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A New Monthly Assignment

The Red Pen will continue in its present form a few times each year. Alongside it, I am introducing a separate monthly photography assignment, open to every reader.

Each month we will explore one practical photographic problem through a simple exercise. Everyone can take part, while paid subscribers will also be able to submit their work for the monthly follow-up.

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The Red Pen is not a competition, a ranking or a declaration that a photograph is right or wrong.

It is a way of looking more carefully at what already works, where the visual structure could be strengthened and how small choices in position, timing, framing or processing might change the result.

Each photograph is included because it offers something useful to examine. The purpose is not to judge the photographer, but to understand the decisions inside the frame and carry those lessons into our own work.

Amerigo Vespucci — Order, Repetition and One Wandering Gaze

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Three young sailors stand in almost formal alignment, their uniforms, caps and posture creating a strong visual order. Yet the portrait avoids becoming completely ceremonial. Two acknowledge the camera, while the sailor on the right looks beyond the frame, introducing a small but important interruption.

What draws me into the photograph

The repeated white caps immediately establish the rhythm. Their brightness separates them clearly from the dark foliage, creating three strong shapes across the upper part of the frame. The uniforms repeat the same lapels, buttons and insignia, reinforcing the sense of discipline and shared identity.

The central sailor becomes the natural anchor. His position, direct gaze and open smile give the photograph its human centre. The two figures beside him are close enough to form a group, but their slightly different postures prevent the arrangement from feeling mechanically symmetrical.

The sailor on the right is particularly important. His gaze carries us beyond the edge of the photograph and introduces a moment of uncertainty. We begin to wonder what has attracted his attention. That small departure from the camera gives the otherwise posed portrait some life.

The hands and bags add another layer. They soften the formality of the uniforms and suggest a transitional moment, perhaps shortly before departure or after an official activity. The Accademia Navale emblem on the central bag gives the portrait specific context without requiring a written explanation.

Black and white works naturally here. It concentrates our attention on faces, uniforms, repetition and tonal structure rather than allowing colour to separate the three figures.

A few ideas to explore

The white trousers and parts of the caps are very close to pure white. Their brightness creates strong graphic contrast with the jackets, but recovering a small amount of highlight detail could retain more fabric texture. The adjustment should remain restrained because the bold tonal division is part of the photograph’s character.

The central sailor’s eyes sit beneath the shadow of his cap. A subtle local lift around the eyes could strengthen the direct connection with the viewer without making the face appear artificially bright. Similar care could be applied to the other faces so that all three retain believable tonal modelling.

The background is busiest around the sailor on the right. Bright gaps in the foliage and the pale building compete slightly with his face and cap. Gently darkening or softening those areas would improve separation while preserving the outdoor setting.

The lower edge feels less fully resolved. The bags contain useful information, especially the central emblem, but they are partially cut by the frame. Taking one step backwards would have allowed Maurice to include them more deliberately. The alternative would be a tighter crop above the bags, concentrating entirely on faces and uniforms. The current framing sits between those two decisions.

The right-hand figure is also close to the edge. A little more breathing room would strengthen the direction of his gaze by giving him somewhere to look. Conversely, a deliberately tighter crop could make that outward gaze feel more abrupt and tense. Again, these would be different interpretations rather than corrections.

The lesson behind the frame

Repetition creates order, but a small interruption gives that order life.

Maurice has built the portrait through uniforms, repeated shapes and a clear central figure. The sailor looking away prevents the group from becoming merely ceremonial. In a formal portrait, the most revealing detail is sometimes the person who briefly stops performing for the camera.

Biarritz — A Winter Boardwalk in the Rain

Photograph by

Rain has transformed the Biarritz promenade into a theatre of umbrellas, reflections and half-seen figures. The sea almost disappears into the pale weather, while people move through the frame at different distances, each protected inside a small private space.

What draws me into the photograph

Joan has used the width of the promenade very effectively. The figures do not form a single obvious subject. Instead, they create a sequence that carries us from the large woman and umbrella in the foreground, through the smaller groups in the middle distance, and finally toward the buildings dissolving into the rain.

The umbrellas provide the photograph with its rhythm. Their repeated dark shapes appear at different sizes and angles, marking depth more clearly than the architecture itself. The large umbrellas on the left and right also act as visual brackets, containing the scene and directing our attention toward the open boardwalk between them.

The wet pavement is essential. Reflections stretch the people downward and prevent the broad foreground from becoming empty. They also soften the separation between figures and ground, giving the photograph a fluid quality appropriate to the weather.

I particularly like the way the distant architecture loses definition. The large building remains recognisable, but the smaller structures, lighthouse and horizon gradually disappear into mist and sea spray. This gives the photograph atmosphere without relying on dramatic processing. We feel the weather because it is changing how much of the world can be seen.

The black-and-white treatment is well judged. Colour would probably have separated coats, umbrellas, railings and buildings into competing elements. Monochrome brings them together through tone, repetition and reflection.

A few ideas to explore

The foreground woman on the left is very strong visually. Her dark clothing, face and umbrella immediately attract the eye, but their weight can delay our movement into the deeper scene. A subtle reduction in contrast or brightness around her face and hand could allow her to remain the starting point without becoming the entire subject.

The figure beneath the umbrella on the far right provides a valuable counterweight, although its proximity to the edge makes that side feel slightly compressed. There is probably no useful crop that would solve this without damaging the wider composition. When photographing a similar scene, taking one small step backwards or turning the camera a fraction to the right might give that figure slightly more space while preserving the architectural border.

The pale sky and sea are important to the winter atmosphere, so I would resist the temptation to recover too much detail. A very gentle local darkening around the faint lighthouse and distant shoreline might make those elements a little easier to discover. They should remain almost hidden. Their value lies in emerging slowly rather than announcing themselves.

The central pavement could receive a restrained increase in local contrast, particularly around selected reflections. This would reinforce the path through the photograph without making the wet surface appear unnaturally hard or glossy.

There are several partial overlaps among the middle-distance figures and umbrellas. Most contribute to the feeling of a busy promenade, but a slightly different moment might have produced cleaner separation between one or two silhouettes. In scenes like this, the composition is established by the architecture, but the final photograph depends on waiting for the moving figures to arrange themselves.

The lesson behind the frame

Bad weather does more than add atmosphere. It changes posture, movement, visibility and the shapes people carry through the street.

Joan has recognised that the real subject is not simply the Biarritz promenade in winter. It is the way rain reorganises public space. Umbrellas become repeating forms, reflections create a second population beneath the walkers, and familiar architecture slowly disappears into the weather.

Chicago — When the Photographers Become the Photograph

Photograph by

At first, the scene is difficult to read. Bodies appear in two directions, cameras repeat across the frame and the curved surface breaks the pavement into shifting geometric sections. That initial confusion is not a weakness. It is precisely what makes Cheryl’s photograph worth exploring.

What draws me into the photograph

The strength of the image lies in the way the reflection reorganises reality. The upper figures are not simply duplicates of those below. Their scale, orientation and position change, turning a small group of photographers into a pattern of limbs, cameras and gestures.

Repeated cameras create the visual rhythm. Each person holds one slightly differently: raised to the eye, supported in both hands or momentarily lowered. The bent elbows and concentrated postures connect the figures even when their bodies appear to move in opposing directions.

The curved seams of the Bean provide an essential structure. They divide the image into irregular geometric sections and make the surface feel unstable. We understand that we are looking at a reflection, but the photograph never allows us to become completely comfortable about which direction is up.

The woman’s visible face in the lower half becomes the human anchor. Most of the other faces are hidden behind cameras, turned away or distorted by the reflective surface. Her expression gives us somewhere to begin before the eye travels into the more complicated arrangement above.

Black and white is particularly effective. Colour would probably introduce unrelated clothing and environmental details. Monochrome allows hands, cameras, faces and legs to become a connected system of shapes and tones.

A few ideas to explore

The bright triangular area along the lower-left edge attracts considerable attention. A restrained local reduction in brightness could keep the eye within the group without removing the luminous contrast that helps separate the seated man.

The woman’s face is already the clearest expression in the frame. A very subtle lift around her eyes, combined with slightly reduced highlights on the hand and camera beside them, could strengthen that point of entry. The adjustment should remain invisible because the natural concentration in her expression is more important than perfect facial illumination.

The broad grey surfaces are useful because they give the figures room and reveal the sculpture’s curved geometry. Increasing global contrast would make those areas unnecessarily harsh. Selective contrast along one or two seams would be more effective, helping us understand the changing planes without making the concrete-like texture compete with the people.

The lower part of the photograph contains several bright legs and shoes. They contribute to the repetition, particularly because similar shapes appear upside down near the top. Slightly controlling the brightest highlights would preserve more texture and keep the cameras and faces higher in the visual hierarchy.

It could also be interesting to rotate the photograph through 180 degrees as an experiment. Not because the present orientation is wrong, but because reflective photographs sometimes reveal a different hierarchy when our expectation of gravity changes. The comparison would show which figures genuinely anchor the composition and which ones depend upon familiarity.

The lesson behind the frame

A reflection becomes photographically interesting when it does more than repeat what stands in front of it.

Cheryl has used the Bean to disrupt orientation, change scale and connect separate gestures. The subject is not simply a group of people taking pictures. It is the peculiar moment when photographers, cameras and reflection become part of the same visual puzzle.

Portland Head Light — Height, Stone and Sea

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The lighthouse rises from a rugged sequence of water, rock and architecture, its pale tower immediately separating from the blue sky. Beside it, the keeper’s buildings spread horizontally across the headland, giving the vertical structure something substantial to balance against.

What draws me into the photograph

The lighthouse is the clear visual anchor. Its position toward the left side allows the tower to dominate without occupying the centre, while the buildings on the right provide a strong counterweight. The composition feels balanced but not symmetrical.

The generous sky reinforces the height and isolation of the tower. It also gives the clouds enough room to form a soft diagonal movement behind the architecture. The lighthouse appears to rise into that open space rather than simply sitting against a narrow strip of blue.

The foreground is built in distinct layers. We move from water to the nearest rocks, across the inlet to the larger cliff, and finally upward to the buildings. These overlapping planes give the vertical photograph genuine depth and prevent it from becoming a flat postcard view.

The small visitors are useful. They provide an immediate sense of scale, showing us how substantial both the lighthouse and the headland really are. They also introduce life into what might otherwise feel like a purely architectural landscape.

Colour creates another clear hierarchy. The cool blues of the sky and water surround the warmer roofs, while the white lighthouse remains the brightest architectural element. The palette is simple enough to hold together despite the amount of detail.

A few ideas to explore

The processing feels quite strong, particularly in the rocks, roof edges and masonry. Reducing clarity, texture and sharpening would produce gentler transitions and allow the atmosphere to feel more natural. The rocks already contain abundant structure; they do not need every surface detail emphasised equally.

The white lighthouse is close to losing tonal detail in places. A small amount of highlight recovery could retain more of the masonry, especially along the sunlit side. Local treatment would be preferable to darkening the entire image, which might make the sky and water unnecessarily heavy.

There appears to be some edge emphasis around the tower and rooflines. This may come from sharpening or local contrast rather than the original light. Masking sharpening away from the sky and using a smaller amount around high-contrast edges would help the building sit more naturally within the landscape.

The open sky contributes to the sense of height, but an alternative crop removing a modest amount from the top could create a stronger architectural portrait. The original interpretation feels spacious and environmental. The tighter version would bring the lighthouse and keeper’s house forward and reduce the feeling of empty sky.

The visitors provide scale, although their distribution is slightly untidy. If working from the same position, it could be worth making several frames and waiting for the figures to separate into clearer groups. The aim would not be to remove people, but to make their placement feel more deliberate.

The dark rock entering from the lower-right edge gives the foreground weight. A slight crop from that side could produce a cleaner path across the water, although too much would weaken the layered depth. This is a small adjustment rather than a structural problem.

The lesson behind the frame

A strong subject does not require aggressive processing to establish its importance.

David has already done the essential photographic work through position, balance and layering. The lighthouse rises clearly, the buildings provide context and the rocky coastline gives the scene depth. A more restrained treatment would allow those decisions to speak without every texture demanding equal attention.

Reach — A Body Drawn into Light

Photograph by @Kathryn Delany

A dancer rises through a pool of light, her arms extending upward while one leg folds behind her. The room around her is dark and hazy, but the floor is divided by sharp geometric shadows. The photograph holds two different visual languages at once: the organic line of the body and the rigid structure of the light.

What draws me into the photograph

The gesture is beautifully continuous. Our eye begins at the supporting foot, rises through the straight leg and arched torso, follows the face and finally reaches the extended fingers. The lifted leg creates a second curve behind the body, preventing the movement from becoming a single vertical line.

Kathryn has timed the pose at the point of greatest extension. The dancer appears suspended rather than strained, and the upward-facing expression makes the gesture feel purposeful. She is not merely demonstrating flexibility. She appears to be reaching toward something beyond the visible frame.

The large area of darkness is essential. It gives the gesture somewhere to travel and makes the dancer feel isolated within a much larger space. A tighter composition might produce a stronger conventional dance portrait, but it would lose the sense of solitude and scale.

The pool of light acts like a stage created inside the room. Its rectangular edges and crossing shadows form a rigid geometric base beneath the fluid pose. That contrast between body and architecture gives the photograph its structure.

The dancer’s shadow is equally important. It extends across the floor in the opposite direction, becoming almost a second performer. The physical body rises while the shadow reaches outward, creating a visual balance between height and width.

The restrained purple palette and atmospheric haze unify the scene. The colour is not simply decorative. It separates this moment from ordinary reality and gives the photograph the quality of a memory or dream.

A few ideas to explore

A modest amount of local contrast around the face, torso and costume could create slightly clearer separation from the surrounding haze. This should be applied selectively. Increasing contrast across the whole frame would destroy the atmosphere that makes the image distinctive.

The brightest areas of the floor approach pure white. Recovering a small amount of highlight detail could preserve more texture while keeping the pool of light luminous. The light should continue to feel theatrical rather than evenly exposed.

The rectangular doorway or reflective panel behind the dancer introduces another vertical structure and contains intriguing shadowy figures. It adds narrative ambiguity, but it is also one of the brightest elements in the darker half of the frame. Slightly reducing its brightness or clarity could keep it present without allowing it to compete with the dancer.

The shadow on the floor could be deepened by a fraction, particularly around its outer edges. This would strengthen its role as a second gesture while preserving the soft, hazy quality of the light.

It would be interesting to compare the original with a slightly tighter crop from the left. The tighter version would make the dancer more immediate, while the original gives greater importance to darkness and solitude. My preference remains with the generous composition because the empty area contributes directly to the meaning of the gesture.

The softness should not be treated as a technical fault. Excessive sharpening, noise reduction or dehazing would make the photograph cleaner but less expressive. The atmosphere is doing useful visual work.

The lesson behind the frame

A photograph of movement does not always need visible motion blur. It needs a gesture that continues beyond the body.

Kathryn has achieved that through extension, light and shadow. The dancer reaches upward, her shadow moves outward and the surrounding darkness gives both gestures room to exist. The photograph succeeds because the movement does not stop at the edge of the figure.

