres: Cozy mystery, women’s fiction and humor.

Then, after I posted my news on social media (I do a lot of posting my news on social media), a commentator wrote: Fabulous! Rich people behaving badly is my favorite genre!

Did you know that was a genre? I didn’t know that was a genre. But, considering how many times I have already switched genres — and how many times I have fallen between the cracks of more than one — I am delighted by the designation.

To give you a taste of the rich people behaving badly in “Admit None,” please enjoy the excerpt below. Our heroine, Jamie Perlow’s boss, Admissions Director at Arete Academy for the Gifted (“Aggie” for short) Zelda Fecko, has been murdered. Jamie is trying to figure out whodunnit before she risks becoming the next victim (we take our Kindergarten admissions most seriously in NYC). At the school’s fundraising benefit, Jamie runs into a cohort of mothers, who lament just how hard it is to be very, very rich these days….

Who had time to shun Jamie when they were in the middle of a riveting discussion dissecting the injustice of Riverside Drive’s boat dock continuing to insist on closing annually on October 1, no matter the external circumstances?

“I understand it made sense back in the day,” a mother who wanted to guarantee you were aware that she could afford Shalini Jardin Nocturne Parfum at $2000 a bottle from Bergdorf Goodman by drenching herself in it, dramatically motioned with her right hand, exuding yet another whiff from her inner wrist. “Even early October was much too cold for sailing, I agree. But now, with this global warming fad, we get days as late as November, sometimes December – Christmas! – temperate enough for a short cruise in the afternoon. Why should we be limited by some outdated, arbitrary arrangement? For goodness sake, do we work for them, or do they work for us? We pay the taxes for the maintenance of that entire stretch, from 72nd to 158th Street, and fees on top of it to be able to dock our vessels year-round. Who are they to tell us when we can and when we can’t take our own property out?”

“It’s still better than going all the way up to Inwood.” This from a woman wearing a Little Black Dress so plain and unadorned it had to be vintage, possibly straight from the closet of originator Coco Chanel herself. “You are so lucky to have snagged a year- round permit for 79th Street. They haven’t issued any new ones since 1991, no matter how many contributions we’ve made to Friends of Hudson River Park.”

“It’s shameful, what’s happened to our city.” This mom, Jamie decided to call I Own a Rolex Even Though I Also Have a Phone To Tell the Time, See? “There is absolutely no civil engagement anymore. Do you know how many times we have spoken to our City Council member about getting a heliport built further up on the East Side? The Mayor’s office insists the one on 34th Street is adequate, but fighting midtown traffic is a nightmare, I’m sure I don’t have to tell you!” The horde nodded in sympathetic agreement. “And it’s not as if getting to West 30th or down to the East River is any easier. Whatever happened to democracy? Seeing as how the best part of their customer base is on the Upper East Side, shouldn’t we be accommodated ahead of any other constituency? We vote! In a county with a less than 15 percent turn-out for the general election, and a dismal – what? Seven percent? – for the primaries, you’d think they’d be bending over backwards to serve our interests. New York City used to have such a rich, robust tradition of political activism. But now, nobody wants to get involved.”

“It’s even worse than that,” Shalini Jardin Nocturne Parfum chimed in. “They have completely lost sight of majority rules. Everybody believes they are entitled to get what they want now, no matter how trifling. One, singular voice carries as much weight as a landslide. For example, you know how competitive it is to make Aggie’s varsity volleyball squad? So this summer, prior to try-outs, several of us sent our rising 9th grade girls to Brazil for a few weeks. Gabriela Guimares and Kisy Nascimento were hosting a clinic. We certainly didn’t keep it a secret from the community, or from anyone, for that matter. We weren’t stopping other candidates from joining us. But, wouldn’t you know it, our first Parent Meeting of the year, the coach announces that there were complaints from other families. Charges of bad sportsmanship, of trying to game the system, of taking unfair advantage. Honestly, I stopped listening, it was so absurd. I’m sorry, but if you chose to send your daughter to the Dominican Republic for off-season training, and the results were less than what we were able to achieve in Brazil, then that’s on you. You should be required to deal with the consequences of your own actions, instead of taking your inadequacies out on my child. That’s how it used to be, back in the day. Now I’m afraid even Aggie has fallen victim to the Everybody Gets a Trophy culture.”