Muriwai — The Scale of an Afternoon

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Muriwai stretches into the distance through bands of pale water, dark sand and sunlit dune grass. People are scattered across the beach, but none is large enough to become the obvious subject. Instead, they measure the landscape and show us how much space surrounds them.

What draws me into the photograph

The sweeping foreground dune is the structural foundation. It begins broadly at the lower-right edge and moves diagonally toward the distant beach, carrying the eye naturally into the frame. Its warm grass also gives the foreground texture without requiring an artificial object as an anchor.

Beyond it, the landscape separates into clear tonal layers. Golden grass meets dark sand, the sand meets reflective tidal water, and the water eventually dissolves into the pale horizon. These transitions create depth even though the light itself is soft and low in contrast.

The small figures are distributed across those layers at different scales. The nearest pair gives us an immediate human reference, while the more distant walkers gradually become marks within the landscape. Their repetition turns an ordinary afternoon at the beach into a quiet study of space and human presence.

The reflective channels of water provide a second path through the image. They curve across the sand, catching the sky and directing us toward the hazy distance. Without those pale shapes, the broad beach might feel visually heavy. They break the darkness and keep the eye moving.

The atmosphere is particularly effective. Detail gradually disappears rather than stopping suddenly. Trees, dunes, figures and shoreline become softer as they recede, producing a convincing sense of distance.

A few ideas to explore

The large pale sky creates calm and makes the landscape feel expansive. However, it also occupies a substantial part of the frame without containing much visible structure. A panoramic crop removing some of the upper sky would give greater authority to the shoreline, figures and diagonal dune. The original feels spacious and contemplative; the panoramic version would be more graphic and direct.

The foreground grass is bright and richly textured. Slightly reducing its highlights or local clarity could prevent it from competing with the more delicate activity on the beach. It should remain warm and tactile, but not become the only area where every detail is strongly described.

The scattered people provide scale, although the eye does not immediately settle on one particular group. A small amount of selective contrast around one nearer pair could create a gentle human anchor. This should remain subtle. Emphasising them too strongly would change the photograph from a landscape containing people into a photograph about those specific individuals.

The reflective water is close to the brightness of the sky, which helps connect the upper and lower sections. Recovering too much highlight detail would make those channels heavier and reduce their luminous quality. I would preserve their brightness while perhaps adding a little local definition along selected edges.

The atmospheric softness in the distance should also be protected. Dehazing the horizon would reveal more information, but it would flatten the sense of space. The gradual loss of detail is one of the image’s most valuable qualities.

If returning to the location, it might be worth making several frames from the same position as people move through the beach. A slightly cleaner separation among the nearer figures could strengthen the rhythm without changing the landscape composition.

The lesson behind the frame

A landscape does not always need one dominant object. It needs a structure that allows the eye to travel.

John has built that structure through the diagonal dune, tonal layers, reflective water and repeated figures. The people are small, but they are not insignificant. They give the landscape its measure and transform physical distance into something we can feel.

Lignano at Sunrise — Figures Between Light and Tide

Photograph by @Jurgen Meyer

The sun sits low above the water while three different groups occupy the shore: people gathered along the pier, a pair walking through the reflection and a solitary figure crossing the foreground. The sunrise provides the light, but the photograph is really held together by human movement.

What draws me into the photograph

The pier is a strong anchor on the left. Its dark horizontal structure leads us toward the small tower and then continues visually toward the sun. The people standing along it prevent the structure from feeling empty and establish the first layer of activity.

The pair near the centre occupies the brightest path through the photograph. Sun, reflection and figures form one vertical thread, connecting sky, water and wet sand. Their position gives the composition a quiet centre without requiring them to become large within the frame.

The foreground man provides the counterweight. His dark form balances the pier, while his extended arm, bent body and lifted foot introduce a much more immediate gesture. The pair in the distance appears calm and measured; his movement is less predictable. That contrast gives the photograph narrative energy.

The rippled sand is not merely decorative texture. Its repeated lines begin across the lower edge and carry the eye towards the water. They also catch the light differently, creating a shifting pattern of dark and silver bands.

The three groups establish depth. We move from the foreground figure to the central pair and then to the people on the pier. Each occupies a separate distance and behaves differently, giving the beach a convincing sense of scale and activity.

Black and white is well suited to the scene. It removes the expected sunrise colours and concentrates attention on silhouette, reflection, line and gesture. The photograph becomes less about a beautiful morning and more about how people move through the changing tide.

A few ideas to explore

The foreground texture is extremely strong. Reducing clarity or local contrast slightly in the lowest part of the frame could prevent the sand from competing with the people. The ripples should remain visible, but they do not all need equal emphasis.

The central pair partly merges with the bright reflection. A restrained amount of burning immediately around their silhouettes could improve separation without making the adjustment visible. The reflection itself should remain luminous because it connects them directly to the sun.

The foreground man benefits from remaining predominantly dark. Lifting only a whisper of shadow detail in his shirt, face or legs could reveal a little more gesture while preserving the silhouette. Too much recovery would weaken his graphic role.

The pier is close to becoming a single dark mass. A small local lift beneath the structure might reveal enough detail to describe its construction, but the upper outline should remain strong and dark against the horizon.

The sun and its immediate reflection contain very little highlight detail. That is not necessarily a problem. Recovering them aggressively would probably create an unnatural grey disc and reduce the sensation of brightness. The surrounding transitions matter more than detail inside the sun itself.

There are a few very small marks in the open sky. They may be distant birds or sensor dust. It would be worth checking them at full magnification and removing only those that prove to be dust.

When photographing a similar scene, continuing for several frames as the foreground figure moves could reveal different relationships between arm, leg and reflection. This moment already works because the limbs remain separated, but a short sequence might offer an even cleaner gesture.

The lesson behind the frame

A sunrise becomes more interesting when the light organises human behaviour rather than acting as the only subject.

Jürgen has used the reflection to connect the central pair, the pier to establish distance and the foreground man to introduce movement. The sun explains the light, but the people give the photograph its life.

Find Your Balance — A Human Gesture Inside the Geometry

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A man pauses with his bicycle in front of two closed green doors. One hand remains on the bicycle while the other reaches toward the wall, creating a gesture that feels both practical and slightly theatrical. The title works because balance is not merely suggested. We can see it being negotiated.

What draws me into the photograph

Lisa has photographed the façade almost squarely, allowing its horizontal and vertical lines to establish a stable architectural stage. The two green doors repeat one another, while the central drainpipe creates a clear division between them.

Against that order, the cyclist becomes the living interruption. His body occupies the left door, but his extended arm reaches toward the centre of the frame. The opposite arm returns us to the bicycle. Together, the two arms form a broad horizontal gesture that connects person, architecture and object.

The bicycle is essential to the story. Its circular wheels introduce a different geometry beneath the rigid rectangles of the doors. It also explains the man’s posture. Without it, his outstretched arm might appear deliberately posed. With it, the gesture becomes an ordinary act of maintaining balance.

The sign above the right door provides a strong counterweight. Its dark rectangular shape and white lettering balance the person, backpack and bicycle on the opposite side. It also gives the façade a specific identity and prevents the empty right-hand door from feeling visually inactive.

Colour is doing structural work. The faded mint green contrasts beautifully with the warm ochre stone, while the red shorts provide a small but decisive accent. The black backpack, sign and bicycle create darker points that keep the brighter palette from becoming decorative.

The hard sunlight contributes to the graphic quality. Shadows from pipes, hinges, wires and the bicycle repeat the existing lines and make the surface feel three-dimensional.

A few ideas to explore

The stone contains a great deal of texture and local contrast. Slightly reducing clarity in selected areas could keep the wall tactile without allowing every crack and surface mark to compete with the cyclist’s gesture.

The sign is naturally one of the strongest elements because of its large white lettering against a dark field. A modest reduction in its highlights or contrast could preserve its role as a counterweight while allowing the person to remain the first human point of attention.

The man’s face is mostly hidden, but that is not a problem. This photograph is about posture rather than expression. Trying to recover or reveal more facial detail would probably add information without strengthening the story.

The small hook near the right edge and some of the cables along the top contribute to the age and working character of the façade. However, the hook is close enough to the border to attract occasional attention. A little restrained burning could reduce its visual pull without removing it.

The dark shadow band across the bottom grounds the bicycle and prevents the pavement from becoming an empty pale strip. Its edge is quite strong, however. Softening that transition slightly might allow the wheels and feet to separate more naturally from the foreground.

The verticals are already well controlled. A very small perspective correction could make the architectural framework even more precise, but complete perfection might also sterilise the street character. Any correction should remain modest.

If returning to a similar situation, the useful approach is to establish the façade first and then wait. The architecture provides the composition; the passing person supplies the event. Lisa has caught the moment when an ordinary action briefly mirrors the structure around it.

The lesson behind the frame

Good street photography often begins before the person arrives.

Lisa recognised the doors, colour, sign and central division as a ready-made stage. She then allowed a cyclist and one outstretched arm to change its meaning. The photograph succeeds because the human gesture does not sit on top of the composition. It completes it.

Walking Through the Jaws — Architecture Given an Appetite

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Two enormous angular structures press inward from opposite sides, leaving a narrow passage between them. A solitary pedestrian crosses the opening, small enough to reveal their scale but clearly separated against the pale building beyond. The title feels earned because the architecture genuinely appears ready to close around him.

What draws me into the photograph

The repeated diagonal ribs create the image’s dominant rhythm. On both sides, alternating bands of light and darkness move towards the central opening. Their direction creates pressure, as though the space is narrowing while we look at it.

The two foreground structures are not perfectly symmetrical, and that is important. Their angles, widths and tonal patterns differ slightly, preventing the composition from becoming a purely formal mirror image. They behave like opposing forces rather than identical objects.

Behind them, the central building provides a rigid counterpoint. Its rectangular stone panels and vertical windows resist the diagonals in the foreground. This difference between the ordered grid and the aggressive angular forms gives the photograph additional tension.

The pedestrian is positioned at exactly the right scale. He remains small enough for the architecture to feel monumental, but large enough for his profile, backpack and stride to remain readable. Without him, this would be a strong abstract architectural study. With him, it becomes a story about moving through an intimidating space.

The separation between his legs is particularly valuable. It gives the still frame movement and prevents the figure from appearing planted or static. His profile also remains clean against the pale wall, making the gesture legible despite the small size.

Black and white is essential here. Colour would introduce information about materials and surroundings, but monochrome reduces the scene to pressure, repetition, scale and movement.

A few ideas to explore

The deepest shadows inside the foreground structures are close to complete black. Lifting a small amount of local detail could reveal more of their internal surfaces while preserving their visual weight. The jaws must remain dark enough to feel substantial.

The brightest panels near the upper edges approach pure white. A little highlight recovery might retain more surface texture and create smoother tonal transitions. This should remain selective because the alternating bright and dark bands depend upon strong contrast.

The dark window in the central building attracts attention because it is one of the strongest black rectangles beyond the foreground. Slightly reducing its local contrast could help the eye return more quickly to the pedestrian without removing the architectural counterpoint.

The central background is relatively bright and evenly described. A subtle burn around the area immediately surrounding the figure could strengthen his silhouette, although the current separation is already effective. The adjustment should be almost imperceptible.

The dark floor at the bottom completes the enclosing sensation and gives the structures somewhere to stand. A tighter crop from below would bring the pedestrian closer, but it would also reduce the feeling that he is entering a larger, shadowed chamber. I would preserve the current amount of foreground.

Correcting the architectural perspective too aggressively would probably weaken the image. The convergence and slight instability contribute to the sensation of pressure. This is one of those occasions when technically straight lines would not necessarily produce a stronger photograph.

Nick’s timing is excellent, but a short sequence would still be useful. A frame made one step earlier or later might change the figure’s relationship with the angular edges. The selected moment succeeds because the body is fully separated and the stride remains open.

The lesson behind the frame

Architecture becomes more than geometry when a human figure reveals how the space feels.

Nick has used repetition and scale to make the structures imposing, then waited for one pedestrian to transform them into something almost animate. The person does not dominate the composition. He activates it.

Rotterdam — Schoolmates, Separate Screens

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Two schoolmates share the same bench, but each is absorbed in a separate screen. One reclines with his body open and relaxed; the other folds forward, supporting his face with one hand. The physical distance between them is small, yet the photograph makes their private attention feel complete.

What draws me into the photograph

The bench provides a strong horizontal framework. Its repeated wooden slats stretch across the frame and visually connect the two figures, even while their postures and attention separate them.

The contrast between those postures gives the photograph its story. The young man on the left leans back, crosses his legs and occupies a broad section of the bench. His companion sits forward with elbows close to the body and one hand against his face. One posture opens outward; the other closes inward.

Both gazes end at a phone, but the gestures are different enough to avoid simple repetition. The left-hand figure appears casually entertained, while the right-hand figure seems more concentrated or perhaps tired. We cannot know what either is seeing, but their bodies give us enough information to imagine two distinct moods.

The empty centre is essential. Paul has resisted the temptation to crop the boys closer together. The vacant section of bench becomes a visual measure of their separation.

The red can acts almost like punctuation within that space. Its small upright form interrupts the horizontal slats and provides a central accent between the two screens. It is an ordinary object, but its placement gives it compositional importance.

Colour also helps organise the frame. The electric-blue trousers immediately attract attention, while the red can and phone case create smaller warm accents. The black shirt and bag form a heavy visual mass on the left, balanced by the white shirt and brighter skin on the right.

A few ideas to explore

The blue trousers are considerably more saturated and luminous than anything else in the photograph. Reducing their saturation and brightness slightly would allow the posture and relationship between the boys to become more important than the colour itself.

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The red can is useful as a central marker, but it is also very bright. A small reduction in saturation or highlights could preserve its punctuation without letting it become a third subject.

The bag on the left is a large dark shape. It helps balance the right-hand figure and gives the scene everyday context, so I would not remove it. Lifting a little shadow detail might reveal more of its form and prevent it from becoming a single black block.

The cars, doors and windows above the brick wall provide urban context but add another layer of information. A modest crop from the top, ending closer to the upper edge of the bricks, would create a cleaner and more enclosed composition. The original feels more documentary; the tighter version would concentrate more strongly on the bench and the two boys.

The pavement and shoes are important because they complete the opposing postures. The crossed legs on the left and parallel feet on the right tell us as much as the upper bodies. Cropping too much from below would weaken that comparison.

A small amount of selective contrast around the hands and phones could clarify the repeated action. Increasing contrast across the whole photograph would be less effective because the brick, wood and pavement already contain substantial texture.

If Paul had made several frames, very small changes in the right-hand figure’s supporting hand or the angle of either phone could alter the mood. This selected moment works because both devices remain visible and the contrasting body language is clear.

The lesson behind the frame

A relationship can be photographed through distance and posture, even when no one looks at anyone else.

Paul has used one bench, two screens and an empty central space to describe companionship and separation at the same time. The photograph does not lecture us about phones. It simply observes how two people can be together while their attention is somewhere else.

A successful photograph begins long before the shutter is pressed, with curiosity, observation, positioning, timing and patience. It continues afterwards through editing, sequencing, presentation and the decisions that determine whether an image is merely seen or genuinely remembered.

Every photograph has a story behind it: a decision, a mistake, a moment of patience and, occasionally, a little luck. Most people see only the final frame. This publication explores everything that made that frame possible.

Drawing on decades in photography and professional assignments for Getty Images and others, I write about mastering the craft, developing a more disciplined way of seeing and building a sustainable life behind the camera. Not only what worked, but what failed, what surprised me and what experience has taught me along the way.

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Every week, I publish two substantial articles:

• Monday: Reflections on seeing, creativity and visual storytelling, or shorter technical lessons covering the fundamentals we often think we already understand.

• Thursday: A more extensive Masterclass on technique, editing, workflow, assignments, portfolio development, licensing and the professional side of photography.

On the first Saturday of each month, I also publish an in-depth location guide combining photographic advice with practical local knowledge. These begin with Venice and Italy, before continuing to Budapest, Slovenia, the Isle of Skye, London and other places I know well.

Throughout the week, I publish three Notes each day: photographs, observations, practical ideas and conversations with readers.

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I do not want this publication to become simply another archive of lessons that people save and never use. One of the things I enjoy most is keeping in contact with readers, learning what they are photographing and helping them recognise where their work could develop.

Each month, I will set one practical photographic assignment.

The assignment will be open to everyone, but supporting members will be able to submit their photographs. I will examine selected images in a follow-up discussion, looking at position, timing, framing, background, editing and whether the photograph communicates what its maker intended.

This is not a competition and there will be no monthly winner.

It is an opportunity to photograph with a purpose and learn from the different decisions made by other photographers facing the same assignment.

About 6 times each year, I also publish The Red Pen.

Despite the name, Red Pen is not about judging photographs or listing mistakes. It is a careful reading of work submitted by members: what is already successful, what weakens the image and what might have changed through a different position, moment or edit.

For anyone considering a private portfolio review, Red Pen also offers an introduction to the way I examine photographs: directly, honestly and with respect for what the photographer was trying to achieve. A private review naturally goes much further, but the approach is the same.

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I personally take part in the discussions and respond to members’ questions. That continuing contact matters to me. Photography develops through practice, but also through an honest exchange with people who understand what you are trying to accomplish.

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For photographers who want more concentrated and individual guidance, I offer private portfolio reviews. We examine consistency, editing, sequencing, visual identity, presentation and what the portfolio needs next.

I also lead private workshops and masterclasses across Venice, Budapest, Prague, Slovenia and other parts of Europe. Their purpose is not simply to spend time taking photographs, but to leave with stronger judgement, greater clarity and a more deliberate approach to your work.

Whether you already work professionally or simply take your photography seriously, you are welcome here.

Make better photographs. Build a stronger body of work. Learn how to give that work the value it deserves.

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Some photographers avoid Auto ISO because it feels like surrendering control.

Others switch it on, leave every setting at its factory default and assume the camera will make a sensible choice.

Neither position is very useful.

Auto ISO simply raises or lowers the ISO according to the exposure mode and the limits it has been given.

If those limits are wrong, a technically reasonable decision can still ruin the photograph.

What is the camera actually deciding?

In Aperture Priority with Auto ISO, you choose the aperture. The camera then balances shutter speed and ISO according to its programming, your metering and any limits you have set. This is quick and often perfectly adequate, but the camera is making two exposure decisions rather than one.

In Manual mode with Auto ISO, you choose the aperture and the shutter speed. The camera changes only the ISO to produce the metered exposure. Despite the word Manual on the dial, one part of the exposure is still automatic. The difference is that you have already protected the two settings that most directly affect how the photograph looks: movement and depth of field.

This is the principle. The practical part is deciding where the camera’s freedom should begin and end. In the rest of this lesson, we will set a useful minimum shutter speed, choose a realistic upper ISO limit, look at Manual mode with Auto ISO, and identify the situations in which it is better to turn Auto ISO off.

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• Lesson ONE: Your Photograph Is in Focus. So Why Is It Still Soft?

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At maximum, 96.3% of the Moon’s visible disc will be inside the umbra, the darkest part of Earth’s shadow. It is officially a partial lunar eclipse, not a total one, but only a narrow section of the Moon will remain outside that deep shadow. The rest may turn copper, dark red or something closer to dirty brown, depending on the state of Earth’s atmosphere.

Around 3.34 billion people will be able to see at least some of the partial phase. That makes this a genuinely international event, but it also creates a photographic problem: there will be an extraordinary number of technically competent pictures of a reddish Moon floating in a black sky.

The Moon will be impressive. An impressive subject does not automatically make an interesting photograph.

The worldwide timings, cross-checked against NASA’s eclipse data, are:

These times describe the eclipse globally. They do not guarantee that the Moon will be above your horizon. In central and eastern Europe, it will be setting as the eclipse deepens, and in some places it will disappear before the worldwide maximum. Check the Moon’s altitude, direction and setting time for your precise location rather than relying only on the table.

The low Moon is a complication, but it is also the opportunity. Instead of photographing an astronomical specimen, you can photograph the eclipse in relation to a church, a bridge, a roofline, a tree or the landscape where you live.

Below the line, I will take you through the complete practical plan: choosing the position, deciding which lens to use, focusing accurately, managing an enormous change in brightness and making a sequence without allowing the camera to take over the photograph.

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For the next eight Mondays, I will publish a shorter technical photography lesson, each built around one precise problem. Some will cover fundamentals that are often misunderstood, while others will move into more advanced territory. Each lesson will stand on its own, so you can join at any point, and should take about five minutes to read. The longer Thursday Masterclasses will continue as usual.

We begin with a problem that is all too often blamed on autofocus: a photograph that appears in focus yet still looks disappointingly soft.

We begin with a problem that is often blamed on autofocus.

You return from a walk, open a photograph on a larger screen and discover that it looks soft. The camera appeared to focus correctly. The little square was on the person, the confirmation light appeared, and the lens did whatever expensive modern lenses do. Yet the eyes are not crisp, the hands have lost definition, and the whole frame seems slightly uncertain.

The immediate conclusion is usually that the camera missed focus. Often, it did not.

Three different problems can look like one

A photograph can be soft for three main reasons: the focus was placed at the wrong distance, the camera moved during the exposure, or the subject moved during the exposure. They may look similar at first, but they require different corrections.

When focus is wrong, another part of the photograph will usually be sharper. The ear may be clear while the eye is soft, or the wall behind a person may contain more detail than the person. The plane of focus exists, but it is in the wrong place.

Camera movement tends to affect the entire frame. Look for a slight double edge or a repeated smear travelling in the same direction across both subject and background. This is especially visible around bright points, lettering and strong architectural lines.

Subject movement is different again. A doorway or wall may be perfectly sharp while a face, hand or foot is blurred. The camera was steady and the focus may have been correct. The person simply changed position while the shutter was open.

Before changing your autofocus settings, identify which of those three things happened. Otherwise, you may spend half an hour adjusting focus tracking to solve a shutter-speed problem.

Recognising the cause is only the first step. The more useful question is how to prevent it without simply using an unnecessarily fast shutter speed for every photograph. In the rest of this lesson, we will reconsider the old focal-length rule, examine how movement within the frame should influence your settings, and consider why accepting a little more ISO is often the sensible compromise.

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Next Monday: Auto ISO Without Giving the Camera Every Decision.

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The usual reaction is to assume that the scene was not quite good enough. We continue walking in search of a stronger subject, better light, a more expressive person or a cleaner background. Sometimes that is the correct decision, because not everything we notice will become a worthwhile photograph. Very often, however, the scene has not failed us. We have simply left before the photograph was ready.

The first frame is useful because it records the initial attraction. Perhaps it was a patch of light on a wall, the distance between two people, a bright coat against a dark doorway or the strange order of objects in a shop window. That first response matters, but it is only the beginning of the work. It tells us where our attention went; it does not yet tell us what to do with it.

This is the point where many photographs stop developing, because we make two or three nearly identical frames, perhaps adjust the exposure, then move on. The camera has confirmed that we were there, but we have not made a serious decision about hierarchy, position, timing or the edges of the frame. We found the subject, but we did not build the photograph around it.

The habit of moving too soon

Photography encourages movement. A street changes every few seconds, travel presents us with an endless supply of new subjects, and digital cameras allow us to collect each one at almost no immediate cost. The temptation is to cover ground rather than explore what is already in front of us. We return with hundreds of frames, but many are simply first impressions separated by a few streets.

This does not apply only to street photography. A landscape photographer may arrive, put the tripod in the most obvious position and begin shooting before looking at the relationship between the foreground and horizon. A portrait photographer may accept the first comfortable distance instead of noticing what the background is doing around the sitter. An architectural photographer may concentrate on the building while ignoring the light, reflections and human scale that could give it character.

In each case, the problem is not a lack of technique. It is the failure to remain with the scene long enough to identify what the photograph needs. A better lens will not solve that, and neither will another ten frames made from precisely the same place. The important change usually happens before the shutter is pressed again: one step to the side, a lower viewpoint, a quieter edge, a decision to exclude something, or the patience to wait for one element to enter the right relationship with another.

When I ask photographers to stay with a scene, I am not suggesting that patience is automatically virtuous or that every ordinary corner contains a masterpiece. Waiting without observing is merely standing around with a camera, so the purpose is to use time to diagnose the frame. Ask what attracted you, what competes with it and what is still missing, then decide whether the photograph would become clearer if you moved, simplified, waited, or accepted that the first frame was already the best one.

Those questions turn photographing from collecting into editing. More importantly, they move the act of selection into the street, the landscape or the room where the picture is being made, rather than postponing every decision until Lightroom.

What the first frame can teach you

Your first photograph should not be treated as a mistake, because it is evidence of what first caught your attention. Look at it for a moment and ask whether the original attraction is visually dominant or merely present. If the answer is merely present, identify what is weakening it before making another frame.

Perhaps the brightest area is in the wrong part of the picture, pulling the eye away from the subject. Perhaps a person merges with a doorway, two important shapes touch awkwardly, or the foreground occupies a great deal of space without contributing anything. Perhaps everything is arranged correctly, but the photograph lacks the gesture or change in light that would give the composition a reason to exist.

Once the problem has a name, the next frame has a purpose, and you are no longer hoping that repetition will somehow produce a better photograph. Instead, you are testing a specific decision whose result can teach you something. The result may still fail, but an intelligent failure teaches you more than twenty variations made without knowing what you were trying to change.

This week’s Masterclass is built around that process. The exercise below asks you to remain in one ordinary place for thirty minutes and develop a photograph through five distinct decisions. Paid subscribers will also find the editing test for comparing the first and final frames, guidance on when waiting becomes pointless, and an opportunity to submit both photographs for a future Red Pen critique.

Paid membership also gives you access to the complete archive of practical lessons, field assignments and subscriber discussions. If these Masterclasses help you photograph with more clarity and less dependence on equipment or fashionable formulas, you can continue with the full exercise below.

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Technically, that advice makes sense. Flare is stray light reflecting between the glass elements inside a lens. It can reduce contrast, wash colour across the photograph and produce circles or polygons that were never present in the scene. Lens manufacturers spend considerable time developing coatings to suppress it.

But photography is not a competition between lens engineers.

A photograph can be technically imperfect and visually right. Flare can give a hard afternoon a sense of heat, soften a background that is too descriptive, or make an ordinary street feel briefly uncertain. It can suggest glare, memory, dust or the difficulty of looking directly into strong light. None of those things can be measured on a sharpness chart.

The important question is not, “Does this photograph contain flare?” It is, “What is the flare doing?”

Flare must have a job

There is a difference between deliberate flare and flare that we excuse afterwards. Deliberate does not mean that you know exactly where every coloured circle will land. Light is less obedient than that. It means you noticed what was happening, changed your position, made another frame and decided whether the result helped.

Good flare supports the photograph. It may lead the eye towards a figure, create a veil between foreground and background, or interrupt an area that was otherwise too empty. It can also become part of the emotional temperature of the scene.

Bad flare merely sits on top of the picture. It covers the important gesture, drains contrast from the subject or becomes more interesting than everything else in the frame. If removing the flare reveals that there was no photograph underneath it, the flare was decoration, not intention.

That distinction matters. An effect cannot rescue a weak picture. It can only change the way a good one speaks.

Look at the light before you look for the effect

Flare begins with backlight or strong light entering the lens from an angle. Before lifting the camera, look at what that light is already doing. Is it separating a person from the background? Is it illuminating smoke, hair, rain or dust? Are the shadows giving the frame structure, or is everything simply becoming pale?

Then move. A few centimetres can change the flare completely. The sun disappears behind a wall, returns beside a shoulder, or breaks through the leaves of a tree. Contrast rises and falls. A coloured shape travels from the corner towards the centre.

The camera position is doing more work than the camera setting.

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The rest of this lesson explains five practical ways to create and control lens flare, how to judge it in the frame, a simple voluntary exercise for learning what your own lenses do in strong light and a downloadable guide.

Paid subscribers also have access to the growing archive of photography lessons, practical assignments, location guides and members-only discussions. The archive is designed to be returned to, not hurried through: a working reference for seeing, light, composition and the decisions we make before pressing the shutter.

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There is some sense behind this advice. Early and late light can be beautiful. It is softer, more directional and usually much easier to work with. But there is also one rather obvious problem: real life does not organise itself around golden hour.

If you are travelling, walking through a city, attending an event or simply happen to see something interesting at two o’clock in the afternoon, the light you have is the light you have. Sometimes that means bright sun, white pavement, deep shadows, reflections everywhere and a range between light and dark that seems designed specifically to annoy your camera.

I see this very often during workshops. As soon as the light becomes difficult, photographers start trying to correct it. They look for open shade, change settings, worry about the histogram or start thinking about what they will recover later in Lightroom. There is nothing necessarily wrong with any of that, but I prefer to begin somewhere else. I ask myself what this particular light is giving me that softer light would not.

Strong sunlight creates deep shadows, hard edges, silhouettes, graphic shapes and separation. An ordinary doorway can become a black rectangle. A shaft of sunlight across a pavement can become a stage. Someone walking from shadow into that light may suddenly become the only important element in the entire frame.

This is particularly interesting in black and white. Once colour disappears, the relationship between light and darkness becomes much more important. A scene that looks unpleasantly contrasty to the eye can become remarkably simple when reduced to tones, shapes and shadows.

The important thing is to stop asking harsh light to behave like soft light.

1. Protect the highlights

If there is one technical rule I want you to remember when photographing in strong sunlight, it is to watch the highlights. A shadow can contain very little information and still work beautifully. It can even become completely black and form an important part of the composition. A badly blown highlight is different. Once an important highlight has lost all detail, there may be very little left to recover.

For that reason, in strong light I generally expose for the brighter areas of the scene and allow the shadows to go where they want to go. This can feel wrong at first because the camera may show you an image that looks too dark. Large parts of the frame may contain very little detail and the histogram may sit rather heavily towards the left.