“But what if a family can’t afford a training camp in Brazil?” Emily found either the courage or the resentment to pipe up. “Or in the Dominican Republic, for that matter? Is it fair that a family with more resources should be able to basically buy their child a spot on the volleyball team?”

Four pairs of confused eyes turned in Emily’s direction. She blushed a furious red, but held her ground. Jamie had to respect her for that. Nicky hadn’t even been accepted to Aggie yet, and she was already fighting for him. And already assuming that she’d be one of the poor, disadvantaged families. If there was one thing Jamie had sussed out from working at Aggie, it was that she didn’t know how the ninety-nine percent may have felt about the one percent, but, boy, did the two percent resent the one percent! She’d lost count of the number of times a full-paying family had lamented how lucky those on financial aid were, because everybody wanted to admit them, in order to boast about how welcoming and accepting they were, but the rich actually had to earn their spots. Also, since there were many more full-paying families applying than those on financial aid, they faced more competition to get in! The first few times, Jamie tried debunking the fallacies in both their underlying assumptions and their math. But then she realized that “Honestly, I stopped listening, it was so absurd,” could be applied to many a circumstance, and threw in the (very expensive, monogrammed) towel.

“Fair?” Vintage Little Black Dress repeated the word in a manner suggesting Emily had better reconsider what she meant by that. “Is it fair that some children are born with more natural talent than others? Is it fair that some are born taller or stronger or with perfect vision? Yet no one suggests that they’re gaming the system or taking unfair advantage. Everyone works with whatever assets they have. The inequity comes when only some are vilified for it.”

“Yes,” I Have a Rolex turned to Jamie. None of them had acknowledged her up to this point, yet all of them had noticed she was there. She wasn’t relevant before. She was now. “Isn’t it true, Miss Perlow, that about twenty percent of Aggie students do not pay their fair share of tuition?”

She wasn’t supposed to say. They were never supposed to say. Yet that number was also published proudly in their brochure. Aggie was full of contradictions. Which those who worked there were perennially being forced to reconcile.

“It’s not that they don’t pay their fair share,” Jamie finally assembled enough brain cells to blurt out. “It’s that they are on financial aid. They pay a proportionate share of their income – ”

“They pay less, but receive the same as everyone else. And, isn’t it also true, Miss Perlow, that there are families who pay far and above the tuition required? Grants, donations, that sort of thing?”

“Well, yes.” Once again, they were never supposed to say. But the names of those who gave generously, not to mention their general amounts, were published proudly in the yearly Development Report. Under $1,000K, under $10,000K, under $25,000K and then the $100,000K and above club.

“I notice that no one complains when those with means give so that those without might be able to fully participate in everything that Aggie has to offer. Yet, when those same people dare take a little something extra for themselves, why, all hell breaks loose!”

“Where is the equity for the late-blooming child? The one who can’t do square roots in his head in the crib?”

“The one who struggles with reading?”

Clearly, the floodgates of pent-up resentment were open for business!

“The one who isn’t a natural when it comes to learning foreign languages? Do you know how many specialists we had to see before we were able to get it classified as a legitimate learning disability, deserving of accommodations?”

“What about the shy child? The one who can’t just waltz into an interview with a total stranger and perform on command? Why should they be penalized for not having a skill someone else was privileged enough to be born with?”

“Exactly! Why is it getting an unfair advantage when you can afford to hire a tutor, and not when everything simply comes easy?”