That does not automatically mean the exposure is wrong.

What matters is where you need the detail. If the important part of the photograph is correctly exposed, I am perfectly happy for other areas to become very dark. In many photographs I actually want them to. A photograph does not have to describe everything in front of the camera equally.

And this brings us to the more interesting part of photographing in strong light.

Before we continue

Protecting the highlights is the technical foundation, but the next four rules are much more about seeing than exposure. We will look at using shadows as part of the composition, simplifying a chaotic scene, changing the light simply by changing where you stand, and knowing when contrast is something to preserve rather than correct.

The aim is not to make midday sunlight look like golden hour. It is to recognise the photographs that harsh light makes possible and learn how to use it deliberately.

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Over the course of the three lessons, we explored how to observe more carefully, how to get the best from the camera you already own and how to return home with photographs that mean more than a record of the places you visited.

Alongside those lessons, I shared fifteen practical Notes. Each contained a simple exercise designed to be tried immediately, whether you were travelling somewhere unfamiliar or photographing close to home.

When I began the series, I suspected that the photographs people treasure most are rarely the ones they planned in advance. They are often the photographs made between the attractions: breakfast on the first morning, someone waiting for a train, a handwritten menu outside a restaurant or the final walk before heading home.

They are the photographs we nearly didn’t take.

A famous landmark tells us where we were, but an ordinary moment can remind us what it felt like to be there. Years later, that difference becomes increasingly important.

This is why I wanted to collect the fifteen Notes into something more permanent than a series of posts.

I’m delighted to say that the promised field guide is now ready.

What You’ll Find in the Guide

Photograph Your Holiday Better: A Practical Field Guide brings together all fifteen exercises from the bootcamp, carefully edited and organised into three sections.

The first week is about learning to see. You will work with one ordinary subject, examine the edges of the frame, search for light before searching for a subject and practise removing distractions.

The second week turns to the camera. Rather than overwhelming you with settings, it helps you understand what your camera does well, use your position more deliberately and become comfortable with the few controls that genuinely affect the photograph.

The final week is about memory. You will photograph the small details, the people sharing the journey and the moments that usually disappear between one attraction and the next.

The guide concludes with the final ten-photograph challenge: creating a small sequence that describes not only where you travelled, but what the journey felt like.

Everything has been designed to work whether you use a phone, a compact camera, a mirrorless camera or something larger. The camera matters far less than the attention you bring to the exercise.

The complete field guide is available below for paid subscribers.

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week One

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week Two

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week Three.

• The Photograph You Nearly Didn’t Take and Downloadable Guide. This One

• If you missed Learning Photography Properly, you can find it here.

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Last month, we went to Istria. This month, we cross the Adriatic to Venice.

I have photographed Venice for years, and the question I’m asked more than any other is where to find the hidden city.

The honest answer is that Venice is not hidden.

It is simply operating on a different timetable.

At eleven in the morning, the route between Rialto and Piazza San Marco can feel almost impossible. Follow the same streets shortly after sunrise and you hear delivery carts, shutters opening, footsteps under the porticoes and the first conversations coming from the bars. Stay out after dinner and the city changes again. The day visitors disappear, reflections settle on the canals and entire squares become quiet.

This is the first thing to understand about photographing Venice: choosing when to stand somewhere usually matters more than discovering a secret location.

The famous places are famous for a reason. Piazza San Marco at dawn can still be extraordinary. The Grand Canal from Rialto can still produce a photograph worth keeping. A gondola turning into a narrow canal can still stop you in your tracks.

The challenge is to photograph these things without simply repeating the picture you have already seen a thousand times.

This will be another long one. As with Istria, I’m dividing my attention between photography and practical travel because the two are impossible to separate. In Venice, where you sleep affects whether you can reach the waterfront before sunrise. The season affects not only the weather but the character of the streets. Even the direction from which you approach a square can determine whether you see daily life or a wall of visitors.

I run private Venice photography workshops and a more personal experience called The Venice I See for people who want to explore this way of looking at the city with me.

Why Venice, and why now

It may seem strange to choose one of the most photographed cities in the world for a series about seeing places more deeply.

That is exactly why Venice belongs here.

A lesser-known destination gives you the advantage of surprise. Venice gives you the harder—and ultimately more useful—challenge of finding your own response to something everybody already recognises.

You cannot depend on novelty. You have to depend on attention.

Venice also changes more dramatically than most visitors realise. Fog can erase half the lagoon. Rain turns the paving stones into mirrors. Winter lowers the sun into the streets and gives shape to passages that feel flat in summer. Acqua alta temporarily redraws the city. At dawn, the waterfront belongs to workers and gulls; a few hours later, it belongs to the world.

The city is not a fixed backdrop. It is a sequence of conditions.

Learning to photograph Venice means learning to notice those conditions before thinking about subjects.

Getting oriented: Venice is larger than the postcard

Most first-time visitors experience Venice along a narrow corridor running from the railway station to Rialto and then to Piazza San Marco. That route contains some magnificent things, but it gives a distorted impression of the city.

Venice is divided into six sestieri, each with its own rhythm.

San Marco contains the monuments and the most recognisable views. San Polo gives you Rialto, the markets and some of the oldest commercial parts of the city. Dorsoduro opens toward the Giudecca Canal and tends to feel more spacious. Cannaregio still carries a great deal of everyday residential life. Castello stretches from the crowded streets beside San Marco to quiet neighbourhoods near Sant’Elena. Santa Croce is less immediately dramatic but rewards photographers interested in ordinary Venice rather than architectural theatre.

Then there is the lagoon: Giudecca, Murano, Burano, Torcello, the Lido and the smaller islands. These are not optional decorations around Venice. They are part of the place’s geography and history, and they change the visual pace of a trip completely.

If you have three days, stay within Venice and choose your neighbourhoods carefully.

If you have five, give at least one full day to the lagoon.

San Marco: photograph the obvious before everyone arrives

Let us begin with the place many photographers pretend they are too original to photograph.

Piazza San Marco is magnificent.

The mistake is not photographing it. The mistake is arriving at the same time as everyone else and expecting the square to do all the creative work for you.

Arrive before sunrise. Not five minutes before, but early enough to watch the artificial lights begin to lose their strength against the morning sky. Start around the Piazzetta, where the columns frame the water and San Giorgio Maggiore sits across the basin.

This is a strong place for long exposures, particularly when boats are beginning to move. But do not become so occupied with smooth water that you miss the human layer: workers crossing the square, deliveries arriving, people arranging chairs and the city preparing itself for another day.

The classic view across the water toward San Giorgio is only the beginning. Turn back toward the arcades. Look at how figures move through repeating columns. Watch the reflected light under the Procuratie. When the square is damp, the pavement can hold fragments of the architecture rather than giving you one perfect reflection.

The strongest window is often the transition between darkness and morning, not sunrise itself.

Once the square begins to fill, move on. Venice is telling you that the photograph has changed.

Rialto: commerce before spectacle

Rialto works differently.

The bridge is beautiful, but the area makes more sense photographically when treated as a working district rather than a viewpoint.

Arrive while the market is setting up. Watch boxes being moved, shutters opening and produce arranged. The Grand Canal is already active here, giving you boats, porters, traders and commuters against one of the most recognisable architectural backgrounds in the city.

From the bridge itself, a longer focal length can help isolate relationships along the canal: a vaporetto crossing behind a gondola, figures waiting at a landing stage, or morning light picking out a façade while everything around it remains in shadow.

Then leave the bridge.

The streets around the market and the quieter lanes of San Polo offer more layered pictures than the central crossing. This is where a 35mm lens becomes useful. You can place people within doorways, passages and market structures without losing the environment that gives the photograph meaning.

Be respectful. Rialto is not a theatrical set. People are working, buying food and moving through their normal morning. A photograph is rarely improved by obstructing someone’s path.

Cannaregio: where the city stretches out

Cannaregio is where I would send someone who wants to understand that Venice is still inhabited rather than preserved under glass.

The northern part of the sestiere opens into long fondamente beside broad canals. The compositions are cleaner here, the pace slower and the presence of ordinary life more visible. Children go to school. Neighbours stop to talk. Shopping is carried home. Boats deliver everything a city without roads still requires.

The Jewish Ghetto offers a different kind of architectural space. Its unusually tall buildings, enclosed campo and complicated history deserve more than a quick photographic stop. Walk slowly and avoid treating the area as visual exotica.

Further east, around the quieter canals beyond the main routes, Cannaregio becomes particularly good for black-and-white work. The ingredients are simple: walls, water, bridges, doorways and passing figures. The challenge is arranging them.

This is where waiting becomes more valuable than walking.

Find a background with good structure and allow life to enter the frame. Venice rewards anticipation. A figure crossing a bridge, a boat appearing beneath an arch or a curtain moving in an open window can turn an architectural study into a photograph about the city.

Castello: follow it away from San Marco

Castello begins beside some of the busiest streets in Venice and gradually loosens as you move east.

The area around the Arsenale gives you monumental brick architecture, open water and a different sense of scale from the centre. Continue toward Via Garibaldi and you find a broad, lived-in street with shops, bars, market stalls and residents using the city rather than posing in front of it.

Beyond that, Venice becomes quieter again around Sant’Elena.

For street and documentary photography, Castello may be the most generous part of the city. There is enough activity to produce moments, but usually enough room to observe them. During the Biennale, the neighbourhood acquires another layer as visitors, artists and local residents share the same spaces.

Do not try to cover all of Castello in an hour. It is too large and changes too much from one end to the other. Give it half a day and allow yourself to reach the point where you stop checking the map.

Dorsoduro: space, silhouettes and changing weather

Dorsoduro offers some of the cleanest relationships between architecture, open water and sky.

The Zattere faces south across the Giudecca Canal and works particularly well when the weather is changing. Boats pass against a broad background rather than disappearing instantly behind buildings. Winter sun can create long shadows across the fondamenta. In summer, the area becomes a place for evening life rather than quiet photography.

Punta della Dogana is one of the places I return to in difficult weather. Fog, rain and low cloud can simplify the view across the basin until the city becomes a collection of shapes and tones. Some mornings, Venice gives you little more than grey sky and the ghost of a boat.

Those are often the mornings when the best photographs happen.

Nearby, the Accademia Bridge provides one of the classic Grand Canal views. Photograph it if the conditions are right, but then explore the smaller streets behind it. Dorsoduro is full of abrupt changes between large cultural institutions, residential corners, workshops, students and quiet canals.

The postcard and the lived city sit unusually close together here.

The lagoon: change the pace of the trip

The islands should not be treated as a checklist completed in one rushed afternoon.

Burano is visually immediate. Its colour makes composition appear easy, but too many photographs rely on colour alone. Look for relationships between painted walls, laundry, doorways and the people who live there. Go early or remain after the largest groups have left.

Murano is more restrained and more industrial. The glass furnaces and workshops provide a connection to making and trade that is often missing from the centre of Venice. Photographing craftspeople requires permission and patience, but it can produce a more meaningful story than another row of colourful façades.

Torcello is about space, silence and the origins of the lagoon settlements. It offers fewer obvious frames, which is part of its value. It asks you to work with landscape, distance and atmosphere.

Giudecca is the easiest island to integrate into a short visit. It gives you a view back toward Venice and enough separation to see the city as a whole. It is especially useful in the evening when the façades across the canal begin to hold the last light.

Choose one or two islands and spend time there. The lagoon punishes haste just as effectively as Venice itself.

Practical photography notes

Light. Venice is not automatically a golden-hour city. Overcast weather can be excellent, particularly for street work, architectural detail and black and white. Bright summer sun creates deep contrasts in the narrow streets, which can either become a compositional tool or a technical problem.

Best seasons. My preference is from autumn through spring. Late autumn and winter bring lower light, mist, fewer visitors and a more atmospheric city. Early spring can be excellent before the main season intensifies. Summer means early starts, late finishes, heat and heavy pedestrian traffic through the centre.

Fog. You cannot order it, but you can be ready for it. When fog arrives, resist the urge to cover the whole city. Choose open water, landing stages, bridges and familiar structures that can disappear gradually into the mist.

Rain. Bring a simple cover for the camera and continue working. Wet paving stones, umbrellas, reflected lights and boats emerging through rain can be far more interesting than an empty blue sky.

Gear. A small camera and one or two lenses are enough. A 24–70mm equivalent covers most situations, while a 35mm or 50mm prime encourages a slower and less conspicuous approach. A short telephoto helps with layered canal scenes. Bring a tripod if you are committed to twilight or long exposures, but do not carry one all day simply because Venice is photogenic.

Shoes. This matters more than an additional lens. You will walk much farther than you expect and cross more bridges than you remember.

Courtesy. Venice is not an abandoned film set. People live behind those shutters, carry shopping over those bridges and commute on those boats. Do not block narrow streets or bridges for a tripod composition. Do not photograph people at close range as though their daily life were a costume. Curiosity is useful. Entitlement is not.

Practical travel notes

Getting there. The railway remains the most dramatic way to arrive. You walk out of Santa Lucia station, and the Grand Canal is simply there. From the airport, public boats, buses and water taxis serve different budgets and arrival styles. Whatever you choose, pack so that you can manage your luggage over steps and bridges.

Where to stay. If photography is your priority, stay in Venice rather than commuting from the mainland. The advantage is not luxury; it is access to the city before the first morning arrivals and after the evening departure rush.

Cannaregio is practical for the station and good for everyday street life. Dorsoduro is quieter and well placed for the southern waterfront. Castello works well for people who want residential Venice and do not mind walking. San Marco gives immediate access to the monuments but also places you inside the busiest part of the city.

Among the places I have previously recommended are Hotel Flora for its hidden garden and central location, Hotel Al Ponte Mocenigo for a quieter historic atmosphere, and Ca’ Maria Adele for a more indulgent stay in Dorsoduro. Check current rates and conditions directly before booking.

Eating. Avoid restaurants displaying photographs of every dish beside the busiest routes. Walk several streets away, look for a short seasonal menu and remember that Venetian food is strongly connected to the lagoon.

Cicchetti and a small glass of wine in a bacaro are part of the rhythm of the city rather than a formal meal. Cantina Do Mori near Rialto is the historic reference point. For something more substantial, places I have recommended in the past include Giardinetto da Severino in Castello, Anice Stellato in Cannaregio, Antiche Carampane in San Polo and Alle Testiere in Castello. Reservations are sensible, particularly for small dining rooms.

The access fee. Venice’s 2026 trial access-fee period ended on 26 July. As of this August, no fee or exemption registration is required. Future arrangements may change, so day visitors should check the official Venice access-fee website rather than relying on old travel articles.

A rough four-day plan, if you asked me to arrange it

Day one: Arrive, leave the bags and walk without trying to photograph everything. Explore the neighbourhood around your accommodation. Finish beside open water at blue hour.

Day two: Begin at San Marco before sunrise. Move toward Rialto while the market is waking up, then continue into San Polo. Rest during the busiest part of the afternoon. Return to the streets for evening and night photography.

Day three: Start in Cannaregio and work slowly through the northern canals. Continue east into Castello, Via Garibaldi and the Arsenale. Finish around Sant’Elena or return along the waterfront after dark.

Day four: Choose one part of the lagoon rather than attempting every island. Burano and Torcello work naturally together. Murano deserves more time if glassmaking and working life interest you. Alternatively, remain closer and combine Giudecca with Dorsoduro and Punta della Dogana.

If you have a fifth day, do not add another list of landmarks. Return to the place that gave you the strongest possibilities and photograph it again under different conditions.

Repetition is not wasted time. It is often when the real work begins.

When to actually go

If I had to choose one period for a first photography-focused visit, I would choose late November through January, avoiding the busiest holiday dates.

The days are shorter, but that is not necessarily a disadvantage. Sunrise arrives at a civilised hour, the sun remains low, twilight comes early and night photography does not require staying out until midnight. There is also a better chance of mist and atmospheric weather.

Venice in summer can still be beautiful, but you must organise your day around the heat and crowds. Work at dawn, stop during the busiest hours and begin again toward evening. August Venice at midday and January Venice at eight in the morning are almost two different cities.

A closing thought

Venice does not need another photograph proving that it is beautiful.

We have enough of those.

What it continues to offer is something more difficult: the chance to examine how beauty, daily life, history, tourism and fragility occupy the same narrow space.

The best photographs here do not necessarily come from finding a secret bridge. They come from recognising when a familiar place has become briefly unfamiliar—a reflection disturbed by a delivery boat, a figure crossing an empty square, a façade disappearing into fog or a quiet conversation beneath architecture seen by millions.

Venice rewards photographers who stop trying to possess it.

Arrive early. Stay late. Walk away from the direct route. Return to the same place. Wait long enough for the city to stop performing.

That is usually when Venice begins to reveal itself.

I run private photography workshops in Venice for photographers who want to work more deliberately with light, timing, composition and visual storytelling.

For travellers interested in experiencing the quieter, lived-in city—with or without a professional camera—there is also The Venice I See, my personal exploration of the Venice that exists beyond the usual checklist.

And if you prefer to explore independently, my curated Venice guide brings together hundreds of locations, timing notes and practical suggestions gathered over years of photographing the city. Marco’s Venice.

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On 12 August 2026, a total solar eclipse will cross Greenland, Iceland, northern Russia, northern Spain and a small part of Portugal. Across much of the rest of Europe, northwestern Africa and parts of North America, it will be seen as a partial solar eclipse. Then, during the night of 27–28 August, a deep partial lunar eclipse will be visible from much of the Americas and parts of Europe and Africa. At its greatest phase, more than 96 per cent of the Moon will enter the Earth’s dark inner shadow.

They may both be called eclipses, but photographically they have very little in common.

The solar eclipse is primarily a problem of safety, filtration and preparation. The lunar eclipse is a problem of rapidly diminishing light, exposure and movement. One happens around an intensely bright Sun that can damage your eyes and equipment. The other involves a Moon that becomes much darker than many photographers expect.

There is also a larger question that applies to both events: are you trying to record an astronomical object, or are you trying to make a photograph?

A tightly framed Sun or Moon can show the eclipse clearly, but hundreds of thousands of photographers will produce something similar. A photograph in which the eclipse appears beside a bell tower, mountain ridge, lighthouse, minaret, bridge or recognisable skyline tells us where the event happened and what it felt like to stand there.

That second photograph requires more planning, but it will usually be the one people remember.

Begin with the photograph, not the equipment

Before choosing a lens or looking for suggested camera settings, decide what you want the finished picture to contain.

There are three basic possibilities.

You can photograph the Sun or Moon tightly with a long telephoto lens, making the eclipse itself the subject. You can work more widely and include the landscape or city around it. Alternatively, you can create a sequence showing several stages of the eclipse moving through the frame.

None of these approaches is inherently better, but they require different positions, lenses and preparations. A 600mm close-up of the Sun may be technically impressive, yet it tells us almost nothing about where you were. A smaller eclipsed Sun positioned above a Venetian church, Icelandic mountain or Spanish castle may make a more distinctive photograph.

The mistake is arriving with the longest lens you own and only then wondering what to do with it.

Visit the location beforehand. Check which parts of the horizon are visible, where the Sun or Moon will appear, whether buildings block the view and whether you will have space for a tripod. Look for foregrounds and silhouettes. Decide whether the place is likely to become crowded and whether access may be restricted on the day.

An eclipse is predictable. Your planning should take advantage of that.

The non-negotiable solar safety section

A partial solar eclipse is never safe to view directly without appropriate eye protection. This remains true even when most of the Sun appears to be covered. Ordinary sunglasses are not sufficient, regardless of how dark they are. Proper eclipse viewers should conform to the ISO 12312-2 safety standard.

Your camera needs protection too.

Use a proper solar filter manufactured for photographic or telescopic observation and place it securely over the front of the lens. A filter that screws into the normal filter thread or a purpose-made solar film assembly is preferable to anything improvised.

Do not place an ordinary neutral-density filter on the lens and assume it will provide adequate protection. Photographic ND filters are designed to control visible light for exposure. They are not necessarily designed to block the ultraviolet and infrared energy involved in direct solar observation.

Do not look through an optical viewfinder at the Sun unless a suitable solar filter is correctly attached to the front of the lens. With a mirrorless camera, use the rear screen or electronic viewfinder, but remember that the camera’s sensor still requires protection. Avoid leaving an unfiltered camera pointed towards the Sun, particularly with a long lens, which concentrates the light and heat.

If you are photographing from somewhere that experiences only a partial eclipse, the filter stays on throughout the event. There is no safe totality phase during which it can be removed.

A Note About Solar Filters

If you’re planning to photograph the partial solar eclipse, this is one piece of equipment you should not improvise.

A standard neutral density (ND) filter, even a very strong one, is not a safe substitute for a dedicated solar filter. For every partial phase of a solar eclipse, your lens should be fitted with a certified solar filter designed specifically for solar photography.

Many photographers use filters made from Baader AstroSolar Safety Film (OD 5.0) or commercially manufactured glass solar filters from reputable manufacturers. Whatever you choose, make sure it is designed for photographing the Sun, fits securely over the front of your lens, and is free from damage before you begin.

The good news is that none of this applies to the partial lunar eclipse. The Moon can be photographed exactly as you would on any other night, simply adjusting your exposure as it becomes darker while passing through the Earth’s shadow.

This is the one part of the lesson where improvisation is not creative. It is simply dangerous.

The safety rules are the part nobody should have to pay to read. They matter too much, particularly with a solar eclipse, and getting them wrong can damage both your eyesight and your equipment.

The rest of the lesson is where we move from simply pointing a camera at the sky to planning an actual photograph.

For paid subscribers, we will look at how to place the eclipse beside a landmark, how tools such as PhotoPills, PlanIt Pro and The Photographer’s Ephemeris can help you choose the right position, which camera settings provide a sensible starting point, how solar and lunar eclipse photography differ, and how to avoid the most common technical and compositional mistakes.

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At first I expected to stop at the obvious images. The cathedral. The harbour. The mountain viewpoint that had appeared in every guidebook before I left.

Instead, I found myself lingering over completely different photographs.

There was one of a tiny café where we’d escaped a sudden downpour. Another showed nothing more than a table with two cups of coffee, a folded map and a pair of sunglasses. I smiled at a photograph of an old gentleman reading his newspaper outside his favourite bar, even though I couldn’t tell you the name of the street anymore.

None of those photographs would ever win a competition.

None of them were taken because I thought they were particularly clever.

Yet they brought the holiday back to life far more vividly than the famous landmarks ever could.

I could almost hear the conversations again. I remembered the smell of fresh bread drifting from a nearby bakery, the church bells marking the hour and the waiter who insisted that we try one more local wine before leaving.

That’s when something occurred to me.

We don’t remember our holidays in the same way we usually photograph them.

Most people come home with hundreds of photographs proving where they went.

Very few come home with photographs that remind them what it felt like to be there.

It’s an understandable mistake.

When we arrive somewhere new, we’re naturally drawn to the famous sights. We photograph them because they’re beautiful, because we’ve travelled a long way to see them and because, if we’re honest, everyone else is photographing them too.

There’s absolutely nothing wrong with that.

If it’s your first visit to Venice, Paris or Prague, of course you should photograph the places you’ve dreamed of seeing.

I’d do exactly the same.

The problem begins when that’s all we photograph.

A holiday is never just a collection of monuments.

It’s the train journey where the family opposite wouldn’t stop laughing.

It’s breakfast on the first morning while everyone is still deciding what to do.

It’s getting lost down a side street and discovering that it was more interesting than the attraction you were looking for.

It’s the market trader who insists you taste the fruit before buying it, the musician playing to an audience of three people, the last walk through the city before heading to the airport, knowing you’ll probably never see that particular evening again.

Those are the moments that quietly become memories.

And yet they’re often the moments we never think to photograph.

Over the past two weeks we’ve talked about learning to see and learning to make the most of the camera you already own.

This final lesson is about bringing those two ideas together.

Because a successful holiday album isn’t the one with the most photographs.

It’s the one that still tells the story of your journey years after you’ve forgotten the names of the streets.

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If you’ve been following this series from the beginning, thank you.

Over the past two weeks we’ve explored how to slow down, observe more carefully and make the most of the camera you already own. I hope you’ve already noticed a difference in the way you approach photography.

Everything up to this point has been about changing the way you see.

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week One

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• The Photograph You Nearly Didn’t Take and Downloadable Guide

Beyond the paywall we’ll look at something just as important: how to build a collection of photographs that brings a journey back to life long after the suitcase has been unpacked.

We’ll explore why the photographs between the landmarks often become the most valuable, how to recognise the small moments that most people walk past, and why editing is one of the most creative parts of photography, not simply the final chore when you get home.

As always, there’s a practical assignment, this week’s final Red Pen challenge and one last surprise for paid subscribers.

When the series ends, I’ll also send paid subscribers a downloadable Practical Field Guide containing all fifteen Notes from these three weeks, carefully edited and designed to become something you can take with you on your next trip. Think of it as a companion rather than a book: fifteen practical exercises that you can dip into whenever you need inspiration or a reminder to slow down and really look.

So, if you’re ready, let’s spend one final lesson learning how to make photographs that don’t simply remind you where you travelled.

Let’s make photographs that remind you how it felt to be there.

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I’ll bring the experience I’ve gained at Getty Images as a photographer and Editor, looking at what works, what could be improved, and what might make each image stronger.

It is not a competition or a ranking.

The aim is to learn, exchange ideas, and develop our photography together.

For this edition, I will review 10 photos submitted by paid subscribers, plus 1 photo from a free subscriber.

If fewer than 10 paid submissions are received, I will include additional photos from free subscribers.

The Dropbox submission link and instructions are available below the paywall.

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Then you opened the file properly and felt the disappointment. Not bad exactly. Flat. The subject didn’t separate from the background. The light seemed weaker than you remembered. Things that looked distinct in front of you had collapsed into each other on screen.

Most people blame the camera at this point. The lens lacks character, the sensor lacks range, the file needs more contrast. Sometimes that’s true. Usually it isn’t. Most flat photographs were flat before the shutter was pressed. The problem is rarely image quality. It’s separation.

The eye is not a camera

Your eyes never see a scene as one frozen rectangle. They move, adjust to brightness, shift focus between near and far, and your brain stitches all of it together with memory and peripheral awareness into something that feels whole and dimensional.

A photograph does none of that. It flattens a three-dimensional scene onto a surface. Near and far objects suddenly sit beside each other. Colours that looked different in life become the same tone in the file. A subject can merge with something metres behind it, and the camera won’t object.

So the depth has to be built on purpose. The camera records what’s there. Whether the relationships in that scene stay visible is entirely up to you.

Soft light isn’t the enemy

Photographers blame flat light constantly, and the explanation is usually too easy. Soft light can produce real depth. Hard light can produce a mess. What matters isn’t drama, it’s whether the light describes the subject. Does it separate one surface from another? Does it reveal shape and guide the eye toward what counts?

A face lit straight on from the camera position can be perfectly exposed and completely lifeless, because both sides of the face get almost the same light. Move that light to the side, or move yourself around it, and the face suddenly has structure. The same logic runs through buildings, streets, landscapes, anything with form.

Light builds depth when it creates variation. One side comes forward, another falls back, texture appears, edges sharpen. “Look for good light” is half the advice. The better question is what the light is actually doing to your subject.

Separation is not the same as blur

A lot of photographers have been taught that separation means a wide aperture and a soft background. That’s one version of it, and often the least interesting one.

You can separate a subject through brightness, darkness, colour, contrast, scale, position, gesture, direction, timing, or empty space around it. A dark coat against a bright wall separates cleanly at f/8. The same person against a dark doorway can vanish at f/1.4, background blur and all.

Shallow depth of field doesn’t fix a bad tonal relationship. It can simplify a background, but it can’t invent visual order that wasn’t there. What matters is whether the subject holds a distinct position in the frame, not how much of the frame is out of focus.

When nothing is more important than anything else

Flatness often comes from a missing hierarchy. Everything in the frame is equally sharp, equally bright, equally loud, and the viewer has no reason to look anywhere in particular.

This isn’t purely a composition issue. Exposure, timing, and lens choice all decide how strongly each part of the image competes for attention. A bright shape at the edge of the frame can beat your subject for attention. A pale wall can overpower a face. A patch of sky can pull the eye clean away from the moment you actually cared about.

The camera has no opinion about any of this. It records everything with the same indifference. Deciding what matters is your job, not the sensor’s.

Recording versus constructing

A flat photograph usually comes from recording a scene exactly as you found it. A stronger one comes from constructing the relationships inside that scene. That doesn’t mean staging anything or inventing what happened. It means changing where you stand, waiting a beat, reframing, or exposing with more intent.

Sometimes it takes almost nothing. Move half a metre left and the subject clears the doorway behind them. Drop the camera and the figure now reads against open sky instead of clutter. Wait two seconds and the light finds one face in a group and leaves the rest in shadow. Step in and an irrelevant object in the foreground disappears from the frame entirely.

The scene hasn’t really changed. The structure of the photograph has. That’s the real difference between photographers who are recording and photographers who are working.

Below the paywall, I’ll walk through the five most common ways depth gets lost in a photograph, why pushing contrast and clarity usually makes a flat image harsher rather than deeper, and a simple exercise to train your eye to spot separation before you press the shutter.

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The August Red Pen

Submissions for the new August Red Pen will open on Saturday.

This month, I will select photographs from 10 paid subscribers and one free subscriber.

The aim is not simply to say whether a photograph works. We will examine why it works, where the visual structure weakens, and what could have been changed at the moment of exposure.

Paid subscribers will receive the submission details on Saturday. The free place will also be announced then.

The Red Pen is one of the most practical parts of this publication because photographic ideas become far clearer when we apply them to real images rather than discussing them only in theory.

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We haven’t even started photographing, and someone is already apologising.

“I’m afraid my camera isn’t very good.”

Sometimes it’s a phone.

Sometimes it’s an older DSLR.

Occasionally it’s a compact camera that’s travelled the world but now looks rather dated beside the latest mirrorless models.