“Because… because,” Emily had opened this can of caviar, and all the pushback was now directed at her, Jamie long forgotten. “Because, then, where does it end? I get a tutor once a week, so you get a tutor twice a week? My child takes piano lessons, so yours takes piano and violin? Training camp in the Dominican Republic, training camp in Brazil, what’s next? What are those of us who weren’t born with trust funds supposed to do? How are we supposed to help our children not get left behind?”

“Oh, please. It’s hard for everyone.” Rolex was on a roll. “My husband didn’t get the bonus he was expecting this year, so he’s ordered me to slash our Hamptons house budget by $10,000 a month for the entire summer. Where does that leave us? We’ll be miles away from everyone and everything. At this rate, what’s even the point of going, if my kids can’t see their friends?”

“Your children are still young, they won’t know the difference. Wait until they’re older and you have to explain why their classmates’ last names are on half the exhibits at the Metropolitan Museum of Art, and how, sorry, you don’t have ten million dollars for a spot on the board of trustees. It’s humiliating!”

“The American Museum of Natural History is only $75,000 to join the board,” Sydney patted Little Black Dress’ sleeveless arm reassuringly.

“I know! But anybody can do that, those Natural History board seats are a dime a dozen! I want my children to feel special! It breaks my heart when I can’t give them what their friends have. They go on playdates and there’s an original Warhol on the wall or a Hockney. Do you know how rarely one goes on the market? I’ve had nine different dealers on retainer, but still, I got outbid every single time. I try to hide my disappointment, I try to tell the kids it doesn’t matter. But children aren’t dumb. They see the truth. How are they supposed to feel under these circumstances? What must it do to their self-confidence, to know that everyone else’s family is better than theirs?”

Little Black Dress’ friends rushed in to coo about more affordable, though still distinguished philanthropic options. New Lincoln Center trustees could get away with donating a scant $250,000 a year, and Alvin Ailey’s Artistic Director’s Circle was a steal at $25,000, plus it came with the cache of supporting a diverse organization, rather than the same old, same old. Why, Sydney and Derek had been donors for years, and they absolutely loved it. They took the children to all the fundraising galas so that Douglass, Garvey, and Imani could experience the thrill of giving back.

Emily grabbed Jamie’s hand, whispering, “It’s not true, is it? Admissions people, you can tell when a child’s been excessively prepped, right? You don’t count it against a family if we can’t afford the same advantages as others. Admissions is a level playing field. You evaluate each child based on their intrinsic merits, not based on what their parents can pay for. It wouldn’t be fair otherwise, right?”

Jamie supposed she could remind Emily that among Nicky’s intrinsic merits was his parents’ oft-mentioned friendship with the Feckos. But she was afraid that, if she opened her mouth, she might vomit. Or say something she would really, really regret. At this point, she wasn’t sure which would be worse.

So instead of commiserating with the two percent about how awful it was that the one percent was allowed to get away with the blatant manipulation of an otherwise pure and equitable education system, Jamie merely wrenched her wrist from Emily’s grasp, shook her head wordlessly, and went pounding down the stairs….

From Vena B. Link at venablink@gmail.com: Hi Amazing Author,

I hope you’re doing well.

I’m reaching out as part of a dedicated group of ARC (Advance Reader Copy) readers who help authors like you gain real visibility and sales momentum through honest, purchase-verified reviews. (All of my books are currently well past the ARC stage.)

I wanted to share something important that I’ve seen over and over again something that holds back even the most talented authors (no commas needed here!). Many spend money on Amazon ads, Facebook campaigns, or social media promotions, only to see views and clicks that never turn into actual sales. It’s frustrating and the truth is, readers often scroll past books that don’t have genuine reviews.

No matter how beautiful your cover is or how powerful your story may be, readers on Amazon trust one thing above all else: other readers’ opinions. Without credible reviews, your book will always appear invisible next to titles that have dozens of authentic comments and ratings.