Then, almost inevitably, somebody else arrives carrying a camera bag that looks heavy enough to need its own airline ticket.

Several camera bodies.

Three or four lenses.

Perhaps a tripod attached to the side.

The assumption is obvious.

Better equipment must lead to better photographs.

It’s an understandable way to think because that’s exactly what the camera industry has encouraged us to believe for years. Every new release promises sharper images, faster autofocus, better low-light performance and features we didn’t know we needed until yesterday.

There’s nothing wrong with enjoying good equipment. I certainly do. Cameras are wonderful tools and, after forty years behind one, I still appreciate beautifully made gear.

But here’s something I’ve noticed after teaching hundreds of photographers.

By lunchtime, the person carrying the oldest camera is often making the most interesting photographs.

Not because the camera is special.

Because the photographer has stopped worrying about it.

Instead of constantly changing lenses or checking menus, they’re watching people, noticing the light and waiting for moments to develop.

Their attention is in the right place.

That’s the real advantage.

The truth is that almost every camera made in the last few years is capable of producing photographs that most of us could only dream about twenty years ago. Even today’s phones are astonishingly good in the right conditions.

The question isn’t whether your camera is good enough.

The question is whether you know how to get the best from it.

That’s what this lesson is about.

Not memorising technical specifications.

Not learning dozens of menu options.

Simply understanding a few principles that will allow you to make stronger photographs with whatever camera you already own.

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If you enjoyed the first lesson, thank you for coming back.

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Everything you’ve read so far is intended to set the scene. From this point onwards we’ll roll up our sleeves and become practical.

We’ll look at how different cameras see the world, why moving your feet often changes a photograph more than changing your lens, how to recognise the kind of light that makes almost any camera shine, and the small number of controls that are genuinely worth understanding before your next trip.

As always, there will be a practical assignment at the end of the lesson together with a new Red Pen exercise, both designed to get you out photographing rather than simply reading about photography.

And next week we’ll reach the final stage of our journey.

Seeing is the first step.

Learning to use your camera with confidence is the second.

The last piece of the puzzle is learning how to tell a story.

We’ll explore why some holiday photographs become treasured memories while others remain isolated snapshots, and how a handful of thoughtfully connected images can capture an experience far better than hundreds of unrelated frames ever could.

If that sounds like a journey you’d like to continue, I’d be delighted to have you with me for the rest of the course.

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At the end of the three weeks, paid subscribers will also receive a downloadable practical guide bringing together all fifteen Notes from the series.

It will be designed as something you can keep on your phone, tablet or laptop while travelling, with each exercise presented clearly so you can return to it whenever you need a little direction or inspiration.

Rather than simply collecting the Notes in one document, I want it to feel like a compact field guide: practical, easy to use, and useful long after the series has finished.

The three main lessons will give you the ideas. The guide will help you put them into practice.

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This edition is particularly rich in photographs and commentary, so your email provider may shorten or cut off part of it. If that happens, simply choose “View entire message” or open the article in the app or on the website to enjoy the complete gallery.

The Red Pen is not about declaring a photograph right or wrong. Think of it as sitting together over a collection of prints, tracing the lines that guide our eyes, noticing the light, gestures and small decisions that give an image its voice. The red marks are invitations to look again—and perhaps to discover something we missed the first time.

Lake Ontario — The Shape of Joy

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A child runs through the shallows of Lake Ontario, caught somewhere between one step and the next. The open arms, flying droplets and completely unguarded smile give the photograph its energy, while the pale horizon and generous sky create a beautiful sense of freedom around her.

What draws me into the frame

The great strength of this photograph is its spontaneity. Nothing feels directed or overly controlled. Daniela has captured the instant when movement, expression and water all come alive together.

The black-and-white treatment helps us concentrate on gesture rather than colour. Our attention goes directly to the child’s expression, the shape of her body and the sparkling trail of water around her. The quiet horizon provides just enough structure to hold all that movement in place.

I particularly like the amount of open space above the figure. It gives the moment room to breathe and makes the child appear to be moving through a much larger world. That space is not empty; it is part of the emotional language of the photograph.

A few ideas to explore

The brightest areas are very close to pure white, especially in the sky and on the water. This contributes to the dreamy, high-key feeling, so I would not want to lose it. However, recovering a small amount of highlight detail might introduce a little more softness and tonal texture. The key word here is small—too much recovery could take away the luminous atmosphere that makes the photograph distinctive.

A little selective work around the face could also help. Gently lifting the shadows or adding subtle local contrast around the eyes and smile would guide us toward the expression without making the adjustment visible. The hair and droplets could receive a similar touch of restrained contrast to make their textures sparkle.

It might also be interesting to test two different crops. The original, with its generous sky, feels poetic and expansive. A second, slightly tighter version could place more emphasis on the physical movement and the interaction between the child and the water. Neither would be more “correct”; they would simply tell different versions of the same story.

For future photographs of this kind, experimenting with shutter speed could produce fascinating variations. A faster shutter would freeze each droplet into a tiny point of light. A slightly slower one would allow the hands, feet and water to carry a trace of motion, creating an even more impressionistic feeling.

The lesson behind the frame

Technical perfection is not what gives this photograph its life. Its real value lies in recognising the moment and responding quickly enough to preserve it. Exposure, cropping and tonal balance can all be reconsidered afterwards. The expression cannot.

Daniela has captured something wonderfully difficult to manufacture: the feeling of a person who has momentarily forgotten the camera is there.

Washington, D.C. — When Architecture Begins to Move

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At first glance, this appears to be a photograph of a staircase. Stay with it a little longer, however, and the structure begins to behave like something else entirely: a fan opening, a deck of cards being spread across a table, or a sequence of wings preparing to move.

What draws me into the frame

David’s low viewpoint transforms a functional architectural feature into an abstract composition. The steps radiate from the lower-left corner, growing larger as they travel across the frame. That repeated geometry creates a powerful visual rhythm and gives the still structure an unexpected feeling of motion.

A second diagonal runs above it. The small ceiling lights recede into the distance, pulling the eye in the opposite direction. These two systems—the solid, luminous steps below and the delicate trail of lights above—hold the composition together.

The warmth of the wood is equally important. Without its grain and amber colour, the image might feel purely mathematical. The visible texture makes it tactile; we can almost imagine running a hand across the surface. Deep surrounding shadows isolate the staircase and allow its edges to appear almost illuminated.

A few ideas to explore

The central darkness contributes greatly to the photograph’s drama and mystery. Even so, selectively lifting a small amount of shadow detail could reveal more of the surrounding structure and add another layer of depth. This would work best as a local adjustment rather than a general brightening—the darkest areas should remain dark enough to preserve the theatrical atmosphere.

The brightest stair edges are visually compelling, but a slight reduction in their highlights could allow more of the wood texture to remain visible. A little restrained dodging and burning might help guide the eye from the lower-left origin through the expanding fan of steps.

The green cast around the ceiling lights creates an interesting contrast with the warm wood. David could choose either to preserve that colour tension or reduce the green slightly for a more unified palette. Both are valid interpretations: one emphasizes the artificial lighting of the space, while the other makes the composition feel more sculptural.

A black-and-white version would also make an interesting companion—not as a replacement, but as an experiment. Removing the amber and green would leave us with pure line, repetition, light and shadow. Comparing the two versions could reveal how much of the photograph’s effect comes from geometry and how much comes from colour.

The lesson behind the frame

Architecture does not need to be photographed as a complete building. Sometimes its character is found in a fragment, an unusual viewpoint or the relationship between two lines.

David’s photograph reminds us to change our physical position before pressing the shutter. Looking upward from close to the ground has turned an ordinary passage through a space into something monumental, rhythmic and mysterious.

Puerto Rico — A Portrait Built Against the Sky

Photograph by @Douglas Long

There is an immediate sense of theatre in this portrait. The rock becomes a natural pedestal, the tropical foliage forms part of the set, and the enormous blue sky gives the figure room to command the frame.

What draws me into the image

Douglas’s low viewpoint is the foundation of the photograph. By placing the camera beneath the model, he gives the pose stature and confidence. The result feels closer to a fashion campaign than a conventional environmental portrait.

The pose itself is carefully constructed. The supporting arm, rising torso and bent legs form a strong triangular shape. Triangles bring stability to a composition, but here the asymmetry prevents that stability from becoming static. The raised arm and tilted head continue the movement upward into the sky.

Colour is another major strength. The floral garment connects naturally with the surrounding vegetation, while the brilliant red shoes separate themselves from the greens and blues. Those shoes do more than complete the wardrobe: they act as a visual full stop. Their colour is echoed by smaller warm accents throughout the fabric, making the palette feel connected rather than accidental.

The photograph also succeeds through texture. Smooth fabric, glossy shoes, sharp foliage, soft clouds and weathered stone each respond differently to the light. That variety gives the image a physical, tactile quality.

A few ideas to explore

The large rock establishes the low viewpoint and makes the figure feel elevated. A slightly tighter crop from the bottom could create an alternative version with a more immediate fashion emphasis. The original feels monumental and environmental; the tighter interpretation would place greater attention on the pose, garment and shoes.

Because the raised arm shades part of the face, a very subtle local lift around the eyes and cheek could give the expression a little more presence. This should remain restrained—the sculptural shadow is part of the pose and should not be removed entirely.

The foliage behind the dress shares some similar greens and floral shapes with the garment. A small reduction in background clarity, saturation or brightness could create a touch more separation while preserving the tropical setting. If recreating the image on location, a wider aperture or slightly greater distance between the model and foliage could achieve a similar effect optically.

The red shoes are deliberately bold. Selectively controlling their brightest highlights could retain more surface detail without diminishing their role as the image’s strongest colour accent.

It would also be interesting to experiment with the balance between ambient light and fill light. Slightly softer fill could maintain detail in the clothing while producing gentler transitions across the face and skin.

The lesson behind the frame

A successful environmental portrait does not merely place someone in a location. It creates a relationship between the figure and that location.

Douglas has used viewpoint, pose, colour and texture to make the landscape participate in the fashion story. The sky becomes a backdrop, the rock becomes a stage, and the foliage becomes an extension of the garment. That transformation is where the photograph finds its confidence.

Nice — The Geometry of a Shared Afternoon

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A game of pétanque beside the Mediterranean becomes a small study of concentration, companionship and ritual. Nothing here feels arranged, yet every figure seems to have found a natural place within the frame.

What draws me into the photograph

The expressive release gesture gives the image its centre of gravity. Around it, the other players become a chorus of attention. Their gazes, stances and small differences in posture tell us that everyone is participating—even those who remain completely still.

This is where Joan’s photograph moves beyond simple documentation. It is not merely a picture of someone throwing a boule; it is a picture of a group sharing the same suspended moment.

The figures form an irregular line across the middle of the frame. Their hats, clothing and spacing give each person a distinct visual identity, while the solitary figure on the right provides an important counterweight. He is separated from the main group but remains connected through his attention to the game.

The long foreground shadows are another gift. They extend the players’ presence into the empty lane and draw us toward the action. The low curb on the right creates a second strong diagonal, quietly directing the eye toward the boule.

Behind everything, the pale beach, sea and distant boats establish a wonderfully specific sense of place. The high-key treatment makes the background feel almost weightless, allowing the human activity to carry the photograph.

A few ideas to explore

The luminous sea contributes greatly to the airy Mediterranean atmosphere. Recovering a small amount of highlight detail could reveal a little more separation between water, horizon and sky. The adjustment should be gentle; allowing the background to remain bright is part of what gives the image its distinctive mood.

A subtle increase in local contrast around the active player and the boule could strengthen the visual connection between gesture and destination. Selective dodging and burning would be preferable to increasing contrast across the entire photograph, which might make the beach and foreground feel unnecessarily heavy.

The chairs and coats on the right add social context: they suggest that this is a familiar gathering place rather than an isolated sporting event. An alternative crop could remove a small amount from that edge for a cleaner, more classical composition. The original tells a broader environmental story, while the tighter version would concentrate more strongly on the players.

If returning to a similar scene, it could be rewarding to photograph a short sequence rather than a single frame. One exposure might capture the throwing gesture; another the group’s reaction; and a third the moment everyone walks forward to inspect the result. Street photography often becomes richer when we stay after the apparent climax.

The lesson behind the frame

The decisive moment is not always a dramatic event. Sometimes it is a small gesture surrounded by several quiet reactions.

Joan has recognised that the real subject is not only the player or the boule—it is the network of attention connecting everyone in the scene. That shared attention is what turns an ordinary afternoon game into a human story.

San Miguel de Allende — A Street Lit by Memory

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The street appears almost empty, but it does not feel abandoned. Two walkers and a dog move through the pools of lamplight, surrounded by old facades, reflective stone and the deep silence of the night.

What draws me into the photograph

John has built the composition around a beautiful guiding curve. The left curb begins near the bottom of the frame and travels steadily toward the distant lights. On the opposite side, the narrow pavement creates a second boundary. Together, these lines turn the street into a visual corridor.

The lamps provide rhythm. Each pool of light repeats the one before it, becoming smaller and closer together as the street recedes. This repetition gives the image a pulse and strengthens the illusion of depth.

The figures arrive at exactly the right scale. They are small enough to allow the architecture to remain powerful, yet large enough to introduce narrative. Without them, this would be an atmospheric architectural study. With them—and especially with the dog—it becomes a lived moment. We begin to wonder where they have been, where they are going and why they are out at this hour.

The cobblestones are another essential part of the picture. Their irregular surfaces catch fragments of light, preventing the lower half of the frame from becoming a single dark mass. Those reflections give the street texture and make the night feel almost tangible.

Black and white is particularly effective here. Colour might have separated the various lamps and facades, but monochrome brings them into one visual world of light, shadow and form.

A few ideas to explore

The deep shadows are central to the photograph’s mystery. A gentle local lift in the left-side midtones could reveal slightly more architectural texture without making the scene appear brighter overall. The goal would be to suggest what is hidden, not explain everything.

The nearest lamp at the upper right is considerably brighter than the others. Selectively reducing its highlight could keep the eye from lingering there and encourage a smoother journey toward the distant vanishing point.

A small amount of dodging along selected cobblestone reflections could reinforce the curve of the road. Burning a few less important bright patches might also simplify the rhythm. These should remain invisible adjustments—the street must still feel naturally illuminated.

When photographing similar night scenes, it can be useful to establish the architectural composition first and then wait for a human element to enter the right pool of light. Several frames may be required. The ideal moment often occurs when the figures are separated from one another and their silhouettes remain distinct, as they do here.

Bracketing one darker and one lighter exposure can also provide useful options. The darker frame protects the lamps, while the lighter one records facade detail. Even if the final photograph uses only one exposure, the comparison helps identify the most expressive tonal balance.

The lesson behind the frame

Night photography is not about making darkness disappear. It is about deciding how much darkness the story needs.

John has allowed the shadows to remain mysterious while using curves, repetition and small reflections to guide us through them. The result feels less like a record of a street and more like a scene remembered after walking home.

One Gaze in a Room Full of Stories

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This is the kind of photograph that refuses to reveal itself all at once. At first, we see a crowd. Then individual gestures begin to emerge: someone eating, someone checking a phone, two people leaning toward one another, a face caught in reflection—and one man looking directly back at us.

What draws me into the photograph

The direct gaze is the image’s anchor. In a scene filled with movement, colour and overlapping bodies, that moment of eye contact gives us somewhere to begin. The man is not positioned in the geometric centre, but he becomes the psychological centre of the frame.

From there, the mirrors send the eye in several directions. They divide the space into panels, repeat figures and allow foreground and background to occupy the same visual plane. The result has an almost Cubist quality: several viewpoints and moments appear to coexist.

Repeated dark hats help organize the complexity. One appears at the lower left, another dominates the centre foreground, and others are distributed through the reflected crowd. These recurring shapes create rhythm and quietly stitch the different layers together.

Colour performs a similar function. The blue garments move through the middle of the composition, while red jackets and smaller warm details punctuate the right side. Those accents prevent the neutral interior and dark clothing from blending into an undifferentiated mass.

Most importantly, the frame feels alive. Each person appears absorbed in a separate activity. No single gesture explains the whole scene, yet together they create a convincing portrait of public life.

A few ideas to explore

A slightly tighter crop from the right could make the direct gaze even more immediate and reduce the visual weight of the partially seen figure at the edge. The original preserves the full density of the room; the tighter version would give the photograph a clearer central hierarchy.

A small amount of selective contrast around the anchor face could strengthen the eye contact without making it look artificially emphasized. Slightly reducing contrast or clarity in the nearest foreground figures might create additional separation between the viewer, the foreground and the reflected scene.

The bright blue and red garments are useful compositional accents. If they begin to compete with the faces, a modest reduction in saturation—applied selectively rather than globally—could keep their structural role while allowing the human expressions to remain primary.

Busy photographs reward careful attention to the edges. Before pressing the shutter, or when selecting between similar frames, it helps to check whether partial figures and bright shapes at the borders contribute energy or pull attention away. The goal is not necessarily to remove complexity, but to make every piece of complexity feel intentional.

When working with mirrors, a tiny change in camera position can transform the entire arrangement. Moving a few centimetres left, right, higher or lower can separate overlapping heads, reveal a new gesture or place a reflection inside a cleaner panel.

The lesson behind the frame

A crowded scene does not need to be simplified into emptiness. It needs an anchor.

Maurice has found that anchor in a single gaze and allowed the rest of the room to remain wonderfully complicated. The photograph succeeds because it reflects the experience of being inside a crowd: many lives unfolding at once, with one brief moment of recognition passing between photographer and subject.

The Weight of Ornament

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Everything in this portrait is elaborate—the feathered hat, flowers, jewellery, patterned fabric and gloves—yet the moment itself feels remarkably quiet. The model’s lowered gaze pulls the image inward, creating a compelling contrast between theatrical appearance and private expression.

What draws me into the portrait

The expression is the emotional centre of the photograph. Rather than presenting the costume directly to us, the model seems momentarily absorbed in another thought. That downward gaze introduces ambiguity and gives the portrait its narrative tension.

Above the face, the hat and feathers create a commanding silhouette. Their scale gives the composition grandeur, while the sweeping curve of the feathers prevents the upper half from feeling rigid. The dark hat also provides essential tonal separation from the light hair and face.

From there, the eye follows a graceful path. The hair descends along the left side of the face, the flower stems continue the movement through the centre, and the gloved hands bring it to rest near the bottom of the frame. This creates an elegant S-shaped flow through an otherwise extremely detailed composition.

The hands are particularly important. Their calm placement anchors the styling and gives the flowers a believable physical presence. Without that gesture, the costume might dominate the person. With it, the flowers become part of a private action.

Black and white allows the many materials to speak through texture rather than colour. Silk, feathers, hair, pearls, flowers and patterned fabric each reflect light differently. The photograph rewards close looking because another detail seems to appear every few seconds.

A few ideas to explore

The strong local contrast brings extraordinary definition to the costume and accessories. On the face, however, a slightly gentler treatment could create smoother tonal transitions while retaining the portrait’s dramatic character. This could be achieved selectively by reducing clarity or texture on the skin rather than applying general smoothing.

The brightest strands of hair and jewellery compete slightly with the eyes. Subtle burning in a few of those highlights could preserve their texture while returning attention to the expression.

The flowers sit against a similarly detailed section of the garment. A small local adjustment—perhaps lifting the flowers by a fraction or darkening the fabric immediately behind them—could create clearer separation without making the lighting appear artificial.

The textured area near the right edge contributes atmosphere, but gently reducing its contrast could help the feather silhouette remain cleaner. This is another adjustment best made locally; the portrait benefits from retaining some environmental texture.

For photographers working with elaborate styling, it helps to establish a visual hierarchy before shooting. Decide what viewers should notice first, second and third. Here, the ideal sequence is expression, silhouette, hands and then costume detail. Lighting and post-production can support that sequence by giving the highest local contrast to the most important elements.

The lesson behind the frame

When a portrait contains many beautiful details, the solution is not necessarily to simplify the styling. It is to give the eye a path through it.

Nick has found that path through expression, flowing lines and gesture. The costume creates spectacle, but the lowered gaze gives the photograph its soul.

Pamplona — The Bar as a Small Stage

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At first glance, this is a straightforward photograph of a neighbourhood bar. Look a little longer, however, and the facade begins to resemble a carefully arranged stage: an empty bench on the left, a glowing serving window at the centre and two men seated in conversation on the right.

What draws me into the photograph

Paul’s straight-on viewpoint is essential to the image. By photographing the facade almost squarely, he allows its horizontal and vertical lines to create a stable framework. Against that structure, the people and their gestures provide the life.

The serving window acts as a frame within the frame. Its dark border isolates the warm interior, drawing us toward the workers, food, bottles and small movements taking place inside. The window becomes a miniature theatre set into the larger facade.

There is also a lovely balance between absence and presence. The long empty bench occupies the left side, while the seated pair fills the right. The bench suggests that people have been there before—or may arrive at any moment. It gives the photograph a quiet sense of time beyond the instant recorded.

The two men introduce a second story. One faces us while the other turns away, allowing their conversation to remain private. Their placement keeps the scene observational rather than intrusive.

The worn stone, crest, painted sign and large lettering across the canopy establish a vivid sense of place. These details are not merely decoration; they tell us about the age, personality and daily use of the building.

A few ideas to explore

The warm serving window is the natural visual centre. Slightly lowering the cooler highlights around the seated figure on the right could strengthen that hierarchy and encourage the eye to return more quickly to the interior activity.

The white shopping bags are bright and prominent. A restrained reduction in their highlights could preserve their role in the everyday story without allowing them to compete with the faces and serving window.

The image contains several different colour temperatures: warm amber light inside, muted green and stone across the facade, and cooler light on the right. These contrasts contribute to the documentary feeling. Selective colour balancing could make the palette more unified, but it should remain gentle enough to preserve the difference between interior warmth and exterior daylight.

A small amount of local contrast inside the serving window could clarify the workers’ gestures and strengthen the sense of activity. Increasing contrast across the entire photograph would be less effective because the worn facade benefits from its soft, weathered tonality.

It might also be interesting to return at different times of day. Early morning could emphasise preparation and solitude, while evening light might make the window glow more strongly and bring additional customers into the scene. Revisiting one facade can reveal how architecture becomes a container for changing human stories.

The lesson behind the frame

A good street photograph does not always depend on a dramatic gesture. Sometimes it comes from recognising balance within an ordinary place.

Paul has allowed the facade to provide the structure and waited for everyday life to complete it. The empty bench, busy window and seated pair give us three different states—waiting, working and talking—contained within a single frame.

A Pause in the Rain

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A solitary figure pauses beneath a translucent umbrella, caught between the bright, rain-washed street and the dark wooden facade. We do not know what has attracted their attention, but that uncertainty is precisely what gives the photograph its quiet pull.

What draws me into the photograph

The umbrella is the immediate visual anchor. Its luminous curved form emerges from the complicated urban background with remarkable clarity. Droplets and streaks across its surface tell us about the weather before we even notice the reflections on the road.

Beneath it, the figure becomes a strong silhouette. The profile, backpack and still posture give us enough information to imagine a story without explaining it completely. Perhaps the person is reading something, looking through a window or simply deciding where to go next. The photograph leaves that question open.

The bright road markings provide a natural path into the frame. They begin near the bottom edge and travel directly toward the figure, while the narrow curb continues beyond them into the street. These lines give the vertical composition depth and prevent the subject from feeling isolated against a flat background.

On the right, the dark wooden facade occupies a substantial part of the image. Far from being empty or excessive, it acts as a tonal counterweight to the luminous street. The figure stands at the boundary between those two worlds: light and darkness, movement and stillness, public street and private interior.

Black and white brings these relationships together. Colour might have introduced additional information, but monochrome allows shape, light, texture and atmosphere to carry the story.

A few ideas to explore

The silhouette is one of the photograph’s strengths. Recovering only a whisper of detail in the backpack and coat could add tactile information while preserving the graphic shape. A local shadow adjustment would work better than lifting the overall exposure.

The upper background contains some very bright areas. Gently recovering those highlights could reveal slightly more architectural detail and help the umbrella retain its position as the brightest meaningful element.

A small amount of selective contrast on the umbrella’s droplets could emphasize the rain texture. Care would be needed around its outer edge, where too much sharpening might create an artificial halo.

The dark facade is compositionally valuable, but there may be several possible tonal interpretations. Keeping it almost black produces the strongest graphic contrast. Lifting its wooden texture slightly would create a more descriptive, environmental version. Comparing both treatments could help determine whether mystery or place should dominate.

Rainy scenes often change from one second to the next. When photographing a similar situation, it can be worth holding the composition and waiting for subtle variations: a turn of the head, a raised hand, a passing reflection or a gust changing the umbrella’s angle. Small gestures can create very different narratives within the same frame.

The lesson behind the frame

Atmosphere is not created by weather alone. It comes from the relationship between weather, light, setting and human behaviour.

Stephen has recognised that the most interesting moment is not the person walking through the rain, but the moment they stop. That pause transforms a familiar street scene into a question—and gives the viewer space to supply the answer.

Chain Bridge, Budapest — Light, Rhythm and Reflection

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What draws me into this frame is the way the evening light gives the bridge both strength and warmth. The illuminated tower becomes a natural anchor, while the suspension cables carry the eye gracefully across the city.

Below, the calm Danube repeats the architecture and golden colour, creating a quieter version of the scene above. Sky, city, bridge and reflection work together in layers, giving the photograph depth and a powerful sense of place.

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Until the Red Pen Returns

Thank you to every photographer who trusted me with an image, and to everyone who paused long enough to look, consider and join the conversation.

The Red Pen will be back very shortly. In fact, it will return in a new form as part of our upcoming Holiday Photography series, where we will explore how to find stronger light, more meaningful moments and better stories in the photographs we make while travelling.

Until then, keep looking beyond the obvious, and keep chasing the photograph that only you can see.

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These days, though, AI detectors often confuse human quirks for machine writing, so I want to explain how I really write. I do not have any problem in disclosing it.

The Englist-Italian Accent (In Text Form)

I speak and write in five languages, and honestly? I don’t write any of them correctly.

My first language is Italian, but having lived across Switzerland, France, Slovenia, Hungary, and spending over twenty years in the UK, my brain is a walking border crossing.

In the photography world, I tend to think entirely in Engl(ish-Ital)ian—a wonderful linguistic soup where grammar rules are treated more like gentle suggestions.

Because of this:

• My sentences wander.

• I use way more commas than I probably should.

• My prepositions occasionally sound a bit eccentric to native speakers.

• My writing sounds almost identical to how I actually speak.

My Toolset: Grammarly, ChatGPT, Claude and Gemini

However, to translate that chaotic, multilingual stream of consciousness into proper, readable English, I use a mix of Grammarly, ChatGPT, and Gemini. They help me polish, clear out the clutter, and make sure my thoughts land the way I intend them to.

So, Do AI Detectors and Think I’m a Robot?

Oh, absolutely YES. The AI detectors will find me guilty every single time.

Between my wandering punctuation, my continental cadence, and the occasional digital polish from an LLM, any automated detector is going to throw its hands up and sound the alarm.

And honestly? I do not see the problem at all and cannot care less!

AI is just a tool, no different than a spellchecker, a lens hood, or a sturdy pair of walking shoes.

The words carry my accent, my life experiences, and my voice. If an algorithm wants to call a multilingual photographer a robot for using every tool available to tell a good story, it’s missing the point entirely.

When it comes to ideas, I don’t need any help from AI. If anything, I have the opposite problem of writer’s block. After thirty years of Getty assignments, mornings spent in Prague, Budapest, and Transylvania, and thousands of hours teaching photography, I have more stories than I can use.

No machine can know what it’s like to stand in a freezing Slovenian field waiting for the right light, or to carry the marks of thirty years in photojournalism.

I don’t write white papers. I write the way I’d talk to you at a café, about light, travel, and the mistakes I’ve made. If something I write feels a bit messy or too warm, that’s not a flaw.

That’s just me.

So no, there were no language models involved in writing this. It’s just me, my keyboard, and a lot of coffee.

PS

A quick note on the sheer irony of it all: Pangram—an actual AI company—pretending it can reliably “detect” AI.

Meanwhile, Substack literally lets you click a button to generate AI images and photos to drop straight into your articles.

Wow. That pretty much says it all, doesn’t it?

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We haven’t even picked up a camera yet. We’re sitting outside with a coffee, getting to know each other, and sooner or later somebody asks a question about equipment.

“Should I use Aperture Priority?” “Do you always shoot in Manual?” “Would this be better with my phone or my camera?”

They’re perfectly reasonable questions. After all, that’s what photography books and YouTube channels spend most of their time talking about. Cameras, settings and lenses are easy to explain, easy to compare and, if we’re honest, much easier to sell than patience or observation.

My answer usually surprises people.

“I promise we’ll talk about cameras. But not yet.”

Then I ask them a question instead.

“Tell me about your last holiday. How many photographs did you take?”

The answer is almost always the same. Hundreds. Sometimes well over a thousand.

Then comes the second question.

“And how many of those photographs do you still look at today?”

That usually produces a smile, sometimes an embarrassed laugh, because deep down everyone already knows the answer. Very few.

Not because the holiday wasn’t memorable. Quite the opposite. They remember the little restaurant they found by accident, the waiter who insisted they try the local wine, the evening when it suddenly started raining and everyone squeezed under the same awning laughing. They remember the conversations, the smells, the heat, the unexpected moments no guidebook could have planned.

The photographs often tell a much less interesting story. Page after page of famous buildings, beautiful views and picturesque streets. Perfectly sharp. Correctly exposed. Pleasant enough to look at for a few seconds. Yet six months later they all begin to blur into one another.

If that sounds familiar, let me reassure you. You almost certainly don’t have a camera problem. You have an observation problem.