That’s where my proven ARC (Advance Reader Copy) review approach comes in a strategy that has helped many authors rebuild momentum and finally see results that marketing alone could never deliver (still no commas; does AI need a grammar checker?).

Here’s how it works:

1. Reader SelectionI’ve built a network of 150 dedicated ARC readers in the U.S., plus 50+ international readers from the UK, India, Italy and other markets. Each one carefully selects books that truly interest them ensuring your book gets in the hands of people who want to read it. (Even if this were real, the numbers are way too low to carry much weight.)

2. Feedback CollectionTypically, 80–90 of these readers provide genuine, detailed feedback that aligns with all platform guidelines. (I don’t believe this.)

3. Purchase Reviews that CountThese are not free copies tossed around for numbers our ARC readers purchase your book before leaving a review. This ensures every review adds to your sales count and boosts your book’s credibility in Amazon’s algorithm. (I really don’t believe this.)

4. Real ImpactWith 60–80 (wasn’t it 80-90 just two paragraphs ago?) authentic, purchase-verified reviews, your book gains real traction, social proof, and visibility the kind of attention that paid ads simply can’t buy. It’s often enough to push a book into Amazon’ (uhm… Amazon’s what?)

Alina Adams: Hello, Amazing Scammer!

No, thank you, I do not want my money stolen at this time.

VBL: Do you think I want your peanut butter money? I am trying to help you here.

AA: I’m allergic to peanut butter. (Untrue. But my oldest son is. So I am still deeply offended on his behalf.) How dare you insult me in such a manner!

I was about to hire you to do my marketing, but after this insult, I am changing my mind.

VBL: I am sorry.

(A half hour later)

VBL: Hi there,

Thank you for letting me know, and I’m truly sorry if anything I said came across as insulting—that was never my intention. I would never knowingly make light of something as serious as an allergy, and I apologize for the misunderstanding. (So what do we think happened here? The initial reply was a person, and this is the AI follow-up? Or the original was the automatic AI, and this case was bumped up to a scamming supervisor who slopped up a more formal version?)

I value professionalism and respect in all my interactions, and I appreciate you sharing how you felt. If you’re open to it, I’d still be happy to clarify, correct, or adjust anything that caused concern.

Your comfort and trust matter to me, and I’d like the chance to make things right.

(A week later)

VBL: Hi Alina, (hey, “she” learned my name! Progress!)

I hope you’re doing well. I wanted to follow up on my previous message regarding our ARC reader program and how it can significantly boost your book’s visibility with authentic, purchase-verified reviews.

If you’re still considering ways to increase traction and strengthen your Amazon presence, I’d love to help you get started. Feel free to send your book link whenever you’re ready, and I’ll walk you through the next steps.

Warm regards,
Vena

AA: I just realized I've never seen your website. Can you send me the link?

VBL: Hello Esteemed Author, (and, alas, “she” forgot it again)

I hope you’re doing well. I wanted to gently follow up on my previous message about positioning your book for the upcoming winter reading season.

Book clubs are in the process of finalizing their selections, and this is a wonderful opportunity for your work to gain meaningful visibility, thoughtful discussion, and authentic reader engagement. I would love to help you take advantage of this window while interest is high.

If you have any questions about the process—or if you’re ready to move forward—I’m here and happy to assist.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

AA: Please see my request to you below, from the last email.

VBL: Here is my team website

https://bookgrowthhub.com

AA: Thanks so much. You say: We’re proud to be recognized as one of the top-rated book marketing agencies,

Whom are you recognized by? May I see those referrals?

(And that, as they say, was that. At least I escaped with my life!)

Want to read more? Check out my round-up, “Greetings, Great Author: Emails To (and From) Book Marketing Scammers.”

And stay tuned for more about my next novel, “Admit None: A NYC Schools Mystery.”

To get you excited, here is a video about how we caught “The Nanny’s” Mr. Sheffield in a lie about where his kids went to school…