Please don’t take that as criticism. In fact, I think it’s inevitable. Most of us learned photography backwards. We learned where the buttons are before we learned where to look. We spent hours comparing cameras before anyone suggested standing still for another five minutes.

That’s hardly surprising. Cameras come with instruction manuals. Seeing doesn’t.

Over the years I’ve watched this happen hundreds of times during workshops. Ten people stand together in exactly the same place. The light is identical. The weather is identical. Often the cameras aren’t very different either.

When we stop for lunch and look through everyone’s photographs, they might as well have been in different countries. One person has photographed a church. Another has photographed the little girl chasing pigeons across the square in front of it. Someone else noticed the reflection in a puddle after the morning rain.

None of those photographs happened because somebody knew more about shutter speed. They happened because one person noticed something the others walked straight past.

That’s what I want to change over the next three weeks. Not your camera. Not your settings. The way you look.

Because once that changes, everything else becomes much easier.

If you’ve enjoyed reading this far, you’ve only seen the introduction. Everything up to this point has been about why so many holiday photographs fail to capture what we actually experienced. Beyond the paywall, we move from ideas to practice.

I’ll show you exactly how I approach a new place before I ever lift the camera, the questions I ask myself that help me see photographs others walk past, and the simple habits that have transformed my own photography over the years. You’ll also find a practical assignment you can try immediately, this week’s Red Pen challenge, and exercises that will prepare you for the next lesson.

This series has been designed to build week by week. Each lesson lays the foundations for the next, so if you’re serious about returning from your next holiday with photographs you’ll genuinely treasure, I hope you’ll join me for the rest of the journey.

If you’ve enjoyed reading this far, you’ve only seen the introduction.

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week One This One

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week Two

• Photograph Your Holiday Better in 3 Weeks - Week Three.

• The Photograph You Nearly Didn’t Take and Downloadable Guide

Everything up to this point has been about why so many holiday photographs fail to capture what we actually experienced. Beyond the paywall, we move from ideas to practice.

I’ll show you exactly how I approach a new place before I ever lift the camera, the questions I ask myself to see photographs others walk past, and the habits that have transformed my own photography over the years. You’ll also find a practical assignment, this week’s Red Pen challenge, and exercises to prepare you for the next lesson.

Each of the three lessons builds on the one before it, so I hope you’ll join me for the rest of the journey.

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That’s the frustrating part. Most flat photographs are not bad photographs. They’re competent. The camera has done exactly what it was designed to do. The problem is that competence, by itself, has never been enough to make someone stop and look twice.

Over the years I’ve watched photographers replace cameras, upgrade lenses and convince themselves that the next purchase would somehow unlock better photographs. Occasionally new equipment solves a genuine limitation, but much more often the real problem has nothing to do with what’s hanging around your neck. It has everything to do with how you’re looking at the world before the camera ever reaches your eye.

I see this almost every week in Venice. I’ll spend an hour walking the same streets with one or two photographers, stopping in the same places, working with the same light and watching the same people pass by. By the end of the session every memory card contains completely different photographs. Some are pleasant records of beautiful streets. Others have something that makes you linger for another second. The interesting part is that it is almost never the equipment that separates them, and very rarely technical ability.

The difference is usually much simpler.

Some photographers photograph the street.

Others notice something happening inside it.

At first those sound like the same thing, but they aren’t.

Seeing is automatic. We turn a corner and absorb everything at once: the buildings, the reflections, the tourists, the cafés, the boats, the pigeons, the noise and the movement. The eye is extraordinarily efficient at taking in an entire scene.

Noticing is much more selective. It’s the moment one small part of that scene quietly separates itself from everything around it. Perhaps it’s a hand resting on a railing just a little tighter than it needs to. Perhaps it’s two strangers, walking in opposite directions, who happen to mirror each other’s posture for the briefest instant. Sometimes it’s nothing more than a patch of light that suddenly gives an ordinary figure a completely different presence.

The street hasn’t changed.

Your attention has.

And I suspect that’s where photography really begins.

Behind the paywall, I’ll look at the three habits that make the biggest difference to street photography: where you stand, when you press the shutter, and the simple question I ask before raising the camera. I’ll also share a short field exercise you can try on your next walk to train your eye to notice more and shoot with greater intention.

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Few street photography older articles

• Street Photography for the Shy

• Street Photography: Before You Raise the Camera

• Mastering Zone Focusing for Street Photography

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A few honest answers.

Instagram is a rented room. The algorithm decides who sees your work, that decision changes without notice, and none of your followers are actually yours, they belong to the platform. On Substack, if a hundred people subscribe to you, a hundred people get your work in their inbox. No algorithm decides whether today’s post is worth showing them.

A caption is not a place to think. Substack gives you room to write what actually happened on a shoot, why an image matters to you, what you were trying to do and whether it worked. For anyone who shoots because they think in images and want to think in words too, that space doesn’t exist anywhere else in the same form.

Instagram compresses everything, literally and otherwise. Your images get flattened in quality and your thinking gets flattened into a caption’s worth of space. Neither serves the work.

It’s not about money. Most people on Substack, photographers included, never charge for anything. The value is having one place that’s actually yours, an archive that doesn’t vanish under a feed, doesn’t compete with a hundred unrelated posts for attention, and isn’t subject to a platform’s next policy change.

And it’s quieter. No follower count on display, no like button training you to chase a number. Just people who chose, specifically, to keep reading you.

You don’t need an audience of thousands or a business plan to get something out of that. You need one honest reason to write, and a place that won’t bury it by tomorrow.

Why listen to me on this

I’ve spent over thirty-five years behind a camera, and a good part of that on the other side of the desk too, as an assignment editor at Getty Images and Corbis and many other outlets, deciding what got published and what didn’t. I know what a working photographer’s relationship with a platform actually looks like from both directions.

None of that is why I’m writing this piece. I’m writing it because I’ve spent the past year treating my own Substack the way I used to treat an assignment, tracking what actually gets read, what gets restacked, what converts a stranger into a subscriber and what just sits there.

In that first year: seven thousand followers, fifty-three hundred subscribers, hundreds of them paid, more than forty thousand page views a month. None of that happened by posting and hoping. It happened by testing three distinct Note formats against real numbers, observing which pieces actually converted a reader into a subscriber, and raising prices only after the value behind them had already been proven.

I’m not telling you what should work. I’m telling you what did.

None of what follows requires chasing those numbers. The fundamentals are identical whether you want thousands of subscribers or forty people who found you through one photograph they couldn’t stop looking at. And most photographers, regardless of what they’re chasing, get the fundamentals wrong before they ever find out what they’re capable of pulling in.

A few weeks ago I looked up a photographer I know on Substack. Good eye, real career, work I respect. His profile had no bio. No mention of what he shoots, or that he shoots at all. Just a name, an avatar that could belong to anyone, and a Subscribe button asking me to commit to something I couldn’t identify. He could have been a novelist. A dog breeder. Nothing on the page told me otherwise.

This is not a rare case. It is close to the default. Most photographers arrive on Substack, set up an account in ten minutes, publish a few pieces, and never go back to finish the job. The result is a storefront with the lights on and the sign missing.

Part of this is habit. Instagram trained an entire generation of photographers to think of an online presence as a grid. Post the work, let the image carry the message, keep the words to a caption. Substack asks for the opposite. Here the words are not decoration around the image. They are the structure the image lives inside. Your bio is not a formality under a handle. Your About page is not a CV nobody reads. They are the first pitch a stranger sees before they decide whether to give you their inbox, which is a far more valuable thing to be given than a follow.

None of what follows is complicated. Most of it takes an evening. The reason it stays unfinished is that photographers keep importing Instagram habits into a place that runs on different rules. So let’s go through it properly, piece by piece, the way I’d walk a friend through it before they touched Substack for the first time.

Your profile picture and name

Use a real photo of yourself, not a logo, not an illustration, not an abstract avatar. People subscribe to people, especially in a field built on trust and eye. If you shoot editorial or documentary work, a plain, well-lit portrait does more work than any graphic ever will. Use your real name in the name field, not a brand name, unless that brand already carries its own recognition. A stranger scrolling Notes should know who you are in half a second, not guess.

Your bio line

This sits under your name everywhere your profile appears: on Notes, on comments, on your About page, in search previews. Keep it under thirty words. State what you shoot, then one credibility marker, then one specific detail that makes you memorable. Something like: documentary and editorial photographer, contributor to major agencies, based between two cities you actually work in. Not a mission statement. A fact pattern a stranger can verify and remember.

Your About page

This is your pitch, not your resume. Four moves, in order. First line states what you do and why it matters, one sentence, no throat clearing. Second paragraph gives credibility: years of experience, notable clients, agencies, publications, kept to three or four lines, specific rather than vague. Third paragraph tells the reader what they get if they subscribe: what kind of writing, how often, what’s behind the paywall if anything, described in concrete terms rather than promises. Close with one clear line asking them to subscribe. Four short paragraphs. Most photographers either skip this page or turn it into a full CV. Neither converts a stranger into a reader.

Your publication name and tagline

The name should be memorable and searchable, not clever for its own sake. Avoid puns that only make sense once someone already knows your work. The tagline sits under it in previews and search results and should say plainly what the publication is. Not “thoughts and photos.” Something a stranger could type into a search bar and actually mean.

Your categories

Substack has you pick a primary and secondary category when you set up your publication. This is not a formality, it affects who finds you through browse and recommendations. Choose the category your work most clearly fits first, a secondary that reflects a genuine second angle of what you write about second. This is not permanent. Revisit it if your content shifts.

Your cover image and post images

This is where photographers usually do better than anyone else on the platform, and also where they make the most avoidable mistakes. Your publication’s cover image should be a strong, single frame that represents your eye at a glance, not a collage, not a logo. For individual posts, lead with one image that earns the click, not four competing for attention. Compress before you upload. Substack will render large files, but slow-loading images cost you readers in the first three seconds, before they’ve read a word.

If you’re publishing a photo essay format, a piece built primarily around a sequence of images with shorter text between them, keep a consistent rhythm: image, one or two paragraphs, image, rather than dumping a gallery and writing underneath it as an afterthought. Alt text matters here too, both for accessibility and because it’s one more place your work becomes searchable.

Protecting your work

You license through agencies, so this matters more for you than for a hobbyist. Substack does not offer built-in watermarking or right-click protection. If that concerns you, downsize your images to web resolution before uploading, strip identifying EXIF data if you don’t want it public, and consider a subtle signature or credit line baked into the image itself rather than relying on the platform. Full-resolution files should never leave your own systems. Substack is a publishing platform, not a delivery mechanism for licensable work.

With identity and images settled, the next question is activity.

Your first Notes

Post a handful of Notes before you expect anyone new to find your articles. Notes are shown to non-subscribers and indexed the way a feed is, which means an empty Notes history is often the first thing a curious visitor sees, and it reads as inactivity. You don’t need a strategy yet, you need presence. A short craft observation, a quick opinion, a line from a shoot. Get five or six up before worrying about frequency or format.

Your recommendations

Follow and recommend five to ten publications that sit near your niche: other photographers, visual culture writers, adjacent crafts. This is not just generosity, it’s how Substack’s internal discovery starts connecting your publication to relevant readers. A profile that recommends nothing looks disconnected from the platform, and it gets treated that way.

Your archive before you launch

Have two or three posts live before you promote the publication anywhere. A visitor who clicks through and finds one post assumes the project just started, or already stalled. Three posts read as a publication. One reads as a test.

That covers what a stranger sees before they subscribe. What happens the moment after matters just as much.

Your welcome page and welcome email

When someone subscribes, Substack lets you customize what they see next and what lands in their inbox first. Most photographers leave this on the default. Don’t. Write a short welcome note, two or three lines, telling a new subscriber what to expect and how often. This is the only piece of writing you’re guaranteed every subscriber will see. Treat it that way.

Your paid tier, if you have one

If you’re charging, be specific about what a paid subscription actually includes, not “exclusive content,” which means nothing to a stranger. A monthly extra piece, a downloadable resource, a recurring feature like a critique or Q&A session, whatever it is, name it on your pricing page in concrete terms. A founding member tier, priced above your standard annual rate, gives your most invested readers a way to support you beyond the transaction, and costs you nothing to set up.

As your archive grows, especially across more than one kind of writing, organization becomes its own decision.

Sections, if you write about more than one thing

If your publication covers more than a single throughline- craft pieces and business pieces, for instance- Substack lets you organise content into sections so a reader can subscribe to what they actually want rather than everything. This isn’t necessary on day one. It becomes useful once you have enough of an archive that a new visitor needs a way to navigate it.

Organisation is structure. The last lever before design is more personal.

Chat and discussion threads

Substack’s chat feature and comment threads are underused by almost everyone outside the platform’s power users. You don’t need to run a chat, but enabling comments and actually replying to the first few you get costs nothing and signals that there’s a person behind the publication, not a broadcast.

Everything so far has been substance and interaction. The last piece is how it actually looks.

The website itself (Settings > Website > Theme Editor)

This is where most photographers leave the most value on the table. You have the eye already; this section rewards it directly.

Logo and wordmark: upload a real logo, minimum 256x256px, appears top-left of your publication and as your email favicon. If you don’t have a mark, your publication name in a clean font works fine, don’t force a logo that isn’t ready.

Cover photo, your welcome page: this is the first full-bleed image a brand-new visitor sees, before anything else. For a photographer, this should never be a stock image or a graphic. Use one of your own frames, the strongest single image you have, the one that says who you are before anyone reads a word. This is free real estate almost nobody in your field uses properly.

Accent colour: controls your subscribe button and link colours. Pull it from your own work rather than guessing; a tone that actually appears in your photography reads as intentional rather than decorative.

Fonts: the title and body fonts are separate choices. A serif title with a clean sans body reads editorial, which suits documentary and reportage work. Don’t touch more than title and body; more choices just introduce inconsistency.

Homepage layout: Substack offers a few layouts: list, grid, and magazine style with a featured post up top. For photographers, a grid or magazine layout with a strong hero image outperforms a plain list, since it lets the images themselves do the selling on the homepage, not just the headlines.

Hero post: you can pin one post to the top of your homepage regardless of publish date. Pin the single piece that best introduces a first time visitor to what you do, not necessarily your most recent.

One caution: design is a well known procrastination trap on Substack. Ten minutes tweaking colors and fonts is enough, the platform’s default theme is solid on its own. The real leverage is in the bio, the About page, and the first posts, not the palette.

Once the page looks the way you want it to, stop touching it and start watching what actually happens.

What to watch in the first month

Ignore the subscriber count for now, it’s the least useful number early on. Watch your open rate, which tells you whether the people who did subscribe are actually reading. Watch restacks, which tell you what’s resonating enough that someone put their own name next to it. Watch which Notes get replies versus which get scrolled past. These tell you far more about whether this is working than raw follower growth ever will.

None of this, on its own, is difficult. What’s difficult is that most photographers do two or three of these things and stop, assuming the writing alone will carry the rest. It won’t. The writing is what earns someone’s attention for five minutes. The setup is what determines whether they come back for the sixth.

An empty profile, in the middle of all this, is a closed door with a welcome mat in front of it.

Fix the door first.

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